ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th]

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Ananya Agarwal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#401

These days I am actually living for your updates. They are so cute and mushy and give me some serious feels.

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-Shilpaa-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#402

Beautiful update as always anjali😳

Please keep writing!

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alltheway

@alltheway

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Posted: 8 years ago

#403

again an amazing chapter.
shraman are so much in love.
And just loved jealous shravan.
can't wait for their night alone.
update fast.
Thanks for the pm.

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nuttynuts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#404

I'm loving this story. Can't wait for the next update!

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#405

OKAY... So sorry that I didn't comment on this one yet. Was busy and then it happened to be my birthday on the day you updated so I couldn't comment immediately after I read it. And then I got busy this week with work. 🤔

Thank you for this unexpected birthday gift 🤗 and sorry for the late comments. 😒

EEEPPPSSS! You've extended the story.. That is amazing news! I'ma sucker for your stories so any extension is always good news to me.

Absolutely loved the update Anji. ❤️

Ooohhh.. The scene where Suman walked in on Shravan whie he was changing was sooo hawt. ☺️ and super sexyyy.

"I don't think I can protect your virtue very well if I find you like this again."

^I can't believe she worded this out! 😲 ☺️

"I think the deal was to protect my virtue from other women, you've always been a danger to it. 7 years."

^A perfect reply from Shravan! 👏 😳

I love it when Aditya and Pushkar tease this poor guy. Well, they don't know the truth yet! 😆

"Why were you ignoring me?"

"You look really hot."

"With the sherwani or without?"

"That, that is exactly why I am avoiding you."

^This convo was epic! 🤣 Shravan would never stop scandalizing Sumo. 😆 I love these two. ❤️

OMG! The scene where Aditya and Pushkar tease Shravan about the pink lip mark on his cheek is hilarious! 🤣

"What?" Shravan said wiping his cheek. "Someone probably had make up on their hand or something." He murmured.

"Hm, and it just happened to touch your cheek." Aditya nodded.

"In the shape of a lip mark." Pushkar added.

"In the exact same shade that Suman was wearing." Aditya grinned.

^EPIC. 🤣

Ooohh... Shravan has som plans for them... I'm loving it. ❤️

Continue super duper soon my girl.

Love you.. ❤️ 🤗 Sorry for the late comments. 😳

~ Mrina <3

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 8 years ago

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seabeauty

@seabeauty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#406

this is wonderful story.. loved it... plz update once every week

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astonm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#407

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Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#408

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Oh oh me first.. 😃
*****
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Woah...tht was damn damn hot n damn sexy...fanning myself..
The upii was beyond any praises...literally it was tht much spectecular.

Sumans curiosity was shoo adorable..n tht line"cuz someone was being a passenger seat driver"..made me ROFL.
the data n the date inspiration was mindblowing.Romantic shravan is gem❤️
After tht their makeout session was outstanding
Their popcorn fight tickling fight n cake sharing fight made me awe...

The most hilarious part as Aditiya n Pushkar sneaking around vandyz house at 2 am... 🤣 more over thy got busted...God n only u knw who caught thm red handed.. 🤣

Thn our beloved shraman wokeup in eachother embrace...as thy always wished for..n thn their teasing game started..which was initiated by shravan ended up being flusteredup himself tht was sumthng i wud love to give a highfie tto u n our sumo obviously... 😆

All in all loved it to the core..it was like a treat for me..u did a tremendous job..hats off man.
n han thnks for the pm 😉

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago