ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th]

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Ishq-high

@Ishq-high

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Posted: 8 years ago

#391

awww

your updates always manage to make my heart swell with happiness

so adorable especially jealous Shravan

and that shirtless scene...Hot!

fab update as always

and i'm glad there are more parts to the story

thank you for the pm

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Faith28

@Faith28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#392

This was sooo adorable...just loved loved it😳

You write so well...the dialogues were spot on👍🏼 loved the bedroom scene☺️ The bromance is awesome... The ever dramatic pushky n aditya were cuties...for a CHANGE this preeti is not so dumb after all😆 Romantic encounters at secluded places...mmm...im liking it that they keeping it a secret...let it stay like that for a while😉 And a very cute jealous shravan with lipstick mark on cheek🤣❤️ Cant wait to know what SURPRISE Mr. Malhotra has planned😉

Thanks for the pm😊

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Roshni2015

@Roshni2015

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Posted: 8 years ago

#393

Anjali,

U r super amazing girl..

What an amazing update... Loving this story absolutely...

🤗

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#394

Anjali..It's a treat this ss is turning into ff..
Superb update dear..
Sumo and shirtless shra ..
Adi and Pushkar..lol these two are Damn good and I always love readung their parts..Damn funny..
Shra jealous..wow Mr. Malhotra is tensed as his ff marriage talks are on.he is such a baby. 😆
Finally the adi Pushkar and shra part I love ..
Adi teasing am interested in shra not in Pushkar..hume toh kabse pta hai.. 🤣
Pink ..suspect..one..with motive..that was Damn funny and good.. 🤣
Surprise interesting..
Love it anjali..❤️
Thnx for pm dear.

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#395

Superb update dear..
thank you for...
Sumo and shirtless shravan ..
Adi and Pushkar.. these two..Damn funny..
jealous Shravan...😉
thank you for PM...😊
sorry for late comments...

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 8 years ago

#396

Amazing part😊

lovedd ttt😊

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aachal20

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Posted: 8 years ago

#397

superb update.loved it.plz update fast dear

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donottulip

@donottulip

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Posted: 8 years ago

#398

First of all , Vandy bhabhi is just SO cute.

I loved how disappointed she feels when she finds out ShraMan cant dance. It's so cute 🤣

And Push-kar !

I know I said that before but that bit was just brilliant ! 🤣

I love Aditya in this one ,mann , such a cutieee.

And then Pushkar Aditya being so gay and irritating Shravan xD

Love your Preeti too. Atleast iske paas toh brains hai.

ShraMan slowly being intimate , that spark of electricity , them being SO aware of each other , Him staring at her ❤️

And the best part , him being jealous , it was just so cute !

Do update soon , I always tell you , but let me tell you again , I wait for your updates

Also , going to be MIA from this forum for a while , couple of weeks or 3 weeks , max , asli duniya demands.

Hope you are doung good at med schoool 😃

A HUGEE hug for this chapter. ❤️

Gob bless you Anjali x

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donottulip

@donottulip

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Posted: 8 years ago

#399

Oh and I completely forgot , love the secrecy.

And the lipstick mark , ahaaan , way to go Shravan beta 🤣

Also , I remember in the begining you used to have hindi dialogues , and then you stopped and stuck to english , prolly coz you felt you were not executing it properly or whatever , but seriously , your dialogues were spot on , it made me feel like I was watching all this.

Sooo , could you please drop in a few hindi dialogues here and there ?

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

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Posted: 8 years ago

#400

Anjali <3

This was a beautiful update.
Shravan being his cute self.
Such a baby <3
The way he keeps reminding her of 7 years wait .
How cute :D
Only Sumo can handle him though.

Pushkar and Aditya- The most adorable and an annoying duo.
Preeti is smart , eh ?
Loving them.

No aunty in a loud pink saree can take your Sumo away Shravan.

-God bless

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