ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th]

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Ishq-high

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

oh man all the feels

you writing makes me so happy..which is much needed seeing the current episodes

just rejuvenates my soul

so adorable esp loved the jealousy bits and then that cute cuddling in jail scene...i just wish some day (soon) we get to watch such scenes on the show

brilliant as always

thnx for pm

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Anjali..amazing awesome superb fabulous Sab kuch..
Love it..❤️

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preciousruby

@preciousruby

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Love your updates..

you just weave magic !!

Take a bow... keep up the great work !!

haha.. out of all the places they end up in jail handcuffed, cuddling and enjoying the together time..

Can't wait for the next part.. thanks for the PM..

your SSs were such a respite, a life saver from what was going on in the serial the past week.. i took a break in between for a week.. was tired of the misunderstandings and the way cvs was butchering the characters.. killed me to see shravan in so much pain.. just started watching back from today :) used to read the written update.. may be will catch up on the missed episodes too shortly :)

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Faith28

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Too cute and romantic...typical Shraman☺️ Waiting for next update

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.SardiKiDhoop.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

All this fluff is definitely helping me deal with the angst as well! While the current track is definitely keeping us all on our toes and Namik and Nikita have been performing brilliantly, I REALLY miss that old comfort level and all their fun masti from the earlier episodes.

This chapter was so fun! Loved reading about them being jealous, especially Pushkar's observations - you write him SO well. The protective side of Shravan was really sweet as well, from accompanying her to the bazaar to yelling at the cop. And that end bit was so adorable <33

Can't wait to read more and see how Pushkar clears up the mess!

Edited by .SardiKiDhoop. - 9 years ago

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Flibbertigibbet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

*dreamy eyes* such beautiful writing! Your updates are the ample showers in the drought! I loved it so kich imma read it again. Many hearts and hugs to you!

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vrushali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Both chapters were awesome 👍🏼
I just loved tht jail scene ❤️

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PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

I am so happy seeing the response to this SS😃😃

I Loved loved this chapter!!

So much ShraMan!!! 😃😃

I especially loved reading how Shravan was eating the halwa, to how he ended up eating it!😳 Yeh Pushkar bhi nah!!! Really knows how to tease his bhaiyya!!

Shravan's reaction on learning that guys were after her and him asking Pushkar for the details, Pushkar's ambiguous answers, Sumo's questions to Shravan regarding his dating life and his reaction to her esp in the question about the girl in the photo, all was a delight to read!!!

I loved how Shravan noticed that Sumo had worn something different!! Like he NOTICES it!! Also, asking her about her hair length!! And that rhetorical question bit!!!😆 How the heck did they end up in jail???😆 Anyway, romance to wahin pe bhi jaadi hai boss😉😆

Man, Anjali, I Loved every bit of this!! Only I wished you would not have ended it where you did, now that is really unfair!!!

You updated this chapter before I could comment on the last one, means I really need to up my game😳😆

Thanks for the PM!!!😃😃

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an_chau

@an_chau

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Lovely as always, Anjali! Thanks for the pm...

So many sweet little bits: Loved Sumo's drama in the police jeep, reminded me of the "Pushpa sequence" during the Khosla kaand... 😆 Shravan choking on the halwa and then pumping Pushkar for info, pushkar catching Sumo sitting on Shravan's lap in the cell 😆...

The story's building up damn well!

About your intro to this chapter: I can't see ShraMan in a circumstantial marriage... that takes away so much from these two characters... UGH!

And what the hell has happened to Pushkar???