ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th] - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago
Perfect. sumo is having a lot of fun.
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Posted: 8 years ago
This is so good👏

Just the fluff I needed ATM to tide over the tension in the show.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mangalpur track was my fvrt Nd d best track qh1

Loved d chapter. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fabulous update
Pushkar is making Shravan and Suman jealous and their feelings are so transparent anyone could tell that they love each other
The whole jail scene was hilarious
Couldn't stop laughing
And it was making them close
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
This was so good. A well needed break from the serious time of the show. Great going Anjali!! Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome...
thank you for the wonderful update...
thanx for PM
❤️ it

Edited by arshuaar - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Anjali you are asya lover I am also they are adorable
Superb chapter dear
Poor shraman both were arrested without any crime 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loving this Anjali..
And fluff is the need of the hour 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG! Anjiii... New story!!! I'm dancing with joy! 😃

Fluff + Anjali = Absolute Gorgeousness ❤️

Coming to the concept, it is perfect and suits ShraMan beautifully... Yes, even I'm pissed off with the current track. Poor babies are crying day in and day out!

Chapter 1

Pushkar is so adorbs! 😳 That guy and the way he teases Suman is so cute! 😆 I'm loving the way you've portrayed Tiwaris and Malhotras as family friends and Priya, Nirmala and Kamini being friends.. it was nice reading it. 😃

Awww... Shravan came to meet her as soon as he landed. 😳 WHY IS THIS MAN SO PERFECT! And yes, a total bhukkad! 🤣 And as usual.. Sumo had to fight. 🤔 Well, let's go on to the next one.

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Chapter 2

Priya and Sumo's convo was so lovely.. 😊 The way she was making Sumo understand was so sweet. And again.. Mr. Pushkar is here! 😆 It's so easy for him to tell if there is something wrong between the 2 of them coz he is seen both of them together for so many years. 😆

"For Bhaiyaa?"

^I swear, when I read this I can actually hear Pushkar mocking and funny voice! 🤣

GAH.. Shravan is back for good! 😃 🥳 And the usual, Suman walking in on Shravan... may be she could have run faster and seen something more than the clothes on Shravan. ☺️ 🤣

That HUG! 🤗 {Please can I have one too ☺️ OKAY, BYE.}
And finally everything is sorted! *sigh of relief* That gift was perfect. And ummm... someone's blushing and someone's already liking it. 😉

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Chapter 3

I think this man and food go hand in hand! 😆 Bhukkad.😛 Loved the way Pushkar was trying to make his bhaiyaa jealous! 😉 He is so protective of her and i love love love that fact. ❤️

Finally they spoke about what was eating up their mind. Both are waiting for the other one to initiate I suppose.. 😳

The Chor Bazaar started with a slight intimacy and then went on to full on madness.. Hilarious! 🤣 Totally had the AsYa Mangalpur feels. 🤣 ☺️

Pushkar is not gonna spare them and it is gonna be a treat for me to read him tease these two. 😆

Thank you for writing this Anji... 🤗 Continue soon. 😃

P.S.: I'm so so sorry that I haven't got onto "Meant To Be". I have been reading everything on the go nowadays that I forget about it everytime I log in. I promise I will read it... just dunno when. May be I have to take out time separately and put a reminder on my phone! 🤔

ILY. ❤️

~ Mrina <3
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow
amazing update
absolutely loved it
superb
continue soon

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