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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Simply beautiful ...
Absolutely loved reading it ..❤️

yeah, no matter how miffed he is with her .. he wont allow anyone else to point finger at her ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Missed you soup !!
Seeing your post is like a celebration in itself !! :) 🤗
Beautiful post and apt title !! Loved how you described Shravan and Sumo's feelings and thoughts..
Also your take on Shravan's concerns and action in the end. Did not think about it like that.. This reminded me of the time when Sumo went above and beyond to take care that Shravan doesn't get hurt to know she made the Dal with his mom's recipe..
It seems like tables have turned now.. haha.. Previously Shravan was avoiding her and she had no clue kab, kyun, kaise.. and now Sumo is doing the same for different reasons..

Its really painful to see them like this.. I know this is required for the story to move ahead..
i guess the misery / patience is reaching the limits for most of us cos its going on since so long from when
- Shravan started avoiding Sumo when he realized he was falling for her again
- Just when he was ready to confess - Nirmala stuff happened which created more misunderstandings
- Went on till Sumo met with an accident but then she was miffed with Shravan
- Until chachi cleared the MU but then Ramnath made his move - still going on and now the new entry angle.. excited to see what's in store and how the cvs handle it..

Although both of them are shown to love & care for each other, r always there for each-other really miss their banter, bonding n together time...

Thanks for the PM :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

What a beautifully written post!

And thumbs up for Shravan's POV in the end
A wonderful job by the writers in bringing depth to it!

Exactly all my feelings right now, you've penned it well!
And thank God! Someone does feel positive about Aditya, I thought I was the only one :)
I really wish he does something
That spark is needed to ignite things at the moment
With Kamini in tow, it'll be easy!😆

Love
Mahi

PS - I wanted to highlight Shravan's thoughtfulness and emotions over it but couldn't. Thank you for this!
Plus, I'm afraid with the way Suman told she'll never tell her feelings to him :(


Thanx, Mahi.😳
I like the idea of Aditya..In fact, had wanted it to be Ahuja's son ever since I knew he existed. 😆 Though I had wanted him to confront Shravan over Nirmala mostly.
I am trusting the Cvs here to handle it well.

Interesting juncture, the story is at.
That pot hole covers up Shravan's motive pretty well.
As for Sumo, I like how they are mirroring each other now. Weeks before, Suman noticed Shravan eyeing her even as he was feigning a don't care attitude...Now it is Shravan's turn to look for signs. These two! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Beautiful lines 👏
Bang on post!!! 👍🏼


Thank U.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: shalz_123

Thank u for writing this...n thank u for understanding n highlighting both Sumo and Shravan's POV...

U won my heart...brilliant piece


Thank You for the sweet words.
These two are such real sweethearts! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Wow!!!!

👏👏
This was beautiful!!!!
I cannot get enough words to praise you...this was brilliant.


Thank You, dear.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: --BLRbabe--

Simply beautiful ...

Absolutely loved reading it ..❤️

yeah, no matter how miffed he is with her .. he wont allow anyone else to point finger at her ..


Precisely.
Isn't that what real friendship is about. You are there to point out the mistakes...but you will protect them for the very same mistakes. ❤️

Thank You..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Chick 🤗
Long time again.
Beautiful. Sumo I know you know her but you expressed shravan equally beautifully. I feel so bad for these two. I don't mean to rush CVs but Hope they end this track soon enough so this heavy feeling is lightened.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: preciousruby

Missed you soup !!

Seeing your post is like a celebration in itself !! :) 🤗
Beautiful post and apt title !! Loved how you described Shravan and Sumo's feelings and thoughts..
Also your take on Shravan's concerns and action in the end. Did not think about it like that.. This reminded me of the time when Sumo went above and beyond to take care that Shravan doesn't get hurt to know she made the Dal with his mom's recipe..
It seems like tables have turned now.. haha.. Previously Shravan was avoiding her and she had no clue kab, kyun, kaise.. and now Sumo is doing the same for different reasons..

Its really painful to see them like this.. I know this is required for the story to move ahead..
i guess the misery / patience is reaching the limits for most of us cos its going on since so long from when
- Shravan started avoiding Sumo when he realized he was falling for her again
- Just when he was ready to confess - Nirmala stuff happened which created more misunderstandings
- Went on till Sumo met with an accident but then she was miffed with Shravan
- Until chachi cleared the MU but then Ramnath made his move - still going on and now the new entry angle.. excited to see what's in store and how the cvs handle it..

Although both of them are shown to love & care for each other, r always there for each-other really miss their banter, bonding n together time...

Thanks for the PM :)


Thanx, Ruby. ❤️

These two are delightful to watch, even if it is painful to see them like this.
Like you said, the tables have turned..From what I wrote to Mahi-

'As for Sumo, I like how they are mirroring each other now. Weeks before, Suman noticed Shravan eyeing her even as he was feigning a don't care attitude...Now it is Shravan's turn to look for signs. '

Miss their bonding- Yes. But yesterday was beautiful in so many ways. Glad they can hold up the intensity even with the continued negativity.👏




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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: noexcuse

Chick 🤗
Long time again.
Beautiful. Sumo I know you know her but you expressed shravan equally beautifully. I feel so bad for these two. I don't mean to rush CVs but Hope they end this track soon enough so this heavy feeling is lightened.


Thank you, dear.

The story has reached a point where I see them as an extension of each other. Now they both know and accept how they themselves hurt when the other person does...what they do with that knowledge...how they handle that with the family pressures...Loving this phase where Shraman takes baby steps in the world of understanding each other. ❤️

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