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Posted: 9 years ago
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Suman:

They said I was not made for you.

That I was just wrong for you.

Had you led me to believe it was not so, I could have argued.

But this was someone you trusted...valued...above me.

Hence I had nothing to prove that this thing called love existed between us.

I fought myself; I fought your attempts to befriend me...

For when I was asked to choose between Love and Duty, I had to.

Would Love hold it against me, that I had to deny myself.

Jab kismet ne apna faisla suna hi diya hai,

When Fate has announced its verdict...

Why do circumstances rebel to tempt me more and more?

This is a battle within me, one I think I have control over...

Yet...

I cannot ward off the smile our memories bring me,

Or the comfort your care offers...

For now, all I know is...

You wouldn't believe me if I told you what went wrong'.

Shravan:

They say you are like my mother...

That you'd leave me half way through...

The evidence is compelling...

It is hammered into my head every now and then.

Like hell, I care...

When I realise...

That my whole life has been a journey towards you.

Differences, Opinions, Promises...

What do they matter when I have you before me.

When I have you in my arms...

Melting along with me...

An abrupt interruption...

A hurried departure...

A returned gift...

Hurt doesn't describe one tenth of what I feel.

Imperfect, Unbendable, Independent...

Whatever they call you!

When you are the only one to fill the void,

Can I just say...

All I want is you in my life...

Don't deny me.



PS:

The forum seems to be by and large upset over the new entry. Hope this track will be handled smoothly.😊

Besides the dance, what I loved about this episode is Shravan's concern that led him to book the hall. More than his ego or his aunt's...it was his inability to see Chachi fry her again that led him to it. It was a genuinely sweet gesture...kudos to the writers for the pothole scene and justifying Shravan's actions. 👏 (Though if Suman were to feel slighted, I would fully feel for her too, since she doesn't know Shravan's intentions.)

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LIKEDMG thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice..but I feel crying to read it.. 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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For that verse, Chick, SALUTE!!! 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LIKEDMG

nice..but I feel crying to read it.. 😭


Thanks.

Yes. These two make us feel heavy hearted a lot. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: an_chau

For that verse, Chick, SALUTE!!! 👏


Thank U, dear. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What a beautifully written post!
And thumbs up for Shravan's POV in the end
A wonderful job by the writers in bringing depth to it!

Exactly all my feelings right now, you've penned it well!
And thank God! Someone does feel positive about Aditya, I thought I was the only one :)
I really wish he does something
That spark is needed to ignite things at the moment
With Kamini in tow, it'll be easy!😆

Love
Mahi

PS - I wanted to highlight Shravan's thoughtfulness and emotions over it but couldn't. Thank you for this!
Plus, I'm afraid with the way Suman told she'll never tell her feelings to him :(
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup



Thanks.

Yes. These two make us feel heavy hearted a lot.😉



What u added that means a lot..Shravan is there for Sumo no means she likes /dislikes it or ignore him..I always love this shravan..sensible..loving..caring..intelligent...passionate...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful lines 👏
Bang on post!!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u for writing this...n thank u for understanding n highlighting both Sumo and Shravan's POV...
U won my heart...brilliant piece
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!!!!
👏👏
This was beautiful!!!!
I cannot get enough words to praise you...this was brilliant.

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