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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Beautiful lines, Love reading your posts :)
I dunno why are people panicking over the new guy's entry! I'm damn sure this is heading towards something big!
I'm a little disappointed with the pace of the show currently, but I know it will be worth it :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I was just thinking about this song...tu jaane an from the movie ajab prem ke gazab kahani. It's so apt for shraman


bataayein, kyun tujhko chahe, yaara bataa na paaye.
Baatein dilo ki, dekho jo baaki, aankhein tujhe samjhaye.
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na
Milke bhi, hum na mile, tum se na jaane kyun. meelon ke, hai faasle, tum se na jaane kyun. anjaane, hai silsile, tum se na jaane kyun. sapne hai, palkon tale, tum se na jaane kyun.ooo ooo..
Kaise bataayein, kyun tujhko chahe, yaara bataa na paaye.
Baatein dilo ki, dekho jo baaki, aankhein tujhe samjhaye.
Tu jaane naa..aaa... tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane naaa...

Nigahon mein dekho meri, jo hai bas gayaaa..
Woh hai milta tumse hubahuu..
Ooo, jaane teri aankhein thi ya, baatein thi wajaaa..
Hue tum jo dil ki aarzoo...
Tum paas ho ke bhi, tum aas ho ke bhiii, ehsaas ho kee bhi, apne nahi...

Aise hain, humko gile, tumse na jaane kyun.
Meelon ke, hain faasle, tum se na jaane kyun.ooo...
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na

Ooo jaane na jaane na jaane na .. aaa tu jaane na ..
Khayalon mein, lakhon baatein yun tu keh gaya...
Bola kuch na tere samne...
Ooo, huea na be-gaane bhi tum hoke haar kein...
Dekho tum na mere hi bane.
Afsos hota hai, dil bhi yeh rota hai, sapne sanjota hai, pagla hua...

Soche ye, hum the mile, tumse na jaane kyun.
Meelon ke, hain faasle, tum se na jaane kyun.
Anjaane, hai silsale, tum se na jaane kyun.

Sapne hain, palkon tale, tum se na jaane kyun.uuu...
Kaise bataayein, kyun tujhko chahe, yaara bataa na paaye.
Baatein dilo ki, dekho jo baaki, aankhein tujhe samjhaye.
Tu jaane naa.. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaaane na...
Edited by Aquarist1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Beautuful write up chicksoup ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Brilliant post,Chick

So good to have you back!🤗

Absolutely loved the way you described Shravan and Suman's thoughts here. And also Shravan concern and action, in the end, is beautifully explained.

Well, I am not worried about Aditya's entry. He is definitely going to serve a purpose here just like Khosla, Verma and others. It will be interesting to see how they take this forward.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Chick u have written so brilliantly here... The lines, take a bow dear..
Beautifully penned emotions of both Shrav n Sumo... Loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

What a beautifully written post!

And thumbs up for Shravan's POV in the end
A wonderful job by the writers in bringing depth to it!

Exactly all my feelings right now, you've penned it well!
And thank God! Someone does feel positive about Aditya, I thought I was the only one :)
I really wish he does something
That spark is needed to ignite things at the moment
With Kamini in tow, it'll be easy!😆

Love
Mahi

PS - I wanted to highlight Shravan's thoughtfulness and emotions over it but couldn't. Thank you for this!
Plus, I'm afraid with the way Suman told she'll never tell her feelings to him :(


I am.also positive about aditya.. The show's name is edkv so Sharman are meant to be... Initially i was a bit disappointed with the new guy dancing with sumo but then i thought about.shravan loosing it seeing sumo with someone else.. He is gonna be a gel kukkad... Kya patha he will corner her and pour his heart out...
Edited by spnfan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
wonderful awesome
so beautifully penned down
lovely
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: .Jas.

Beautiful lines, Love reading your posts :)

I dunno why are people panicking over the new guy's entry! I'm damn sure this is heading towards something big!
I'm a little disappointed with the pace of the show currently, but I know it will be worth it :)

Thank You. The new entry is a good twist, IMO too.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Aquarist1

I was just thinking about this song...tu jaane an from the movie ajab prem ke gazab kahani. It's so apt for shraman


bataayein, kyun tujhko chahe, yaara bataa na paaye.
Baatein dilo ki, dekho jo baaki, aankhein tujhe samjhaye.
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na
Milke bhi, hum na mile, tum se na jaane kyun. meelon ke, hai faasle, tum se na jaane kyun. anjaane, hai silsile, tum se na jaane kyun. sapne hai, palkon tale, tum se na jaane kyun.ooo ooo..
Kaise bataayein, kyun tujhko chahe, yaara bataa na paaye.
Baatein dilo ki, dekho jo baaki, aankhein tujhe samjhaye.
Tu jaane naa..aaa... tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane naaa...

Nigahon mein dekho meri, jo hai bas gayaaa..
Woh hai milta tumse hubahuu..
Ooo, jaane teri aankhein thi ya, baatein thi wajaaa..
Hue tum jo dil ki aarzoo...
Tum paas ho ke bhi, tum aas ho ke bhiii, ehsaas ho kee bhi, apne nahi...

Aise hain, humko gile, tumse na jaane kyun.
Meelon ke, hain faasle, tum se na jaane kyun.ooo...
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na

Ooo jaane na jaane na jaane na .. aaa tu jaane na ..
Khayalon mein, lakhon baatein yun tu keh gaya...
Bola kuch na tere samne...
Ooo, huea na be-gaane bhi tum hoke haar kein...
Dekho tum na mere hi bane.
Afsos hota hai, dil bhi yeh rota hai, sapne sanjota hai, pagla hua...

Soche ye, hum the mile, tumse na jaane kyun.
Meelon ke, hain faasle, tum se na jaane kyun.
Anjaane, hai silsale, tum se na jaane kyun.

Sapne hain, palkon tale, tum se na jaane kyun.uuu...
Kaise bataayein, kyun tujhko chahe, yaara bataa na paaye.
Baatein dilo ki, dekho jo baaki, aankhein tujhe samjhaye.
Tu jaane naa.. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaaane na...


Love this song.😳
Apt for Shraman too! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Ana_mika

Brilliant post,Chick

So good to have you back!🤗

Absolutely loved the way you described Shravan and Suman's thoughts here. And also Shravan concern and action, in the end, is beautifully explained.

Well, I am not worried about Aditya's entry. He is definitely going to serve a purpose here just like Khosla, Verma and others. It will be interesting to see how they take this forward.


Thank You.

I am kind of excited about the new entry.😉

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