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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Roshni2015
Chick u have written so brilliantly here... The lines, take a bow dear..
Beautifully penned emotions of both Shrav n Sumo... Loved it..

Thank U, dear. 😳

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: bigddfan1
wonderful awesome
so beautifully penned down
lovely

Thank U. 😳

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preciousruby

@preciousruby

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Thanx, Ruby. ❤️

These two are delightful to watch, even if it is painful to see them like this.
Like you said, the tables have turned..From what I wrote to Mahi-

'As for Sumo, I like how they are mirroring each other now. Weeks before, Suman noticed Shravan eyeing her even as he was feigning a don't care attitude...Now it is Shravan's turn to look for signs. '

Miss their bonding- Yes. But yesterday was beautiful in so many ways. Glad they can hold up the intensity even with the continued negativity.👏

Indeed these two are pure bliss and a delight to watch.. 😆

No complaints as long as we get to see them...

Excited to see how Shravan picks up the signs..

I agree.. Yesterday was magical !!

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Reshma Ahmed

@Perpetuity

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Wow! Wonderfully penned down. Shravan is never going to give up on her. He just can't.

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indranigupta

@indranigupta

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Beautiful Chick

Absolutely delightful👏

So, Sumo's battles are now being etched or rather translated on Shravan's pointed queries...whats wrong? Ramnath's perceptions or opinions hardly ever matters to the son who seems more preoccupied that Sumo does not fail in the eyes of his Chachi

He is willing to help her when her eyes are closed, but what will happen when Sumo's eyes become open?

Love between the two is beautifully poised...its now time for the next chapter to begin😃

Sorry for this late reply...and such a small post...but have been very busy with college

Shall write more later

Love

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Divya

@DivI10

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Nice to see you back,, its beautiful written i feel so bad for both of them ..

whatever he done just coz of her but she still not understanding him yesterday i wish the hall matter not come out like that but it is and they again fight new entry bhi hoi let see were its go..

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M R

@rubys07

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Oh. My. God.

This is so, SO GOOD! This is like proper poetry, I'm not even kidding. All of it explains Suman and Shravan's situation so damn perfectly!

Honestly, I'm a little upset at the new entry too. Solely because I don't want to see a love triangle, even if it's one-sided. That's a cliched done-to-death track, and EDKV is too special for that. And even though I would like to see some jealousy (it's so fun😈) I don't want ShraMan to confess out of jealousy. They should confess because they want to, not because of a third guy or girl. But CVs haven't let us down so far so let's just hope for the best.

Once again, wonderful write-up. You've got a fan.

Edited by rubys07 - 9 years ago