Shraman SS: The Contract: Part (6/6) Updated Pg 13 - Complete - Page 5

Originally posted by: Nimik

Update soon plzzz

Originally posted by: sman2195

Beautifully written keep up awesome work 👏 please update soon 😉

Originally posted by: kennashreign

Read all the parts in one go. I absolutely loved it. Pls pm me once you update. Great going!!

Cheers
Kennashreign


PS: I am unable to find chapter 4. The title of the chapter on pg 5 is chapter 5. I guess there has been some typo error

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Oh thanks for updating. Yours is a refreshing story and I look forward to your updates.

This one was special as well. Pushkar and Preeti having their first fight so soon after marriage - haha - just shows they have a long way to go till they reach a comfort level like Shravan and Sumo.

I loved this dialogue"Oh yeah? What were you going to do, ask him to dance and then step on his foot?" This was hilarious !

Also favorite is this portion of the chapter which says exactly what is real

"Of course she'd insist on taking the sofa, but what did that tell him, really? Her thoughts about him were a mystery he couldn't solve, clues pointing him in every direction - she would show that she cared and would say that she didn't. She gave him the cold shoulder that meant he was just a friend, but then her eyes would darken at his touch as if she wanted to be more..."

I love your writing...please continue soon :)