Shraman SS: The Contract: Part (6/6) Updated Pg 13 - Complete

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Hi all, new to this show and this forum. Was thinking to try my hand at some Shraman fic, to add to all the great stories already here. This will most likely be 4-5 parts. Sorry if anything is incorrect or out of character, still learning. Please do let me know what you think. 😊
PS. I promise it gets better from Part 3 onwards.
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He glanced at his phone out of the corner of his eye.

Still nothing.

The same sheet of paper stared back at him, with the same sentence he had underlined a third time. Shravan sighed, unused to the lack of focus he was bringing to the case. It was a fairly straightforward contract negotiation, and he usually left the fact-finding to Pushkar or one of his associates. But these days all Pushkar thought about was his bride-to-be, and the new client had a vast business potentially worth millions in billable hours. Hence the personal Shravan Malhotra touch.

So what if all Shravan could think about was the bride's sister?

So what if his thoughts ran rampant, hope taking flight at her smallest gestures and then crashing painfully back to reality when confronted with her cold demeanor?

Her silence hurt him more than he liked to admit. He didn't know this Suman, who refused to make eye contact with him and only spoke when she was spoken to. His Sumo would have made her displeasure known to him, a matching fire burning in her words and her dark, dark eyes.

But for all her aloofness, she seemed most uncomfortable when confronted with his pain. And that was what confused him most of all.

Did his Sumo carelessly scrape his finger in her haste, or did she gently wrap a bandage around it without a word, gaze lowered despite his eyes begging her to look at him?

His phone buzzed and Shravan grabbed it, breathing in sharply at the "Sumo" on his screen, only to let out another sigh after reading her message: "Don't forget the food tasting at 2".

And then:

Sumo: Give me a ride, my car won't start

Two seconds later -

Sumo: If you can

He was already halfway through typing his response when she added, "Never mind, I will ask one of the PCT girls with a car".

Angrily, he stabbed at the delete key.

Shravan: Shut up. I will be there in 20 minutes

Shravan: BE READY

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And she was ready, clutching a binder in one hand and an umbrella in the other. He tried not to notice the light scent that lingered with her as she slid into the passenger seat, nor the long hair that looked as smooth as silk as she twisted towards the back to deposit her things.

"What is that?"

Suman looked at him as if it should have been glaringly obvious. "The menu."

He eyed the thick stack of papers. "All of that?"

"Plus some of my notes." At his raised eyebrow, she tilted her chin in defiance. "Food is one of the most important parts of a wedding."

He snorted. "Nobody remembers what they ate two days later, only whether it was enough and whether the alcohol was good."

"Maybe at your weddings," she muttered, clearly as a dig against his family.

He bit the inside of his cheek to keep from grinning.

Suman paid him no attention, staring straight at the road that lay ahead of them.

He wondered what it would bring.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was wonderfully written! Loved it to the core
Your emotions are really good! And so is your language.
Well done! If this is your first attempt, then way to go! Amazing story and continue soon😃

Cheers,
Mahi

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It's brilliant ! Do continue
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amazing start
cannot wait to read more
continue soon
superb
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Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

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This was wonderfully written! Loved it to the core
Your emotions are really good! And so is your language.
Well done! If this is your first attempt, then way to go! Amazing story and continue soon😃

Cheers,
Mahi


Thank you so much Mahi! 😳
I am a little rusty and I don't know them all that well but your encouragement is very appreciated, thanks for the kind words.

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Originally posted by: nith125

It's brilliant ! Do continue


Thank you Nith! Hope to continue soon 😊
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Originally posted by: pinky.padda

amazing start
cannot wait to read more
continue soon
superb


Thank you so much Pinky! It will get better, I promise 😳
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Superb start continue soon


Thank you Zenab! Here comes the second part...
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Part Two
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"No, on this I am not compromising."

Shravan looked expectantly at the banquet hall manager.

"Madam, please try to understand - "

"Unless the food is made to my standards, we will take our business elsewhere." Suman glanced at Shravan and he frowned, pulling himself up to his full height in an attempt to look menacing.

"But we can't have your staff in our kitchen!"

"Then you won't have our families in your hall." She stood unyielding, and he watched with amusement as the harried man was forced to agree, unable to stand a chance against Hurricane Sumo. What was it his father had said about ziddi women?

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"Bhaisaheb, on this I am not compromising."

"Chachiji - "

"No, Suman. Already the wedding is in Delhi, the hall can only dream of having five stars, I will not send my puttar to some hill station for his honeymoon."

"Kamini, nobody is sending anyone to a hill station." Ramnath pinched the bridge of his nose.

"Achcha? So why did the travel agent call me and say otherwise?" Her eyebrows knitted together in consternation.

"Papa, Chachiji is right...Pushkar and Preeti should go somewhere special."

"Thank you, Shravan beta!" She made a sweeping gesture with her hands. "Somebody in this family understands."

"Mummy ji! Mauritius!"

Suman's eyes grew wide.

Kamini shook her head. "Arre Vandy, the Mathurs went to Mauritius just last month for their anniversary." She snapped her fingers. "I know, Maldives! Pushkar has always wanted to go there."

"Wow, Mummy ji...Maldives is sooo pretty!"

Kamini noticed Suman still standing in a state of surprise. "Suman, don't worry. By then Preeti will be a Malhotra, and the entire cost of the trip will be our responsibility."

Shravan's cheeks burned at her words, but to her credit, Suman took the comment in stride. "No Chachiji, I was just thinking, Preeti has never been outside UP, let alone India..."

"Arre toh isme kya badi baat hai? Passport toh hai na uske paas?" Lalaji asked.

"Haan, lekin..."

"Lekin vekin kuch nahin," Kamini said. "Actually..." she glanced at Ramnath. "Do you have your passport, Suman?"

"Mine? Yes, but why..."

"I have a great idea...why don't you and Shravan go on the trip as well?"

"WHAT?" Ramnath exploded.

Suman and Shravan could only stare at Kamini, their mouths hanging open in shock.

Ramnath sprang to his feet. "What are you saying, Kamini? We should send them on a honeymoon?"

"Of course not, Bhaisaheb. Try to understand, a young bride going away for the first time, her family will obviously worry...and then Shravan beta and Suman are working so hard for this wedding, don't they deserve a holiday?"

"Chachiji..." Suman finally found her voice. "I appreciate the gesture, but I couldn't impose..."

"Suman puttar," Lalaji smiled. "We are all one family now." Behind him, Kamini forced a grin. "Pushkar aur Preeti kitne khush honge!"

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Bwhahahahaha...😈

I know in reality this would never be agreed to by the families, but good thing we are in the serial world 😛

BTW, what did Pushkar say when he heard of the plans?

"Bhaiya...I know I said I wanted you there for every rasam, but I didn't mean this too!"

And then he ducked as Shravan threw a pillow at him.

Thanks for all the encouragement, hope you continue to enjoy.

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