Shraman SS: The Contract: Part (6/6) Updated Pg 13 - Complete

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ShyNomad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: jazmeen
Enjoyed ur update 100 times more than the episode
Wish we would see this in edkv episode

Thank you Jazmeen...I have faith that things will get better though!

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ShyNomad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: an_chau
Nice! So we have the entry of the star - the contract :)

Yes, finally! Shravan put his lawyer skills to good use after a long time 😛

Thanks for reading!

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ShyNomad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: nileshni679
Lovely update better than the original epi.

Thank you so much 😊...I'm sure things will get better on the show soon.

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ShyNomad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Zenab78
Lovely update continue soon

Thanks Zenab, hope you like this next one!

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ShyNomad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
I am in love with this story. I love that Shravan noticed she was unhappy too, and instead of pushing and making them both miserable because they're both so stubborn, he created a contract for the few days to let it all go and just be themselves.
No going back now!

Thank you for the kind words! I wish something would make him notice that on the show, even though he is just as miserable without her.

Let's hope they don't go back, but from what? 😳

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ShyNomad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: mystique_girl
This is a wonderful story with a very different plot and a very different feel...
Instead of harping on what happened in past you have taken a bold step to write about the future of the relationship post the marriage ... part 3 has been wonderful !

Thanks so much, I am glad you liked it! Hopefully getting them away from the drama of Ramnath and company will open up their eyes a bit. Thanks for reading! 😳