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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: an_chau
What a beautiful ending to such a beautiful story... L.O.V.E it!

Thank you so very much 😳

Especially since I never know how to end these things 😆

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#92

I am the kind of person who waits till a FF is complete before I start to read it, but after reading this I felt I should have read it from the very beginning.

Two things, first about the story, the story is simple and I love its simplicity as thats what makes it so appealing. Second, the story telling, it is simply brilliant. Not a word out of place, no unnecessary dialogues and no drama and yet the story is so appealing. I felt I was sitting on a beach on a cloudy day with a cup of jasmine tea. You have a very rare writing voice, which is holding the story together and at the same time not affecting the natural flow of the characters.

I loved it. And as someone who is trying to write I know I have a lot to learn from you.

Please tell me what else you have written, would love to read it , apart from the T.K.O one I mean 😊

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Palak

@singh_palak

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Hey there.

I think I have alot to say to you.

YOU WRITE EXTREMELY WELL.

And, I suppose even that'd be an understatement.

This story was so beautifully written. Not even one thing felt unwanted or not needed or the likes.

It was just perfect.

Moreover, I'm pretty sure if it was real life, this was how it'd go sans the 'go along with your cousins to their honeymoon'.

I have no words to describe how happy it made me to have read this.

Thankyou, thankyou so much for writing this. It was fabulous.

Also, mind giving some tips over how well you write?

Seriously.

Made me want to talk to you, for real. Haha.

Good luck for future.

Write more, please. Would love to read your stuff.

Love,

Palak.

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: nith125
I am the kind of person who waits till a FF is complete before I start to read it, but after reading this I felt I should have read it from the very beginning.
Two things, first about the story, the story is simple and I love its simplicity as thats what makes it so appealing. Second, the story telling, it is simply brilliant. Not a word out of place, no unnecessary dialogues and no drama and yet the story is so appealing. I felt I was sitting on a beach on a cloudy day with a cup of jasmine tea. You have a very rare writing voice, which is holding the story together and at the same time not affecting the natural flow of the characters.

I loved it. And as someone who is trying to write I know I have a lot to learn from you.
Please tell me what else you have written, would love to read it , apart from the T.K.O one I mean 😊

Nith, you are too kind, thank you so so much! 😳

I definitely understand wanting to wait until a story is done, especially since this is a hobby we all try to find time for in our busy lives. It's tough to fall in love with a story and never see it completed, which has happened to all of us.

It means a great deal to me that you enjoyed and appreciated this so much...obviously we write for our own enjoyment but it's doubled when someone else shares their thoughts as well and it makes all the late nights worth it 😊 Also, the only reason there's no drama is because I'm terrible at it 😆 Unlike so many of the great writers we have here.

Those are my only two EDKV stories, but I have written a little for IKNMP, if you're interested PM me and I'll point you to them.

Thank you again, you totally made my day awesome ❤️

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Awesome!

Thank you (again 😃)...so glad you liked it!

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: singh_palak
Hey there.
I think I have alot to say to you.
YOU WRITE EXTREMELY WELL.
And, I suppose even that'd be an understatement.
This story was so beautifully written. Not even one thing felt unwanted or not needed or the likes.
It was just perfect.
Moreover, I'm pretty sure if it was real life, this was how it'd go sans the 'go along with your cousins to their honeymoon'.
I have no words to describe how happy it made me to have read this.
Thankyou, thankyou so much for writing this. It was fabulous.
Also, mind giving some tips over how well you write?
Seriously.
Made me want to talk to you, for real. Haha.
Good luck for future.
Write more, please. Would love to read your stuff.
Love,
Palak.

Hi there! 😊

Thank you so much Palak for the awesome feedback, it is too much but makes me just so happy 😳

I do try to keep things somewhat realistic minus the outlandish scenarios 😆 so I'm glad it rang true for you. I just started Parallel Lines so trust me - you don't need tips, your writing is very enjoyable to read and has a fantastic sense of humor.

Thanks so much again for the kind words! I look forward to reading more from you soon...it is hard to keep up with all the great stories in this forum but I will definitely be keeping an eye out for more Parallel Lines and others from you. ❤️

Nidhi

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