Game of THRONES: my first ever shraman ts epilogue updated - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: 0Bella0


Ameesha such a long comment thanks a lot dear 😳
I can understand ur crave for mythological story on them cuz I too badly wanted that but ended up writing myself when I didn't found any 🤣
Epilogue. ... I hadn't thought about that I had ended it there only but for u I promise I'll try and pm u but I need tym as I have to complete other story that I have in ma I hands
I hope you understand
And thanks again for loving my story this much it really put my spirits high 😳
😳


Yes bella i can understand thoroughly as i too have my two stories still left and im not getting time
So my readers are waiting
I can also wait for you!!
Im soo sooo glad that you're going to fulfill my wish!! Really i literally crave for mythological stories on them!
And yours was a diamond a sheer beauty seriously im in total love with this!!!
I think i should write too a mythological story on them as i really dont find any and i actually want many and yours one toh title only attracted me like a bee gets attracted towards its honey source!! Or u can say bee hive
Dobt worry i'll be waiting luv u a tonn!!! 🤗

O my
thanks a ton Ameesha
yup u shuddh write too
cuz we need some more mythological story cuz that is the only genre where shraman story wasn't written
and also I think dark one too
Don't forget to pm me
luv u dear 😊

I definitely won't!!
Whenever I'll write it I'll first pm u my Bella sweetie pie!!
But right now I'm stuck up with two stories already and one is about to launch! So I guess...right now I'm engaged and then
Exams are approaching n I too have to study hard in order to enter a prestige well off college!
You're in 12th grade?
Exams nest year right?
Me too I'm in 12th grade and tests are going on

Achha by the way if you'd like then I can give you the link of the two stories of mine currently running
One is about to end and the other one still under construction 😆
Edited by Ammiey - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Awesome. ...shraman are amazing. .poor pushkar😆

tysm dear lol yeah poor pushkar 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Ammiey

Bellaa!!

🤗
Love you soo so soo very much!!!
OMG a whole lot of epilogue dedicated to me??!! 🥳

Finally!! Like seriousllyy finalllyy epilogue came!!
I was hell waiting for this!! Thought that you might forget in between the study stress and all and I was thinking to shoot you another message another request to update an epilogue!
But then!!

You surprised me really!
An epilogue...that too this!! Beautiful!❤️

I can't say how much I loved this Bella dearie!!
Its just so much adorable!
SHRAMAN Ooohhh

The part where he was thrown out of his room and the convo between him and his soldiers 🤣
Omg just so very hilarious!! 🤣
I couldn't stop laughing
Specially when he retorted them back to do their work!! 🤣

And then the scene "what happened is your stomach hurting?? How it's going to last for nine months?" 🤣

"Men are the dumbest creature" so true!!
Bechari suman no...wait! I should say bechara shravan! 🤣

But then
There came their adorable picture!
They are just so much 'aww' to watch *dreamy sighs* ❤️

Just loved loved loveeddd that scene when she apologized and shravan gave her a tad of punishment in the form of "Love"

They are going to become parents...I'm still in a haze
Just loved the way she tried to tell him that she's pregnant that was cute! ❤️
Their first and very important step towards parenthood
And yep Suman! Our shravu is the best father the kingdom and your child could ever get! 👏
Ahem! So mr. Lambu pehele se hi day dreaming krne lag gye thay vo b khulla mein chhoot k !! Hmm...sharm nai aya pakra jaane k baad b 😆

The opening was fab! ...hmmm...the beautiful intruder haan? N that too in the handsomest king's practice room!!
Amazing! That scene was indeed intense! 👏😳

At least nine months se b toh smjh jata buddhu!! Idiot! 😆
Really dumb!

And our pushku baba!! Ohh what a speech!
Showered all on shravan with high maturity huh! 😆
Kch apne liye b bacha leta beta!!
See you also were out of your room at the middle of the night n bechare k pass toh raat bhar lautne ka koi scope b nai tha bata k bahar nikali vo that she's pregnant unlike suman's "come only when you'll realize" 🤣 that time toh when I read pushku going out with his night stuffs...I just couldn't help...couldn't hold myself any longer and burst out laughing...my little brother was watching me with a scoul on his forehead...probably thinking that "she's lost it! Definitely lost it!" 🤣😆

How could he not guess??? Man!! Shravu ko toh lamba chaura pravachan diya n situation explain krne pr turant smjh gya n the very next moment how he forgot??
Lagta hai shravu ka shaap kaam aa gya "soon you'll experience too as you too got a wife now" 😆

Kitna mazedaar and beautiful epilogue tha ye Bella!!
And you dedicated this to me!!
I'm on cloud nine!!
Seriously!
Dancing with joy! You fulfilled my wish!! Love you!❤️

Here comes a tight hug!! For you!! For this!! Present!
The tightest of all!! 🤗

Hehe now it has become a separate post I guess!!
Kya kre likha hi kch aisa hai tumne n to be honest dedicated to me
To say I'm happy would be an understatement 😳😃
Thankyou! A big one!! 🤗
Really amazing job at the ending epilogue! Which I craved literally for!👏😃

Much love! ❤️

Ameesha this long comment i m going to faint like really I will
love u too dear
thanks a lot dear
oh my jesus its like a summary to this update you described each and every scene
thanks a ton dear
i had to fulfill your wish dear
omggg this much tight hug baby leme breathe atleast 🤣
Thanks for understanding sis
THANK YOU SO MUCH AGAIN AND AGAIN FOR SUCH A LOVELY AND LONNNGGG COMMENT 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
@ameesha okay done I'll wait
nope next year my graduation will be completed and I m talking about mba entrance exams that will be held in Feb month of nxt year I need to study hard for that
and all the best for your exams too
Surely pm me the links but I really dunno when I will comment dear but I'll try to do that soonish hope you understand
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Sunain

Ressi res 😃
****
Unres

Woah...me first... 😆
Bella Bella Bella...tht was phenomenal...
trillionz of 🤗 for u..
yar u nailed it absolutely..shraman intruder talk was amazing..
n the point where he got offended regarding his beautiful wifie got me like..aaawwwhh..
I also want a hubby like him infact yah bhi chalay ga..nhi nhi dooray ga 😳
Suman threw him out of their room..tht was justifing indeed 🤣
Suman expecting got me like 🥳 [:D/]
imaging shraman as parents is sumthing adorable.
Preekar as always r cuteii piez...n pushkar also faced the same fate as shravan. 🤣
thez men i tel u r literally dum in such cases..warna tu baki kamon mein PHD kar rakhi hoti hai.. 🤪
Bella thnku sho sho sho much for this terrific epilogue...really loved it core❤️
Imagining shraman as warriors was sumthng new n intresting...indeed 😃
hope to get some more soon...till thn take care.
N han best of luck for ur prep... 😉


Congos dear 😆
trillionz of hugs from me too but me that gayi *pouts*
Baby jeeju pe buri nazar nhi daalte bad manners 🤣
Menz are the dumbest creatures what to say
NOPE WOMEN ARE THE BEST IN EVERYTHING
tysm dear
Edited by 0Bella0 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: 0Bella0


Congos dear 😆
trillionz of hugs from me too but me that gayi *pouts*
Baby jeeju pe buri nazar nhi daalte bad manners 🤣
Menz are the dumbest creatures what to say
NOPE WOMEN ARE THE BEST IN EVERYTHING
tysm dear


JIJU...kiska...??acha shravan is ur jiju
arey agar mein buri nazar daloon gi tu kya usi ki saliiain daliein gein..like .tum bhi ti us ki sali hi ho..magar adhi ghar wali nhi..bilkul nhi..cuz hez al all all MINE.
Understood. 😳 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Sunain dhat pagli he's ur jeeju re
see I m telling apne jeeju pe buri nazar mat daal
AND I M NOT HIS SAALI I M HIS PURI KI PURI GHARWALLI UNDERSTOOD
I know my shravan is so charming that u saalis also get such fantasies but what to do fact remains fact he's MINE
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 0Bella0

@Sunain dhat pagli he's ur jeeju re
see I m telling apne jeeju pe buri nazar mat daal
AND I M NOT HIS SAALI I M HIS PURI KI PURI GHARWALLI UNDERSTOOD
I know my shravan is so charming that u saalis also get such fantasies but what to do fact remains fact he's MINE


Choor choor...meeray walay ko apna bana lea...tich tich tich..buri nazaar khud dalti ho aur ilzaam humpar lagati ho..haawwhh..besharam...chalo tum bhi kya yaad rakho gi..hum us ki saali kar hi kaam chala lein gay..as u knw na Sali bhi adhi ghar wali hi hoti hai... 🤣
Aur waisy bhi meray pas Shravan say bhi acha option hai..
u knw hez the hottest sexiest attractive among all aur us nay tu shravan ko bhi peechay chor dea hai... 😈
Any guesses..soocho soocho... [:D/]

Wht i think is u wont be able to ans...itna stess mat do apnay nannay munnay dimagh pay(agar hai tu 🤣 )
My one an only...mind it "MY"...iss par buri nazar dalnay ki suchana bhi maat.. 😡
"Namik Paul"...all mine..specially his eyes n his hairs.. 😳 😳
ALL MINE...JUST MINE...FOREVER MINE.
UNDERSTOOD...!!!
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
@Sunain lol okay I m fine with it
Tu rakhi le namik ko tu bhi yaad rakhegi n yeah shravan is better 😡
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 0Bella0

@Sunain lol okay I m fine with it
Tu rakhi le namik ko tu bhi yaad rakhegi n yeah shravan is better 😡


Oh nono noo...madam u highly mistaken...Namik is better thn Shravan way way better.

Shravan doznt even hav "hormones"...i has thm thn sadly thy r always dozing off..Woh tu bas IF writers ko hum fans par thora tarsa agaya aur us k sleeping hormones ko jaga dea warna hum tu intezar hi kartay rah jatay..
but tht doznt mean i don't love him..i really madly love n adore him.. 😳
so if u hav a prob with tht thn deal with it urself.. 😆
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago

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