Game of THRONES: my first ever shraman ts epilogue updated - Page 5

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what a punishment !
poor Brothers(Dumb Brothers)
ShraMan Moment 😳

👏 nice

@Bella!

Originally posted by: Ammiey

@Bella!

You have full right to breathe mera bacha!

See I've loosened the hug a bit, now breathe!🤣

And yes behna I can fully understand! Omg MBA?

Me too I mean engineering k baad I want to do MBA😳

Okay I'll take tips from you gurudev! *charan sparsh*😃

Yes yes tmko jab time mile read it i'll send it though my updates are also going to be very slow due to the regular tests going on in my coaching😆

And a poor net!🤢

Hehe haan excitement mein it became summary kind of😛😳

Love you so sooo much tu likhti hi aisa hai ki lamba comment apne aap aa jata hai😛

thanks a lot 😆
gurudev and me are you sure you don't wanna fail 😆
done will do that
hehehehe thanks 😆

Originally posted by: Sunain

Oh nono noo...madam u highly mistaken...Namik is better thn Shravan way way better.

Shravan doznt even hav "hormones"...i has thm thn sadly thy r always dozing off..Woh tu bas IF writers ko hum fans par thora tarsa agaya aur us k sleeping hormones ko jaga dea warna hum tu intezar hi kartay rah jatay..
but tht doznt mean i don't love him..i really madly love n adore him.. 😳
so if u hav a prob with tht thn deal with it urself.. 😆

whatever be it but shravan and Nimik are the best at their places
lol hormone locha 🤣
Ye duniya m oh maya hai pagli Isiliye jaa maine tujhe Nimik daal kar diya 🤣
I don't mind see my heart is vast as an ocean 🤣

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat

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what a punishment !
poor Brothers(Dumb Brothers)
ShraMan Moment 😳

👏 nice

thanks a lot dear 😊
Glad you like it 😊

finally read it...read both parts and epilogue in one go...Bella my dear it was epic...if I won't say I loved it, it'd be like lying to myself... loved it completely...sumo warrior, shravu prince...their love story, hurdles, never ending love, boundaries of rules, everything was beautifully penned... sumo was not that cruel...helped her friend...thanks God... n shravu...God since the time he saw her, fell for her...n after rejection didn't give up coz he knew she too loved him... she must be looking like a dream in that peach gown...n bloody hawks...started staring like never seen a girl before or like she'd stick a board on herself ATM 24hrs open...bloody vultures... n shraman dance...the story it was so beautiful... n king hell man...a devil at place of king...a king is the one who always thinks of his ppl's happiness...but he, he was a Brut beast ...he killed shravu's father n buddha ready to break his own rule for his son's happiness...Chi... n pushkie love u wat an idea you gave to shravu ... n they made love finally when sumo thought she'd die next day... thanks God sumo didn't die.. very happy that shravu killed both insane father son... n pushkie kept his promise... epilogue was so funny...shravu thrown out of his room...hihihi...seriously men are the dumbest creature of God...she gave him so many hints but still he acted like dumb...n the so called fight between shraman was amazing. .how possessive he became when sumo said about herself... n pushkie too thrown out of room...I'll hanging at top of palace...haha ...hilarious...giving suggestions to his bro but when his turn came, he too became Dumbo... all men are just same... loved it...Thanks for pm :) n pls don't throw eggs on me though m not vegetarian like you ;) but Diwali is here so no eggs n above all I tried my best to don't make my comment too long when I know I already had made it so ;) ...

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

finally read it...read both parts and epilogue in one go...Bella my dear it was epic...if I won't say I loved it, it'd be like lying to myself...loved it completely...sumo warrior, shravu prince...their love story, hurdles, never ending love, boundaries of rules, everything was beautifully penned...sumo was not that cruel...helped her friend...thanks God...n shravu...God since the time he saw her, fell for her...n after rejection didn't give up coz he knew she too loved him...she must be looking like a dream in that peach gown...n bloody hawks...started staring like never seen a girl before or like she'd stick a board on herself ATM 24hrs open...bloody vultures...n shraman dance...the story it was so beautiful...n king hell man...a devil at place of king...a king is the one who always thinks of his ppl's happiness...but he, he was a Brut beast ...he killed shravu's father n buddha ready to break his own rule for his son's happiness...Chi...n pushkie love u wat an idea you gave to shravu ...n they made love finally when sumo thought she'd die next day...thanks God sumo didn't die.. very happy that shravu killed both insane father son...n pushkie kept his promise...epilogue was so funny...shravu thrown out of his room...hihihi...seriously men are the dumbest creature of God...she gave him so many hints but still he acted like dumb...n the so called fight between shraman was amazing..how possessive he became when sumo said about herself...n pushkie too thrown out of room...I'll hanging at top of palace...haha ...hilarious...giving suggestions to his bro but when his turn came, he too became Dumbo...all men are just same...loved it...Thanks for pm :) n pls don't throw eggs on me though m not vegetarian like you ;) but Diwali is here so no eggs n above all I tried my best to don't make my comment too long when I know I already had made it so ;) ...

long comment I love that any writer would
lol don't worry I don't throw eggs yeah I can throw chocolates only if you want 😉
thanks a lot sis 😊
Glad you like it 😊

hehe...I love chocolates my dear...u can throw it ...I wont mind my dear behna ..;)

HAD been avoiding this for a while bcoz im notreally into mytholigical stuff, but when i finally read it, i realised how big of a fool i was to read this one. Great work👏

@anonymousanju but I mind now moine chocolates dekh kar apne iraada Badal diya 🤣 🤣