SHRAMAN SS : THE GROOM HUNT (part 10 updated) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
what the hell
come on shravan
get your act together
tell her
soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Shree06

Superb !!!!!!!!!!!
Finally Shravan's frustration is out and in a way he accepts that he was hell jealous 😆
Pushkar waahh kya advice thi, its perfectly working 😳
and the way Vaibhav reacted was cool 👏
Awesome yaar
Do update soon...😊
Eagerly waiting to know that Shravan gonna do next...

Thnxs and yes I would try updating faster
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
amazing update... loved it... shravan jealous... and ye vaibhav... bada clever h... awesome update... and that outburst... too gud.. update soonish
with loadsss of love
anupriya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
amazing...
thank you for the wonderful update...
beautifully penned...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinegirl100

amazing update... loved it... shravan jealous... and ye vaibhav... bada clever h... awesome update... and that outburst... too gud.. update soonish

with loadsss of love
anupriya

Thnxs
Would try to update faster
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
It was so good!
I loved every bit of it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Part 9
Suman has been upset with shravan from the time of her date with vaibhav two days ago and the blunder he had created on that day. Sumo has been avoiding all types of contact with shravan whether it be his calls or messages. Sumo was not ready to forgive shravan this time for all the rubbish he had spoken about her .
She knew that he had a short temper and would blow on anyone when in anger but that does not mean that he could insult her in such a way and what upset her the most was that in spite of him being her best friend he had such low opinion of her.
She couldn't believe that her shravan had such low opinion for her he made her feel bad about herself because of which now she was not ready to face him as yet.

Pushkar had been observing both shravan and sumo from the past few days , he knew something big that taken place between them and it had badly hurt sumo as well .
But he couldn't find what had actually happened as yet because bhai and sumo both were not ready to reveal anything about that day on top of that sumo was not even talking to him also properly. And bhai was not ready to open up in spite of his many inquiry.
He could clearly make out that both shravan and sumo were suffering because of their separation but he couldn't so anything about it . So he decided to get to the root of this problem with that he entered shravan room.

Pu: bhai why is sumo so upset and why is she not talking to anyone.

Sh: pushkar I am busy can we please have this discussion some other time.

Pu: bhai do you actually think that this trick of yours is going to work so pls don't try to change the topic and tell me what went wrong.

So with a defeated look shravan narrates the whole date incident as well as what happened during the parking lot.

Pu: (enraged) bhai how could you! !!!!!

Sh: seriously pushkar I didn't know what came over me I just couldn't control my self...

Pu: bhai why did you go there in the first place I told you right to let sumo make her own decisions

Sh: pushkar I actually went there taking your advice I was going to confess but seeing them holding hands and talking so freely I couldn't control my anger.

Pushkar was quite shocked after listening to shravan.

Pu: bhai what do you mean by confess

Sh: come on chotte yaar weren't you who was going on with bhai you should accept your feelings and confess them to sumo so I decided to take your advice but see what a big blunder ur advice has created.

Pu: bhai don't try to blame this on me I told you to confess not to g oik and do world war 3 with her .

Sh: pushkar let that go what is important right now is how am I going to make sumo talk to me .

Pu: bhai sumo is very hurt

Sh: I know pushkar that's why I am scared what if she starts hating me

Pu: bhai this is our sumo we are talking about she can never hate you can be in anger but hate that impossible. ...

This is It guys for today
Your comments and likes really do matter to me and it encourages me to write further as well so guys do comment as well.
Edited by RK-ki-Kaneez - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
interesting day by day... keep it up!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
awesome update
totally loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Hey,
This was short but really good
I loved the conversation bw both of them
I do hope Shravan would do something really quick
Continue soon

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