SHRAMAN SS : THE GROOM HUNT (part 10 updated) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Superb..
Read all in one go..
Love it..
Shra don't wanna get hurt again and sumo vaibhav I guess they gonna make a plan..
Interesting to see jealous shra.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
will vaibhav do something
cannot wait
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ApekshaM

wonderful part! shravan our buddhuram.. ab toh samaj jao re baba😆 ek min. abhi nahi abhi isko aur jalao😈 jealous shravan kumar is fun and a treat to watch😆

So vaibhav ji is gonna play cupid along with pushkar for shraman i guess😳 its becoming interesting by parts will be waiting for next part.. do update soon and thanks for pm😃

Love
Apeksha❤️

Thnx
And yes would try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Superb..
Read all in one go..
Love it..
Shra don't wanna get hurt again and sumo vaibhav I guess they gonna make a plan..
Interesting to see jealous shra.

Thnx for the encouragement and yes would try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Part 8
As soon as shravan enters the restaurant the first thing that catches his eye is sumo looking so beautiful in a black sari then his eye goes to the champu sitting beside her they both seem to be in a very serious discussion. What are they discussing with so much seriousness suddenly a thought comes to his mind is that champu trying to force his sumo into marriage if yes then he is so going to kill him and with these thoughts shravan reaches their table.

Va: (surprised ) shravan you here ????

Sh: (with a tight smile) hello vaibhav

Va: so shravan how come you are here (with a suspicious look)

Sh: didn't sumo tell you that I will be joining her ... you see this area is not safe for girls so I don't like leave her in this area with anyone (with a smirk)

Va: come on shravan I am not anyone sumac is quite safe with me and from now on you don't need to worry about her you know I am there for her ( and with that he holds sumos hand)
Sumo is shocked to see vaibhav holding her hand on top of that she could clearly see that shravan was loosing his cool and would anytime spring on vaibhav and lucky at that time shravans cell rings and sumo signs in relief. Shravan goes a little far away so that he could attend his call.

Su: are you crazy why are you trying to provoke him for a minute I thought he was going to hit you.

Va: for a minute even I got scared but sumo can't you see that he is getting jealous so this means he feels for you.

Su: even I know that he Feel for me but that is not important bit what is important is to make him realise his feelings so that he can confess.

Va: sumo from what I can see and what you have told me till now your shravan seems to be a very tough cookie to crack and for this to happen it is important that we make him jealous.

Su: buy is it really that necessary I mean...

Va: sumo I know that you don't like to see him in pain but of you want him to confess this is the only way his anger and jealous will only bring out his feelings.

Su: thanking you vaibhav thanks so much for helping me.

Va: come on sumo now you are embarrassing me we are friends and friends help each other.
And with that they continue their dinner and later shravan also joins them after Finishing his call after finishing their dinner all decided to head to their respective homes.

Parking lot.

Va: suman I really had a great time .

Su: yes me to (with a smile)

Va: (looking at shravan) it was nice meeting you and yes the next time I take suman out don't worry I will take care of her because you see very soon she would be my responsibility.
With that vaibhav left not giving shravan enough time to recover from what he said.

Sh: (grinding his teeth) what the hell did he mean by that sumo

Su: shravan please not again let's just go home.

Sh: WTH why do you have to always support him why can't you see what hi is trying to do

Su: what is he trying to do shravan huh tell me even I want to know

Sh: leave it sumo you won't understand

Sh: no shravan wait I want to know what he is trying to do

Sh: so If you so desperately want to know then listen that champu Is trying to come in between us and sumo you are allowing that .

Su: what rubbish. ... A shravan tu pagal ho gaya hai.

Sh: see this what I am trying to tell you, you can't listen to anything about that champu you become so defensive.

Su: you have lost it shravan totally lost it tumhe pata bhi hai ki tum kya bol rahe ho.

Sh: right sumo according to you whatever I say is rubbish and what ever that vaibhav is doing is correct so why don't you just agree for this marriage and go away from my life huh vaise bhi tum yeh hi toh karti aaye ho you always have left me for other whether it be for your prom or for your image you are so selfish sumo you have never thought about me or my feelings you have always made a fool out of me and my feelings so this time also go away go with that vaibhav who is perfect for you and your so called image.

Su: (in shock) so this is what you think and feel about me and here I was a fool that though that you had feelings for me and didn't realise them what a fool I have been. I thought that even you felt the same way about me but I was so wrong you had so much bitterness in you and that also for me. I am sorry shravan I am really very sorry for I was a fool to think that you reciprocate my feelings but meine toh kabhi nahi soocha ki tum mere bare mein itni giri hui sooch rakhte ho thank you shravan thank you so much for waking me from the dream world that I was staying in .
With that sumo sits in her car and without giving shravan anymore attention leaves for Tiwari Killa.
Edited by RK-ki-Kaneez - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
awesome update dear..
shra jealous and his outburst,,he is stupid ,
vaibhav is nice guy, helping them but apna shra is gadha hai...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Amazing
Vaibhav is really sweet
Shravan is getting jealous
But in his anger and jealousy he acted irrationally and spoke nonsense to Suman
And Suman is very hurt and I hope she doesn't say yes to vaibhav in her sadness
Now eagerly waiting for next part
Update sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Aww yr sumo is her after his outburst update soon superb update and vaibhav is nice guy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Superb !!!!!!!!!!!
Finally Shravan's frustration is out and in a way he accepts that he was hell jealous 😆
Pushkar waahh kya advice thi, its perfectly working 😳
and the way Vaibhav reacted was cool 👏
Awesome yaar
Do update soon...😊
Eagerly waiting to know that Shravan gonna do next...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Asum updt.
Waiting 4 nxt part to see what shravan will do

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