SHRAMAN SS : THE GROOM HUNT (part 10 updated) - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Manyata5

Hey,

This was short but really good
I loved the conversation bw both of them
I do hope Shravan would do something really quick
Continue soon

Thnx and yes would try to update longer chapters
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey:))
The update was awesome.
Loved it.
Waiting to see how Shravan will get Sumo gp talk to him and how the story will unfold.
Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you for the wonderful update...
beautifully penned...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Yeh kya
Shravan went to confess his love
But Sab galat Ho gya
He really messed up a big this time
Now want see what will he do now???
Update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Yeh kya
Shravan went to confess his love
But Sab galat Ho gya
He really messed up a big this time
Now want see what will he do now???
Update next part soon

Thnx and yes would try to update sooner
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
awesome read all d chaps in one go plz cont soon n pm me i hv snt u a frnd req plzaccept it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: andy1245

awesome read all d chaps in one go plz cont soon n pm me i hv snt u a frnd req plzaccept it

Thnx and yes would pm as soon as I update the next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
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poor shra and pushkar lol shra blames him..lol
lovelyy update dear..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 10
It had been more than a week after shravan and sumans disasterious meeting and three days from which shravan had accepted his love and feelings for sumo in front of puahkar. From the past two days pushkar and shravan had been visiting Tiwari killa on some or the other context whether it be for nanu or for some case or just for dhollu shravan and pushkar had not even spared the poor child. Shravans main aim through all this visits were to talk to sumo but sumo was a very tough cookie to crack she would always find one way or the other to avoid him.
But shravan was not less he had tried all the possible ways through which he could talk to her or create situation in front of the family where sumo was forced to come in front of him.

And today he had got the perfect chance to talk to suno and he would not let this chance to go from his hand. Sumo was going to the terrace to get the clothes that were kept for drying and seeing this shravan to followed her.

Terrace

Sh: sumo...
But sumo trying to avoid meeting shravan tries to leave from there but shravan was quite adamant to talk to sumo today and hence tries to stop her.

Sh: sumo please give me a chance and listen to me ...

Su: what do you want shravan what more do you want to say now I am done with you shravan

Sh: sumo you are misunderstanding me sumo please listen to me

Su: okkay tell me what you wan to say

Sh: sumo...

Su: okkay I am listening

Sh: sorry

Su: why. ..

Sh: what do you mean by why

Su: why are you doing all this when you hate me so much. ( with tears in her eyes)

Sh: No no no sumo don't cry and I don't hate you sumo how can I

Su: then why so much malice for me shravan

Sh: it is not malice sumo and even you know it.

Sh: Sumo... (gathering all his courage and takes her hand in his and when she doesn't pull her hand that gives him a little hope )
Sumo from a very young age you had been my only friend and then during my teens you had been the only girl for me but due to our mistakes we got away from each other but then away a decade we met again but then also we had a lot of misunderstanding between us but then also I couldn't stop these feelings and this irritated me but then all that groom hunt began and that time also I tried to control my feelings but I can't do that anymore sumo I can't stop these feelings anymore.

Su: (crying bitterly now ) ten years from the past ten years I have been waiting for you what do you think only you suffered because of this separation then what about me I lost my best friend I know I was at fault but I didn't think it was just a big mistake that I would loose my only support shravan I lost my whole world again that day shravan and what do you feel that only you were confused with these feelings even I was I didn't know what was happening with me and on top of that you were going on with your just friends track.

Seeing her crying so bitterly shravan couldn't help himself anymore and pulled her towards him and hugged her tight and night was the night where two lost souls found their anchor once again just for that moment nothing mattered to tgem anymore except that they had to console each other their fights their anger could wait for another time bit for now they were celebrating in their unity

This is It for now guys and sorry for such late update


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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Finally they confessed

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