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Posted: 9 years ago
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You are so gifted beyond amazing simply loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing..
No words left... 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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How beautifully written!! No words!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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... And the first thing on my mind as I read this Chick... Hugs to you... Love the way you have captured Shravan's inner turmoil... The way he put his head on that tiffin - it broke my heart! Wish Sumo would (and could) just give him a tight hug!
Edited by an_chau - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: JJKKL

Nice one chick. Here is one from Sumo's side. You see we have switched sides today


I have erred in the past
I tried to apologize multiple times
I will do so again in future and wait patiently
I am not one to leave your side - ever

I am not an intense person
But then your intensity can cover us both
I might be spinning tales and cooking stuff all the time
But I have no bad intentions - ever

My love I show through actions
I love you unconditionally inspite of the mixed signals I receive
My intention is not to hurt you
It is to make sure you never get hurt - ever

I want to take you through your nightmares
I want you to get back your mother
I might be hiding the truth - even lying to you
But it is all to make sure you attain peace - ever

Little do I know that I am digging my own grave
Even if I knew I would have happily gone there myself.
EVERY TIME


Beautiful. JJKL 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chick , juices overflowing😆😉
Lovely
You have managed to capture the adorable man in Shrav

But, for me the key moment was when his assistant called up Sumo in front of him and he was not scolded by Shravan the lawyer. And more to the point, when he asked, "What did she say?"

Maybe more later

You have expressed loverboy Shravan beautifully🤗
Edited by indranigupta - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: JJKKL

Nice one chick. Here is one from Sumo's side. You see we have switched sides today


I have erred in the past
I tried to apologize multiple times
I will do so again in future and wait patiently
I am not one to leave your side - ever

I am not an intense person
But then your intensity can cover us both
I might be spinning tales and cooking stuff all the time
But I have no bad intentions - ever

My love I show through actions
I love you unconditionally inspite of the mixed signals I receive
My intention is not to hurt you
It is to make sure you never get hurt - ever

I want to take you through your nightmares
I want you to get back your mother
I might be hiding the truth - even lying to you
But it is all to make sure you attain peace - ever

Little do I know that I am digging my own grave
Even if I knew I would have happily gone there myself.
EVERY TIME


Et tu Brutus... J 😉😆

I am not an intense person
But then your intensity can cover us both

Lines which define for me their relationship. Thank you J... you made me think again with clarity

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: indranigupta


Et tu Brutus... J 😉😆

I am not an intense person
But then your intensity can cover us both

Lines which define for me their relationship. Thank you J... you made me think again with clarity



Oh Ho. This is just to make sure both sides are represented in this thread. Calm down. Chill...So here is one for Shravan 😆


I have erred in the present - I thought of it as tit for tat
I saw your reaction - the tears in your eyes, the hopelessness
I thought I got what I wanted.
I cried more that night than 10 years back

I am not a bubbling person
Nor am I innocent or naive
I might be splitting hair and over analysing
But then I have to protect myself you see

My love I also show through actions
I love you unconditionally under the guise of friendship
I wish I could remove the mask before it is too late
But then I have to protect myself you see

I am ready to fight for you
I write Shayari for you, day dream about you
I have only you in my mind - day in and day out
I am ready to eat anything you make - even the dal which repulses me
I wish I could be with you all the time
I am ready to wait for you - like forever

I wish you could make me yours
I wish you put me out of this misery
I wish you tell me once that you loved me then
I am stuck in the then all this time
I am ready to physically hurt myself
I can face anything except facing rejection again

I have to protect myself you see

Edited by JJKKL - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: JJKKL

Lovely J🤗

Shrav, the man making tentative steps towards encoding his friendship as love.
Wonder if he is simply stuck in the past or he failed to find new parameters to express this love in the present? His love for Sumo is not expressed clearly because the other finds the past and present as two different poles. Though the yardstick for both is the past😃
Anyways, J nice to know we still belong to the devil's party and yet see abundance of Paradise in the other.😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prati,

Have you caught up on all episodes ?

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