Na Tum Jaano Na Hum... - Page 4

Originally posted by: Ana_mika

Chick, to say how brilliantly you have captured Shravan's inner turmoil would be stating the obvious. Nevertheless, I can't help but ask how do you manage to surprise me with your every single post? Keep them coming!😊

Originally posted by: docbenna

The poor boy resting his head on the tiffin was the most heartwarming shot after that smile on seeing the feedback form the battle between the dil vs DiMag contd...

Originally posted by: noexcuse

I loved the feedback concept too. It's so good to see they continue to show both at work.
The last scene, like you described he couldn't take his eyes off her and the look on somon's eyes- like she hasn't seen him for years. So heartening!

Just came across your post. Busy weekend.
Thanks for writing and have a great weekend.

Originally posted by: beagleboy

Love is an addiction, you see. When you are in the throes of young seemingly unrequited love and passion, reason and logic get wings and fly out of the window.

Your smile

is like my morning coffee-

it wakes my senses,

stimulates my emotions,

clears my vision -

I am addicted.

Your eyes,

are the deep hazel of

my whiskey filled glass,

I drown, but find a footing,

I stutter, but find my voice,

I'm awake, but sleep peacefully

after my nightcap -

I'm addicted.

Your voice,

is the book I love to read,

it crowds my head,

occupies my thoughts,

makes me revisit page after page, every word -

I'm addicted.

You,

are the song I love to hear

on a loop, time after time,

Lyrical, filled with such sweet melody -

it fills my heart.

it shakes up my soul.

it brings immense joy.

And creates such memories,

I'm addicted.

Sorry! I feel very random this morning!

Originally posted by: JJKKL

Nice one chick. Here is one from Sumo's side. You see we have switched sides today


I have erred in the past
I tried to apologize multiple times
I will do so again in future and wait patiently
I am not one to leave your side - ever

I am not an intense person
But then your intensity can cover us both
I might be spinning tales and cooking stuff all the time
But I have no bad intentions - ever

My love I show through actions
I love you unconditionally inspite of the mixed signals I receive
My intention is not to hurt you
It is to make sure you never get hurt - ever

I want to take you through your nightmares
I want you to get back your mother
I might be hiding the truth - even lying to you
But it is all to make sure you attain peace - ever

Little do I know that I am digging my own grave
Even if I knew I would have happily gone there myself.
EVERY TIME

Originally posted by: an_chau

... And the first thing on my mind as I read this Chick... Hugs to you... Love the way you have captured Shravan's inner turmoil... The way he put his head on that tiffin - it broke my heart! Wish Sumo would (and could) just give him a tight hug!

Originally posted by: indranigupta

Beautiful, J! 👏

The 'Then'.

Indrani,

I found the 'Then' and 'Now' as described by Pushkar quite interesting.

One is stuck in his past, the other in her Present...Neither can move ahead, unless they think about the future. 😉

The 'Then'- The past has been etched so clearly in hie heart that he believes history would repeat- Once bitten, twice shy.