RES.AHAN KRITU 😆
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Unres. I am going to unres for both the updates, sorry couldn't do it earlier, life. *sighs*
I love how you used the title of the story for the ending,Shravan was a man with a purpose, going to do something😆
I could visualise everything you wrote..how he must have strode in confidently and then hesitated because her whole family plus her suitors were there and then though, oh chuck it and went on about what was important.
I love the apology Suman gave to Shravan.
And the explanation Shravan gave to Suman about why he did not realise why he still loved her.
And that kiss
*swoon worthy*
And I loved that line about Sumo hesitating to touch his face like that before but was completely okay with it now.. because their change in their relationship did not change their dynamics, it just opened them to take some liberties with each other that they couldn't before.
I loved their nok-jhok too 😆
They were so reluctant to leave each other😆 And he couldn't get enough of her so he called her immediately after😆
I must have told you how good of a writer you are, you are among the favourite ones on the forum man.
Thank you for the pm 🤗
Both the updates were lovely😳
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Also, BOO KRITU😆
Edited by -AvadaKedavra- - 9 years ago
