ShraMan Three-Shot: Do Something [Complete] - Page 10

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Posted: Part 2

lovedd ttt❤️

AWWW omg this was such a cute short story!

Had the Nirmala track come to pass differently and Shravan continued helping out with finding a groom for Sumo, I could definitely see events occurring this way.

First of all, Pushkar is my FAVE. He always knows what's up when it comes to the two of them and I love how he says things with such a habitual air, which you've put in so perfectly, such as that conversation with Nirmala. His conversation with Shravan was great, I'm so glad you included him in here, allowing Shravan to finally confront his feelings for Sumo. I also really love how you've made Sumo the one to confess her feelings first and she does it without hesitation, simply lets out all her emotions in one go. Shravan takes time to accept his own feelings because obviously, he's still afraid of getting hurt, his whole self-defence mechanism just comes so naturally to him.

The last bit was perfect - Shravan just deciding he's not going to wait any longer and pulling Sumo out of the room without thought to the other occupants. And I really enjoyed how he didn't even need to explicitly say he knew he was in love with her for Sumo to understand because that's just the bond they share - they've known each other for too long and too well. I also really liked how she apologized to him and even mentioned the whole Facebook stalking thing - because even if she never contacted him, that didn't mean she never thought about it and she did care. I laughed when she reacted to her realization of the people downstairs, hitting Shravan's nose - typical Sumo :P And that last scene with their banter just left me with such a warm, fuzzy feeling which I really needed after having my feels torn apart with the current track. Thank you for writing such a lovely little story, really enjoyed reading it! <33

wow... The last part is stupendous dear

you write so beautifully. the scenes flashed infront of my eyes as i read them. The way you brought both of their thoughts to life and also using all the scenes that they have had on screen. so freaking awesome.

i love the emotion you put into it and the way u portrayed it without making it way too dramatic. kudos.

P.S. i know nothing is perfect but that ending definitely was.