ShraMan Three-Shot: Do Something [Complete]

Jasleen

@Jasleen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Beautifully written! Loved how well you described Shraman's emtions!

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arshiasya

@arshiasya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

it was so cute best end to this story i loved it looking forward to more from you

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potterginny

@potterginny

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Anjali!
This is fantabulous!!!!
Thank you for this.
Love,
Ginny

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NAINA

@nainasharma8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

this was so perfect!!! i wish the same happnd on the show!! brilliant writing..👏

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

You know I can come and read this over and over again.
This was lovely.
They had to argue through their confession as well.
Sumo & Shravan .
Heck of a pair <3

"You are beautiful"
His subtle admiration . :D

"What are the chances that someone is watching us right this moment?"
"Pretty high. Why?"
"Because I really want to kiss you again." He says causing her to blush.

Haha
Doesn't want to leave any oppurtunity mate . <3

Anjali
Great work .
-God bless

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mineforever

@mineforever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

LOVED IT ❤️
perfect end to a TS.. 😊
The way Shravan is acting in the show I think his realization may be somewhere along these lines only.. 😆

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astonm

@astonm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: MittuArsha
Well to begin with,Girl I totally love the way you write. There is something in it which makes me want to read more and more.❤️
I loved each and every bit.From Shravan going to Sumo's house to their confession to nanaji agreeing,everything was PERFECT. I could imagine the scenes

I loved the way you described the relationship change between Shraman. First all intense and angry then suddenly all sweet and simple. Well this happens only in love👏

I have read many Stories be it a novel/magazine/fan fics etc etc, but never have I ever come across such a beautifully explained kiss part. It was neither so over too the top nor to low it was just so Perfect. (I have never kissed but it made me feel real😆)

I need some writing tips from you soon😃

Looking forward to read more of your works.

Could we get a Epilogue pleaseee?

Awww, your comment made me smileee! Thank you so much, you're such a sweetheart <3

Hahaha, I am glad you liked the kiss part? When I read novels I always feel like it's either too short or to much, and it's often missing the intimacy that real kisses have so I was like "this has to be legit".

And I am actually intrigued by the idea of an epilogue, lets see if something strikes me! :D

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

You are an amazing writer...Loved the TS so so much...I m so sorry, I am not very regular in commenting and appreciating the OSes and TSes u write..,mind u I read them all...but problem is i hardly get the chance to log in n comment... and just writing a very nice/ beautiful via phone seems unfair to the talent u are... u write so beautifully, u sketch a visual...thank u for that...n i yearn for a epilogue like many...can we have...

n i did read u r the fluff queen of EDKV land...so write many many many more...eagerly waiting for them to engulf us the way your stories alwys do...😃

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Mitali Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Awww, your comment made me smileee! Thank you so much, you're such a sweetheart <3

Hahaha, I am glad you liked the kiss part? When I read novels I always feel like it's either too short or to much, and it's often missing the intimacy that real kisses have so I was like "this has to be legit".

And I am actually intrigued by the idea of an epilogue, lets see if something strikes me! :D

I am glad that my comment could bring a smile on your face. I totally feel you😆

You deserve all the appreciation,after all you are a super amazing writer👏

I am sure something would strike you and we would get a beautiful Epilogue soon

Edited by MittuArsha - 9 years ago

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donottulip

@donottulip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Okay, so heyyy Astonm.. Umm , Anjali , right ?

I am sorry , I dont really remember your real name , I always referred to you as astonm in my head. So , I have been reading your work since qubool hai , I stopped watching the show after Asad and Zoya , I was SO angry at them for butchering my favourite show , after IPKKND , that is. Again , the second season(IPKKND) was just crap. Absolute bull.

Okay , so , I LOVE your work , and I can't tell you how happy I was when I saw your name in this forum. I was practically jumping ! :D

Anyway , so this story is somehow similar to how I wanted Shravan and Suman to get together , so close to the version in my head , I can't even.. sigh . Loved all of it , do write more and the best part of the whole thing ?

The very last line. damn . I laughed so much idk why , maybe the sugar rush from all the chocolates I ate xD

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