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All the three chapters were fabulous. The confession part was the best one, I have ever read or seen in my life. This last chapter is I am going to reread many times ,I ma sure . It had the material I admire - flow of feelings + their last exchange of words i.e. bickering of couples.As said, from oblivious to smooth was quick but still felt so much in flow that it didn't felt odd but obvious.
thnx again for sharing your work and talent.
