'DO YOU THINK I'M SEXY?'-A SHRAMAN SS- COMPLETED - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
totally loving the jealous shravan
awesome update
need more
and soon
superb
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Kya baat! Kya baat! Kya baat!

Super awesome marvelous fabulous!

I loved the fact that Pushkar is here...plz plz plz keep him till the end..
& one more humble request.. plz don't bring Preeti here.


Keep going, buddy... update soon...will be waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan




Wow, what a beautiful name! Fero it is! :)


Thank you mandy 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
I'm so glad you decided to expand the story further.😃 Loved both the prequel chapters and can't wait for the sequel.

Besides ShraMan, I absolutely adored Pushkar here.🤗 Shravan was so spot on with his description of him - laid back but not a pushover.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Thanks to everyone who has commented so far. I was out the whole day today. Just got back home now. I will try and update the story tomorrow.


Yes I intend to keep Pushkar till the end, and No didn't intend to bring Preeti to this one! :) So far she has not featured in any of my stories, but maybe in the future! But I love Pushkar so much, he features heavily in everything I write these days! He is a character you can really work with!


I hope to finish the story this week for sure. I am sure I will be inspired to write more in the coming weeks anyway.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

Thanks to everyone who has commented so far. I was out the whole day today. Just got back home now. I will try and update the story tomorrow.



Yes I intend to keep Pushkar till the end, and No didn't intend to bring Preeti to this one! :) So far she has not featured in any of my stories, but maybe in the future! But I love Pushkar so much, he features heavily in everything I write these days! He is a character you can really work with!


I hope to finish the story this week for sure. I am sure I will be inspired to write more in the coming weeks anyway.






I don't know why I don't like Preeti, I like her in the show "Kumkum Bhagya" as Rachna...but not here...

Thanks a ton for not bringing her here ROFL.

update soon 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
The build up was indeed good!
Very well written.
I love how Shravan gets all flustered and off bounds.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Hey!
It was wonderful
And after this i surely wa t to see a drunk sumoo
Continue soon and do pm me please
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Lovely, Mandy!👏
Friend Zone and Flirt- Zone! 😆

Indeed, it is Star Wars! 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
I love dis drunk sumo
Loved d shot so much

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