'DO YOU THINK I'M SEXY?'-A SHRAMAN SS- COMPLETED

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: --fero--
Wowww
Mandy
I am in love with this concept
Please do continue soon

Will do! Even if I wanted to stop, it doesn't seem like I can anymore? I seem to be addicted to writing about these two! 😉

Edited by MrDarcyfan - 9 years ago

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Rooh_5896

@Rooh_5896

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

I simply love how she is not bothered with losing control. For once she is not wanting to do the right thing. And the wrong at time does right.

I can totally imagine Shravan's deep, base voice. And I don't mind cheeky stuff. They're really fun to read at times. Just like this one. Very well written.

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Rooh_5896
I simply love how she is not bothered with losing control. For once she is not wanting to do the right thing. And the wrong at time does right.
I can totally imagine Shravan's deep, base voice. And I don't mind cheeky stuff. They're really fun to read at times. Just like this one. Very well written.

Thanks. The prequel on page 3 is a bit more serious. I am setting the stage for this epic showdown to happen! Stay tuned! :)

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Mind blowing update
Suman was making him jealous and he is getting jealous
Eagerly waiting for next update now

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Divi.C

@Divi.C

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Superb..but i was expecting sequal...

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Loved it!👏

Can't wait for the next

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Divi.C
Superb..but i was expecting sequal...

It was important to show the back story first, and then show what happened next! Kind of like Star Wars where they started in the present,, then went into the future, then went back to the past, and then to the future again! 😆

Of course I will not be doing ALL that, but first Prequel, then Sequel! :)

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

<font size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Will do! Even if I wanted to stop, itdoesn'tseem like I can anymore? I seem to be addicted to writing about these two</font>!😉

Yeah I noticed that 😆

#Shraman magic 😳

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peachesandcream

@peachesandcream

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Very nice, Mandy. I wonder if we will see Sumo do something reckless that will lead to revelation of her feelings in the show. I enjoyed reading your story. Looking forward to the next part of the prequel.