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raveena

@ravzs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Really nice shall I continue as I see no res o s sum one writin

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Regs... That was too good🤣

Loved it very much!😉

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: ravzs
Really nice shall I continue as I see no res o s sum one writin

Yes dear you can continue

But do it soon... I will continue after you😉

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
Regs... That was too good🤣
Loved it very much!😉

thanks Mahi.. 😛, i was planning on writing more about verma wanting to marry sumo isliye buttering mama n mami, bothring her.. but got really tired by the time i came back, so posted till what i wrote.. would you like to continue from here??

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: mizzundaztud

thanks Mahi.. 😛, i was planning on writing more about verma wanting to marry sumo isliye buttering mama n mami, bothring her.. but got really tired by the time i came back, so posted till what i wrote.. would you like to continue from here??

Yes, yes am dying to continue!!

But ravs has ressed it I guess, so I am a bit confused😕

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: ravzs
Really nice shall I continue as I see no res o s sum one writin

oh, please continue, Mahi will follow after you then i will 😊

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Yes, yes am dying to continue!!
But ravs has ressed it I guess, so I am a bit confused😕

@ravzs, please continue and choose a color for yourself... mahi u ress after Ravzs and my resss after you

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raveena

@ravzs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Hi guys tnx fr d chance

Hope I won't ruin ur hard wrk mulling over

Few scenes wil post in an hour

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: ravzs
Hi guys tnx fr d chance
Hope I won't ruin ur hard wrk mulling over

Few scenes wil post in an hour

No worries dear...

Be confident and just rock it!

Waiting eagerly...

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raveena

@ravzs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Here it goes guys I'm not able to apply colour sum help me out

In the hall ...

Pushkar was literally annoyed and was givin a hard look to Verma

Shravan was wondering how to teach him a lesson as much he had heard from

Both dabu n pushkar he knew something was wrong so he dint push them for now

Instead was planing on to teach him a lesson

In the room ...

"Suman agar us insan tumhe Chua ya tang Kiya na mein maar Marke khema

Banadhungi." A visibly angry Preetha concluded

" main janthi hu vo kisliye Yaha par aya hein aur atha Bhi hein usse mujse ..."Suman told

but dint conclude just left it there n went into deep thought

Understands something is up as sumo never mentioned to me about I guess it's time to

Speak to Pushkar hope he gets the truth from her n wish she will be safe

In mean time ...

pushkar had come to speak to Suman on the same

Shravan was plotting a idea along with dabu to teach Verma a lesson off his life

" sumo ... Suman " a visibly calm friend was bit worried for his friend now as he could see

She is disturbed . He gestured Preetha to leave n take care outside as he will speak with her .

Now satisfied that she is safe Preetha made way outside to make sure the stooge and low life is

Kept at bay ...

Meanwhile in the room

" sumo " he placed had while calling her out of her deep trance

Suman coming out of trance saw Pushkar looking at her she thought I dint realise

wen Preetha Went out

" Tum Yaha Kay hua ..."

Before she could blabber away she got a glare from her best friend she knew he was upset

But what she dint understand is y s he angry

" uss Kaminey nei kya Kaha tumse"

She tried to speak but he cut her

" mein nei poocha ki usne kya Kaha tumse aur go kya chahtha hain bolo speak up "

Suman while other hand was thinking what to tell but was in fix as he heard say something

And he won't let the matter rest for now

"Don't even think you're going to lie I read through u since childhood and I am surprised you hid something this serious from me "

" it was nothing much bhinahi hua ... " she kept her mouth shut

She knew he wil catch a lie was just praying to God to let this go

But God had other plans ...

Meanwhile Shravan came to call the duo to come out for the cake cutting

But got silent seeing his brother angry on her and she trying to doge his questions

He was a bit concerned now as he never sees him angry or tensed

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