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Shocking twist. So it was not any secret mission but planned one & she used him for escape. Waiting eagerly for the next update

I wonder why she's doing lyk this ..

Amazing update

Originally posted by: Meena_J

omg! so it was plot twist! shocked that suman shot him twice & it was a planned thing! really interesting...

Yaaaasss!!! Glad you're liking it 😊

Originally posted by: Veenapain

Shocking twist. So it was not any secret mission but planned one & she used him for escape. Waiting eagerly for the next update

Thank you, I'm glad you liked the update. I'm updating the next chapter very soon. 😊

Originally posted by: Prizi

I wonder why she's doing lyk this ..

Amazing update

Yes, maybe she's a grey character here or there could be another reason 😉

Please ignore any typos and errors.

Chapter 6

Hafiz (the guy Suman had to meet) “Usse zinda kyu chod diya tumne woh humare liye khatra ban sakta hai aage chalke”.

“Maine aapse phele hi kaha tha ki mai apne tarike se kaam karungi mujhe koi chucha chucha nahi chahiye faltu ka. Aur rahi baat uski toh woh aur uska mujhpe andh vishwas aage chalke bahut kaam aayega humare, aur wase bhi apne pyar ko maar pana aasan nahi hota Hafiz bhai.” Saying this Suman walked away from what she called her country once upon a time towards another country and a new set of people she now called her own.

“Mohabaat aur nafrat ek hi dil ke jazbat hote ha…par jab ek hi insaan se ho jaye toh samjh lijiye ishq bhi bahut gehra tha aur zakhm bhi” Hafiz murmured as Suman walked away like a strong wind. She loved Shravan and there was no doubt about that, but she hated him more.

1 year passed by Shravan had not said anything to the army for his family’s sake however this was killing him inside. He knew what he did all those years ago was wrong but now he hated Suman to the core as she had used him and his faith in her and more importantly made him a puppet in her agendas against his own country. He had spent this past one year in searching for her and bringing her to the court for justice to be served. But every time he got close to catching her, she had managed to escape. One week ago, he had received a tip that Suman and her people have been planning something big and he travelled to Kashmir to dig deeper into the matter before its too late. He had built a few contacts who would provide him information on Suman and her gang from time to time. This was Shravan’s mission he had been commissioned for with the military intelligence by MG Bakshi.

On the other hand, Suman had become the favourite of Zoravar, the gang’s leader as she provided them with every information regarding the army which would help them plan a big attack, the biggest of all time probably and more importantly she had taken a bullet for him twice saving his life. Her father had not worked for these people as the army claimed however he was blamed for it due to Shravan.

Flashback

When she had filed a case in the higher court, Shravan tried to convince her to give up, but she was adamant. Two days later she received a courier, she was shocked to see the contents of the courier, she immediately called her lawyer and then Shravan.

“Tum itna ghir sakte ho socha nahi tha Shravan Malhotra, in sabka kya matlab hai huh…agar tumhe lagta hai mai case wapas le lungi tumhari aisi giri hui harkato ko dekhke toh galat phami hai tumhari” she spit pure angry and disgust at every word. “Kya hua Suman bura laga nah ki tumhare Papa pe ilzam laga diya who bhi jhuta, toh socho mujhe aur meri family ko kaisa laga hoga inn saalo me, humne kitna kuch saha hai bina kisi galti ke”

“Uska faisla court ka hai samjhe” “Exactly toh ab iska faisla bhi court karegi nah Suman ki tumhare Papa ka bhi haath tha iss vest deal me, ki unhone hi Papa ke company employees se deal ki thi low quality vest ke liye aur unhone bhi paisa khaya hai, proofs toh mai bhej chuka hu tumhe already, dekhe hi honge tumne, waise aur bhi kaafi proofs hai mere paas, chaho toh court me dekh lena”

“Tumse maine koi umeed hi kyu ki Shravan mujhe toh yeh samajh nahi aata, upar se Papa bhi tumhe kitna kabil samajhte the par tum kya nikle, ek ghatiya aur gire hue desh insaan, waise bhi ek desh dhrohi ke bete se mai expect bhi kya kar sakti hu”

“Suman” Shravan shouted angrily hearing her call his father a traitor “Mere Papa ke bare me kuch maat bolo waise bhi kaafi zeher nikal chuki ho court me unke khilaf, aur haan tumhe who proofs isliye bheje the ki sambhal jao, varna tumhare Papa ki izzat court aur media me uchlegi, aur tumhe mai itna bata sakta hu ki court ka jo bhi faisla ho, log media trial me zayda bharosa rakhte hai aur media iss baat ko zaroor uchalegi, ab faisla tumhara hai.”

“I’ll see you and your family in court Shrvana Malhotra, mujhe bass apne Papa ke liye insaf chahiye, media aur logo se koi lena dena nahi hai mujhe” saying this Suman cut the call, tears rolled out of her eyes as she thought of how low this guy could go just to safeguard his father and had zero respect left for her father who he once called his mentor. Her chachu and one of the employees involved in the low quality vest manufacturing were acquaintances and her chachu had taken a huge loan from that man for the expansion of his ayuerveda business, and Shravan wanted to implicate that as a bribe her father took for low quality vests to be passed. She was disgusted at his thinking but was determined to still fight. However, later she changed her mind and decided to withdraw the case rather than let media create a circus of her father and his reputation.

What she didn’t know at that time was that one day they would be used by the army in such a twisted manner to frame her, but who cares now as she is not a part of them anymore. She even managed to use Shravan and make him pay for his mistakes. She understood that if he has joined the army, he understands what loving your country means and if she uses him against his own country this would kill him from inside every single day like she died a little every single day in the past 8 years. She did not hesitate even for a single second while shooting him, this was the amount of hate she had for him. She had planned to use him further when the time comes, and she knew it was going to come very soon. She thought smiling sarcastically.

Hafiz came barging into her room, breaking her chain of thoughts, “Ji Hafiz bhai, kya hua” “Suman humne tumse phele hi kaha tha ki agar tum humare kaam nahi aayi toh tumhe kaat ke phekne me mujhe koi sankoch nahi hoga.. ek saal ho gaya hai aur mere bhai ko abhi tak tum jail se nahi nikalva payi ho agar tum yeh nahi kar sakti toh bol do mai khud kar lunga” Hafiz spoke in anger and determination. He had started hating her since she became Zoravar’s favourite. He felt he should be Zoravar’s right hand and not her as she was an Indian female and new to the group.

“Hafiz bhai” spoke Suman very calmly, “Zara aaram aur tamez se baat kijay, warna apko toh pata hi hai ki Zoravar bhai tak yeh khabar agar phuchi toh who bahut naraz honge, bachi mante hai hume woh apni. Rahi baat apke bhai ki toh waqt aa gaya hai aur uska plan bhi ready hai aap chinta na kare.”

“Mujhe bhi us plan ka hissa banan hai, tumpe aaj bhi mujhe bharosa nahi hai samjhi” Hafiz spoke a little more calmly this time, because he did fear Zoravar. But then he thought of a plan. “Suman mujhe iss plan me shamil hona hai, mere bhai ka sawal hai please samjho mera apna bas woh hi hai iss duniya me tum samajh sakti ho kissi apne se door rehna kya hota hai” he played his cards right Hafiz knew this would melt her and it did.

She included him in the plan, and they went on with it however somehow the army knew they were coming, and they were compromised. While running away Hafiz got shot on his leg. They somehow made it back to their base and Hafiz was very angry. He blamed Suman for the compromise saying she still works for the army. Zoravar did not doubt her but he had to do something to ensure there is trust in the group so he asked Hafiz to decide what Suman should do to prove her loyalty. Hafiz kept forward his demand “uss Captain ko raste se hata do, usne humare kaafi plans ko nakam kiya pichle ek saal me, toh tum itna toh kar hi sakti ho humare liye”, Hafiz knew she loved him very much and killing him is something she is not capable of. Suman very calmly spoke “Ji Hafiz bhai jaisi aapki marzi kaam jo jayega” Hafiz was shocked at this reaction as he expected her to refuse this immediately. Suman knew how they were compromised on her mission today and she would deal with that later. She walked away with a smug on her face as this is the exact thing she wanted right now. Why is the question no one had an answer to…?

So now we know why Suman hates Shravan so much and what he did all those years ago. Do let me know what you guys think if Shravan deserved being shot by Suman or not? Was Suman right in shooting him and using him just to make him pay fo what he did knowingly and unknowingly?

ok so it was a misunderstanding...nice do continue....is zoravar using her?

Originally posted by: Meena_J

ok so it was a misunderstanding...nice do continue....is zoravar using her?

Let's see who is using who here 😉

It might get a little confusing from now until everything is revealed clearly, so do bear with me please 🤗

I hope you guys (imaginary or not idk 😆) are enjoying the story, I just realised I have written all the dialogues in Hindi, so if you guys need English translations please do let me know, because I understand not everyone would understand Hindi.

Chapter 7

Zoravar “Thik hai, yeh behtar hoga, sab ko bahar bulao, humne unse baat karni hai”, Suman “Ji Zoravar bhai”.

Suman gathered everyone outside for Zoravar to address them, she had been in a discussion with him for the last 2 hours. Hafiz was very impatient knowing this, as he feared she must have convinced Zoravar to change the plan. He knew Suman was much more cunning than she looked, and he was right as Zoravar had devised a plan to get Shravan on board to work with them.

“Bhaijaan yeh aap kya kar rahe hai, woh dusre mulk ka ladka humare liye kyu kaam karega, maine usse dekha hai, who apne mulk ke khilaf nahi jayega, yeh ladki hume bewakoof bana rahi hai, mujhe toh lagta hai yeh dono mille hue hai. Aap isse kahiye us ladke ko maar de baas” Hafiz spoke with anger as he walked back inside with Zoravar.

“Hafiz tumhe humpe bharosa nahi raha lagta hai, hum yeh soch samajh ke hi kar rahe hai” Zoravar said calmly as he sat on his chair, “aur apni tameez kaha bhul aaye ho, tumhe malum hai Suman humari bacchi jaisi hai uske bare me jara adab se baat karo”

“Maaf kiyjeye bhaijaan, par apko malum hai hume uss ladki pe bharosa nahi hai, aaj humara bhai humare saath nahi hai toh sirf uski wajah se”

“Hum tumhara dukh samajh sakte hai Hafiz, hum bhi yahi chahte hai ki Hameez jald se jald wapas aa jaye, who aane wale mission ki sabse ahem kadi hai, aur isiliye humne uss ladke ko ek mauka dene ka socha hai”

“Thik hai bhaijaan, par hume yeh batae ki who ladka humare liye kyu kaam karega, apne desh ke kilaf woh bhi” “Hafiz, yeh sab hum Suman ke saath baat kar chuke hai, unhone ek umda plan banaya hai”

“Bhaijaan bura nah mane par Hameez humara bhai hai toh hume hak hai uski rihayi ka plan janenka” “Hafiz, mai janta hu woh ladka humare liye kaam kabhi nahi karega par apni dosti, mohabbat aur desh ke liye toh humare saath kaam karega” Zoravar said with a sly smile. Hafiz did not have the slightest of an idea of what was going to happen, but he was sceptical of Suman and her plans.

On the other hand, Shravan had received a call from the Delhi Army headquarter to report back immediately. He was confused on why he has called back when he was working on a mission.

Delhi Army HQ:

Shravan walked towards Brigadier Singh’s office, as he knocked on the door, he heard a deep voice asking him to come in.

“Captain Shravan Malhotra reporting sir”, Shravan saluted Brigadier Singh. “Please Captain Malhotra have a seat” he pointed towards the chair kept in front of him. As Shravan sat he was getting a little impatient, “Sir mujhe yaha is tarah…” Brigadier Singh cut him “Captain Malhotra, aap ek saal se kisi mission pe posted hai right aur abhi tak apne bahut acha kaam kiya hai, uss gang ke kaafi operations aap aur apki intel ki wajah se fail hue hai, aur isiliye army ne apko ek secret mission par bhejne ka faisla kiya hai, isme bahut khatra hoga toh mission ke details batane se phele aapko sochne ka mauka de raha hu, agar aap nahi…” “Yes sir, mai ready hu, aap bas mujhe mission ke details bata dijiye”

“Hmm, tumse yeh hi ummed thi mujhe, tumhe yaad hoga aaj se ek saal phele humari ek army officer Suman Tiwari gadhar nikli thi aur usse phasi ki saza di gayi thi par…” “Haan sir, I remember it very well” Shravan said clenching his teeth and fist.

“Who sab planned tha Captain, unhe humne ek mission pe uss gang ka hissa banane ke liye bola tha, aur ab woh apne maksad ke bahut karib hai, par hume intel mili hai ki unki identity compromise ho jane ke risk par hai, unhe humse support chahiye, aur army ko lagta hai ki aap iss mission ke liye sabse bhetarein officer honge, aap unke bare me jitna jante hai utna yaha aur koi nahi janta, aapko un logo ka ek hissa banana hoga aur Suman ki madad karni hogi” explained Brigadier Singh.

Shravan was shocked would be an understatement, as he tried to grasp the information. “Alright sir, mai plan karta hu ki kaise unke group ko join kar skata hu, mujhe thoda waqt dijiye” he spoke without thinking much at this point. “We have already planned everything Captain, apki story ready hai aur apko kal tak sab details mil jayegi. Yeh ek uncommissioned secret mission hai Captain toh dhayan rakhiye ki kisi ko bhi iski koi khabar na lage, apke seniors aur colleagues ko bhi nahi” “Yes sir” saying this Shravan got up and after saluting Brigadier Singh he walked out of the room, introspecting on all the information he has just received.

Thank you Meena for always commenting on my story, it is really motivating to see that someone is reading and appreciating the story 😳

oh wow now shravan is aware of the truth...there is more than what is being shown...nice..getting interesting...