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Posted: 7 years ago
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Shiv's poetry as recited by Sharanya in Friday 9th February episode

I am like ashes in a desert.

You are the prayer offered to god

I breathe and live for your sake.

Like a holy prayer, you are pious,

Sincere and graceful

My name you take in your prayers

I am a boat in your ocean of love

I am like ashes in a desert

You are my prayer..

The tone is one of humility, complete surrender of oneself before the beloved. Imagery is sacred. There is reference to faith, a belief in the virtue of love. Prayer is suggestive of a holy communication between two souls. Prayer, that which makes meek the lover before the beloved, yet exalts both at the same time. Shiv refers to himself as ash. Something that was but only its remains can be found.. that too in a place where very little survives.. as in the barren desert, dry , parched, thirsty for water. Finally he refers to the ocean of her love! which gives direction and buoyancy to the boat of his life... hamlet53 11.2.18

This post is for Alisha... who has dedicated a fine post to Shiv's shayri on our forum.. Nusi its for you, especially.. for alerting me about bypassing it in my Friday stance ... love hammie

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hammie... sweetheart🤗 ths s epic dear.. I jst can't thnk u enough fr giving soul to ths poetry... u make ths poetry even more pious fr us..
Actually Alisha want me to translate ths bt I was so scared I can never do justice like u did...❤️ indeed u a blessing to ths forum.. luv u..
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Thanks Hammie for explaining this shaayri! 😳
Was waiting for someone to explain it! The Urdu was too much for me 😆
And as usual you were brilliant with your words 👏
And thanks for mentioning me! 😳 Means a lot
😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: NusiSg

Hammie... sweetheart🤗ths s epic dear.. I jst can't thnk u enough fr giving soul to ths poetry... u make ths poetry even more pious fr us..

Actually Alisha want me to translate ths bt I was so scared I can never do justice like u did...❤️indeed u a blessing to ths forum.. luv u..



So, you were waiting for Hammie to explain ? 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you for posting this! It was a beautiful shayari indeed!
But I think this is written by Sharanya not Shiv... Because of his response to it...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alisha_Seth



So, you were waiting for Hammie to explain ? 😉

😆 or kia.. see I'm no good with words. . While hammie is pro.. so I request her.. u got na wat u want. . So mazze karo..😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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indeed was the beautiful shayri ...❤️ thx for translations Hemmie 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: NusiSg

Hammie... sweetheart🤗 ths s epic dear.. I jst can't thnk u enough fr giving soul to ths poetry... u make ths poetry even more pious fr us..

Actually Alisha want me to translate ths bt I was so scared I can never do justice like u did...❤️ indeed u a blessing to ths forum.. luv u..


hi Nusi..😊... I was just peeved with my self for over looking... see normally it was Namik's baritone voice only.. that sounded off... here in the clip it was reciting off.. hence I failed to catch the desired effect... which have to say.. Sharanya certainly caught on to... all her coy shy looks at shiv..
Alisha certainly deseves 👏 credit for dedicating a post to shiv's poetry... thanks for supporting me nusi... much love ,hammie

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Originally posted by: Alisha_Seth

Thanks Hammie for explaining this shaayri! 😳
Was waiting for someone to explain it! The Urdu was too much for me 😆
And as usual you were brilliant with your words 👏
And thanks for mentioning me! 😳 Means a lot
😊


hello Alisha... 😊 long time no see.. I had to dedicate the post to you. have to say Alisha, urdu is my mother tongue... and the joy I recieved intially hearing the verses was nowhere near in the translation . .. the words remind me of the song..Madno... thanks so much for your enocoraging comment... much love hammie
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alisha_Seth



So, you were waiting for Hammie to explain ? 😉


listen mate... hammie cannot beat your shyari post... Alisha its one of a kind and much needed.. shiv's shyari prepared us about all we never knew... about sharanya's past... 😃 love hammie

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