##EBI Extended Three Short##Part 3 updated pg. 6 - Page 2

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Happy to see some extended version of Ebi!!
As the ending was abrupt and disgusting with lots and lots of loopholes; it is very sweet and engrossing the way you writing this!!
Thank u dear that u liked my effort 🤗 as I was unhappy as well with it's abrupt ending so I decided to give it in my view. 😊 😊 😊

Tara is sad, of course; but Pari and Mj are with her.
Yes and soon MJ will give her a new companion as well 😉 😉 😉

You retained Vasu, and I loved it!!
She was the most adorable.
Yes actually she was 😊 😊 😊

Lagta hai Golu jaldi aa jayega!!
I loved the whole conversation scene of Pari and MriAra.
Yes absolutely 😊 😊 😊

Mj kuch jyada hi naughty ho gaya hai...!!
Humesha se tha but pehle chipa k rakhta tha apna ye shade 😉 😉 😉

Kally pakdi gayi...
I hope verification mei kuch gadbad na ho!!!
Let's wait and you will know. 😉 😉 😉

Nicely written!!
And Thank you for writing this!! :)

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Superb and Beautiful start Dear👍🏼👍🏼

thanks a lot Sam 🤗

Extremely happy to see extended version of EBI

At least our Mraira and Pari are together in Shekhawat Villa👏👏
Yes that was the place for them. 😊 😊 😊

Loved it the way Mj romanced with his Tara

You Described it very beautifully 👏👏

Aub Golu bhi miljayega humein 😳😳
Yeah sure you all will get the Golu soon. 😉 😉 😉

Finally Vasu is back and surely bunty will also come 😉😉
He has to 😆 😆 😆

It's good that Kalawati is caught👏

do char mukke bhi lugwadena hum sabki taraf se🤣🤣
Bilkul but us ka time nahi milega us k pehle hi us ka kaam tamam kar denge. 😛 😛 😛

Thanks for writing this⭐️

Very happy sweet heart🥳
Thank u dear 😃 😃 😃

Update soon !!!

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

reserved for Samreen

Originally posted by: arpita25

Lovely extended OS of EBI.👏
thanks a lot arpu 🤗

I was damn unhappy about the imperfect ending and the concept of leap as it irritated me.😔 Uper se the open ending where Kally was not caught. Vasu and Tara's brother Bunty was missing from the show as well.😒
There were so many loop holes in to the show and I thought to continue it in another way. 😊 😊 😊

But good that you continued in your own way Vartika.😊 That was so cute and romantic when MJ romanced with Tara and he wanted the cricket team.😉
Obviously he never gave up the idea of cricket team actually. 😆 😆 😆

More to that Pari entered at perfect time demanding for a brother.👍🏼 Kally is caught and now they are going for verification parade.😎
Yup now see what happens next 😛 😛 😛

I loved the sweet convo of MJ and Vasu.😊
cool bro and sis duet na? 😎 😎 😎

Do continue soon dear.

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

vertika see my comments on page one

unres kerdiya dear😛

Originally posted by: kumari27

Beautiful extended story 👏

Thanks for writing this woh bhi 3rd Oct.👍🏼
thank u so much sweety for your lovely response. 😊 😊 😊

Mriara & pari back to sekhawat villa .🥳

Tara is sad as no one with her today except park & mj.😒
Kahan itna bada bhara poora family tha but now their is no one.😭 😭 😭

Wow Tara didn't look back who hold her waist . how she don't know touch of her hubby. It was a romantic scene
The trust and the feel of touch shows the confidence level of love. 😳 😳 😳

Naughty mj ko cricket team chahiye aur kehta hai use Tara ke akelepan ki chinta hai😉

Park bhi saath hai mj ke BT she interrupt mj & he got irritated.😆
Obviously he doesn't want anyone to interrupt in their romance.😉 😉 😉

Wah tumne vasu ko include kiya.

Story maker khud hi apne characters ko bhool gaye the.

Its nice how she talked to Tara

Yup and hume yaad tha ki Vasu should have been here now. 😃 😃 😃

MJ & vasu convo Is too good purane din yaad aa gaye.👏
As usual they are truly lovely bros and sis.

Chalo achcha hua kallo pakadi gai.👍🏼

Pakad bhi jani chahiye na. 😛 😛 😛

Next update jaldi karna plz...

Kar diya dear 😉 😉 😉

Originally posted by: AartShefa

Superb yaar..

Very good start. .
Thank u dear and I am happy that you liked it. 😊 😊 😊

loved it..

Thanks for the pm..

Waiting for your next update. .
You will get it very soon dear and you wait is going to be over soon. 😉 😉 😉

Please do continue. .

Loves n hugs

Originally posted by: poorvi16

Hey di awesome part one of three short. 👏

I loved the naughty MJ and Tara has to help him now to get Pari a brother. 😳

Do continue soon.