##EBI Extended Three Short##Part 3 updated pg. 6 - Page 4

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desaiprachi07 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
A big sorry from my behalf for not commenting on part one and two. πŸ€”Though I am late but here are your deserving comments for each part:-

Well done nice start πŸ‘

I am watching it now a days and it's really interesting.😊 The way the story has been shown and the it ended had many loop holes. I had watched this show last time when the Bally track started.πŸ˜” But you chose a perfect point to start and give it a proper ending.πŸ‘πŸΌ Tara is still worried as Kala is still alive and now one demand from Pari that she wants a bhai and I am sure MJ will help Pari.πŸ˜‰ He is really naughty.😳 Vasu is still present in their lives and she is coming back soon. Sach me yaad purane dino ki yaad aa gayi.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Nice update πŸ‘ part two:-

Bunty is doing a job now and he come to know about that seeing MJ some where. 😊 MJ and his super cute jealous expressions. I just loved to see that finally Kally has died.😊 MJ was smart and I am sure policemen helped him.😊 Chhavi is still unable to believe that Kally has died. Just loved the emotional talk of Bunty and Tara.😭 His accuses were right he must have been informed about it.πŸ€” Continue soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Nice, thrilling and emotional update.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I think Bunty should have been in the show as well.πŸ€” Ermm Ermm Ermm Ermm Ermm Kalavati is killed this makes me very happy. 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Tara got his brother back in her life.πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ Is there something fishy gonna be happen in next update? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Update soon.

poorvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Nice update. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Emotional ho gayi Tara after talking Bunty from so long. I am happy that finally Tara's loneliness is going to be away. 😊 😊 😊

Continue soon.

Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

I liked it how Tara held Mrityunjay's hand as she was scared!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
She was frighten

Kalavati can never change and she is as narcissistic as ever!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳
What more is expected from her? πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Even now she is saying a dialogue which is almost a copy Shahrukh's dialogue from Don!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
After all she is Kalavati and it's her signature style now. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Kalavati tries to escape by grabbing the inspector's gun and holding him hostage!!!😈 😈 😈 😈
Very smart move by her.πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Tara cannot see Mrityunjay dying in front of her again!!!!
Obviously we can't too 😭 😭 😭

Mrityunjay and Tara again started their fight which they always use to distract Kalavati!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
Yahi plan humesha kaam jo aata hai πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Good that the police managed to shoot her in all this with Mrityunjay and Tara's help and finally Kalavati is dead!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
She is finally history now. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

Jaate jaate bhi kitna drama karke gayi but finally usse jaan chhooti!!!!πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
Vo to us ka style hi tha na πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Tara can't believe that finally it is over and I love the way Mrityunjay comforted her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
No one would believe it that us k happy days are now back πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

It is so good to see Bunty call Tara and great that he is coming back in three months!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
He must have been with his sister now.

The talk between Tara and Bunty was very emotional!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

He is angry at Nandu and rightly too as everything has happened because of her!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑
Yes actually Nandu was more responsible for all this mess created by Kally 😑 😑 😑

It was funny when Tara teased Mrityunjay and refused to tell him who she was talking to!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

That was damn cute na?? 😳 😳 😳
Yes that was πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Finally Vasu is back home!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Ye she is 😊 😊 😊

Vasu's meeting with Mrityunjay and Tara was also very emotional!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭
Yup finally is there in family who is still alive. 😊 😊 😊

Bunty is back and he and Tara had a tearful reunion!!!!πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—
Obviously she missed her brother so much 😭 😭 😭

It seems that Vasu and Bunty know each other!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊
You will get to know that very soon. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

This part is awesome!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thank u so much Shaina 😊 😊 😊




Thanks a lot dear for such lovely comment Shai πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Wow Nice Update
πŸ‘

thanks dear 😊 😊

Mujhe tara aur mj ka aikdosre ka haath pukadna bohot acha lugta tha Ebi mein ☺️

I can visualize that
SRK dialogue πŸ‘πŸΌ

Lol

SRK ki kahi hue saari baatein humesha sateek hota hai. 😳 😳

Kalawati ki kalakari gayi nahi abhi takπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺ
Finally she is dead😈
Jate jate bhi drama kerke gayi kally per jaan chooti humare Mraira kiπŸ˜ƒ

Sach me, she irritated us the most. Finally jaan chooti us se humesha k liye. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Yayy bunty is backπŸ‘
Itna kuch hogaya beechare ko kuch pata hi na chula😲
Shuker hai ke sare loopholes khol diye tumne
Budi meherbaniπŸ€—πŸ€—
Dil ko sakoon aub mila hai mujhe

Haan yaar, kisi ko bhi chodna accha nahi hai na.πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Love bhai behan ki batein ⭐️

Wow vasu bhi backπŸ‘
Bhai behen ka piyar
Hota hi bohot anokha aur piyara hai
Aub mujhe aupne bhai ki yad agayi😭😭😭

Haan aisa hi hota hai aur hona bhi chahiye.😊 😊 She has to be back hum us ko aise nahi chod sakte. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Kher junab jo howa acha howa
great written Vartika
Next update ko thora detail mein likhna
kuch romance bhi hojaye you know

πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Thanks a lot ab jab mai writer hoon to bilkul injustice nhi hoga. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Yes sure will write in detail.




Thank u so much Sam for such lovely comment πŸ€—πŸ€—
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: AartShefa

Awesome update dr..

I loved it totally. .
Thanks for the update. .
Loves n hugs




Hey thanks or the lovely comment. πŸ€—πŸ€—


Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

wow its a nice update!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

The hand holding part... loved it!!

Thank u so much 😊 😊


Kalawati jail mei baith ke bhi nautanki kar rahi hai!!
Thank god...
At last she is dead!!
MriAra ko ab jake shanti milegi...

Haan us k zinda rehte koi na koi drama humesha life me bana hi rehta. Ab to sukoon mil gaya un dono ko humesha k liye.

Bunty...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
Aur saath mei Vasu bhi...😳 😳 😳
After MriAra I always adore these two!!
Thanks to you at least tum dono ko dikha rahe ho...πŸ˜ƒ

Haan bilkul,
in dono ko serial waale hi humesha k liye bhool gaye par mujhe yaad raha in dono ko to yahan le liya.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

The update was a mixture of excitement and emotion,
Beautifully written by you!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

A big thank u dear
😊 😊

And a lot of thanks as you are sorting out all the loopholes!!!!

No need to thank me it was my opinion to sort them out.😊 😊

Update soon... 😊



Thank u dear for comment
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Wonderful update πŸ‘
Thank u dear 😊 😊

I like how Tara hold MJ's hand
Kalawati to kabhi upni aaday choregi nehi 😳
Again MJ and Tara fight brings the solution and Kalawati is dead 😈

Kalavati naam ka matlab hi hai Kala dikhane wali aur vahi vo kar bhi rahi hai.πŸ˜› πŸ˜› Finally her game is over and we can relax so as MriAra. 😊 😊

It is obvious Tara will be terrified bt comforts her 😊

Any girl would be.


You also brings back Bunty ⭐️
It is good to see him, in EBI they seem forgot him πŸ˜’
It is emotional scene where Tara talks to Bunty

Yeah he needed some screen space as well. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

It was funny Tara teased MJ that she is romancing with someone else πŸ˜†
Yea !!! Vasu finally comes home πŸ˜ƒ
MJ Vasu meeting is also very emotional

After a long time they met and vo bhi tab jab whole family is finished. 😭 😭


Bunty is also back πŸ˜›
It seems Vasu and Bunty know each other πŸ˜‰

You will come to know that soon
. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

It is also a very superb part. Waiting for next update πŸ˜ƒ



Thank u so much my dear πŸ€—πŸ€—
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: kumari27

Awesome update !!!!!

This chapter was full of emotions.

Thank u dear for liking it.😊 😊

Tara was scared when she entered police station.
It was nice how mj handled Tara

He knows very well where she needs his support. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Kalawati kabhi nai badal sakati.police station me bhi khud ko beautiful lady kah rahi.

Finally Tara or mj ki ladai me kalawati mari gai.


Kalawati ki kalaon ne hi humesha k liye us ko khatam kar dia and we are relaxed now. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†


Emotional scene of vasu & bunty entry.

Yes they needed screen space as well. 😊 😊


Yaar tum toh saare ebians ki muraad puri kad rahi apni story me.

😳 😳


Keep it up ...

I will try my best dear 😊 😊


Next update soon





Thank u dear for such lovely comment πŸ€—πŸ€—
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago

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