##EBI Extended Three Short##Part 3 updated pg. 6

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Hey my dear EBians πŸ€—

Here comes my Three short on EBI today which is the date when the show went off air finally. πŸ˜”
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I am sure my small effort will make you all smile. 😊 😊

Part One:-


She was standing at the window thinking about the past, the years when this whole mention had everyone around. Jairaaj, Aditya, Meethi, Vasu, Nirmala and Faheem Chacha but now there was complete silence in the whole house. The house which used to be full of life had become almost lifeless now. She was busy in her thoughts when someone circled his arms around her waist and put his chin on her shoulder.


"Tara..kya hua, kya soch rahi ho?"


She didn't feel the need to turn and find who it was as how can she not recognize the touch and voice of her loving husband who was now her life. "Kuch nahi Mrityunjay. Bus un dino ko yaad kar rahi thi jab is ghar mein itne log hua karte the ki kabhi sannata nahi raha itna. Par ab..ab to lagta hai..." She was stopped by Mrityunjay.


"Ab kya lagta hai?"


"Kab tak is tarah...pata nahi Mrityunjay yahan ab accha nahi lagta hai." And she turned to him and hugged him tightly.


"I know Tara, but ab mujhe hi yeh sab dekhna hai. Baba ka business aur un ka naam aur upper le jana hai. Humare yahan nahi hone se business mein waise bhi bahut loss ho chuke hain par ab mujhe yeh sab har halat mein theek kar ke hi rehna hai. Aur us ke liye you know mujhe yahin rehna hoga."


"Janti hoon but...sab ki bahut yaad aati hai." She said and sobbed a bit. "Kahin na kahin yeh darr bhi lagta hai ki Kalavati abhi bhi pakdi nahi gayi hai. Kahin woh phir se...wapas..."


He cut her in between, "Nahi...aisa kuch nahi hoga Tara. Ab kuch bhi nahi hoga aisa. Main ab kuch bhi nahi hone doonga tum ko aur Pari ko kyounki meri zindagi mein ab tum dono hi ho."


"Fir bhi jab bhi is baare mein sochti hoon dar jati hoon."


"To tum aisa socho hi mat, main hoon na tumhare saath. Par jab main nahi rehta tab mujhe fikar hoti hai ki kaun tumhe company dega."


"Tum ko chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Pari hai na, woh mujhe company de deti hai."


"Haan Pari to hai hi...phir bhi jab woh school chali jati hai tab to tum akeli ho jati ho na?"


"Phir bhi matlab?"


Mrityunjay tried to change the topic, "Accha ye sab chhodo mere pass ek idea hai tumhara akelapan door karne ka." He said looking at her naughtily.


"Kaisa idea?"


He picked her up in his arms, "Are sunti ho Golu ki maa, lagta hai Golu ke aane ka time ho raha hai." Tara couldn't get at first what he wanted to say but soon she understood. She smiled at him and hit his chest playfully.


"Koi kaam hai ki nahi aashiqui karne ke alawa tum ko?" she said.


"Dekho ab meri life ka ek hi aim hai. Ek to baba ka business samhalna aur doosra meri cricket team ke baki eleven members ko le ke aana." He said placing her down on the bed and leaning over her.


"Abhi bhi tum ko eleven players aur chahiye."


"Yes, ab we have Captain Pari na? Next player ke aane ka time bhi ho raha hai." He said leaning to kiss her. Their lips were just inches apart when Pari interrupted them.


"Dad." She entered in their room. Both of them got up and sat properly. Mrityunjay hit his head. Tara stopped him and laughed. "Kya hua? Aapke sar mein dard ho raha hai?" Pari asked cutely.


"Nahi beta, mere seene(chest) mein dard ho raha hai." He said irritated.


"Kya hua Pari beta aap ko kuch chahiye tha?" Tara asked her, ignoring Mrityunjay's nautanki.


"Haan..par aap dono mujh se promise karo jo mujhe chahiye woh mujhe doge."


Mrityunjay looked at her as if what was she going to ask, "Kya chahiye Pari?"


"No pehle promise karo."


"Promise, pakka wala. Ab batao aap ko kya chahiye?" Tara said.


"Aap bhi karo." She said to Mrityunjay.


"I promise as well."


"Mujhe ek bhai chahiye." She announced.


At first Tara and Mrityunjay were eager to listen to what she was going to ask but when they heard her wish, Mrityunjay smiled looking at Tara and winked at her. She blushed but asked Pari, "Accha kyoun chahiye aap ko bhai?"


"Mere aas pass ke saare bacche apne brothers and sisters ke saath khelte hain but mere saath khelne waala koi nahi hai. Mujhe accha nahi lagta akele khelna." She said making a sad face.


Mrityunjay gave a naughty look at Tara to which she gave him an angry look back. "To mumma mujhe bhi ab ek bhai chahiye."


Tara thought to play along, "Aur agar bhai na aa ke behan aa gayi to?"


"Nahi mujhe pata hai bhai hi aayega."


"Haan mujhe bhi lagta hai meri Pari ka bhai hi aayega ab."


Tara stared at Mrityunjay who winked, "To batao na kab laaoge aap log mera bhai?"


"Beta us ko lane ki koshish karne waale the jab tum aayi thi." Mrityunjay said naughtily.


"Woh kaise?" Pari asked with childlike eagerness.


"Woh na beta...tumhare papa ko jana tha na bahar to jab woh jayenge hospital to doctor se kahenge, toh doctor jaldi se koshish karenge ki woh tumhara bhai le ke aayein." Tara said to Pari.


"Accha to kya is ka bhi order karna padta hai?" She again asked.


"Haan jaise aap ko restaurant mein order karna padta hai na aise hi is ka bhi order karna padta hai." Tara told her.


"Ok, to ab aap log jaldi se jao aur order kar ke aao mere bhai ko."


"Haan haan zaroor karenge, to ab jao khelne Pari to hum order kar aayein." Mrityunjay said.


"Haan jati hoon." Saying this, taking her doll in her arms she left running giving a kiss to Mrityunjay and Tara.


"To kya kehti hain Susheela..hum apni Pari ke bhai ko lane ke liye kaam shuru karein ki naahi." He said in typical Bablu style.


"Susheela ka e kehna hai Pari ke baapu se ki vo bahut shaitaan ho gaye hain aaj kal. Abhi kuch nahi...chaliye jaiye apna kaam kariye." Tara said in Susheela's tone.


"Yahi to apna kaam hai na...Golu ko lane ke liye Golu ke maa papa ko abhi se mehnat start karni hi hogi na.." Saying this, he pulled Tara in his arms and started his romance.


Later next day:-


"Hello."


"Hello Tara bhabhi kaise ho aap?"


"Main theek hoon Vasu. Tu kaisi hai?"


"Main bhi theek hoon bhabhi, bhai aur Pari kahan hain?"


"Tere Bhai naha rahe hain aur Pari school gayi hai."


"Ok, chalo bhai se to baad mein bhi baat ho jayegi aap batao kaisi ho?"


"Main theek hoon, tu bata finally tu kab wapas aa rahi hai?"


"Bus after two months mera MBA over ho raha hai and I will be back to you all."


Tara smiled, "Haan Vasu jaldi se wapas aa ja na, ab ghar itna soona ho gaya hai mera mann bhi nahi lagta."


Vasu's eyes filled with tears, "Haan bhabhi bus aap, bhai aur Pari hi ab to meri life ho, baaki to sab.."


Tara's eyes moistened when Mrityunjay entered in the room and found Tara having tears in her eyes. "Kya hua Tara?" he asked.


Tara's voice chocked and Mrityunjay took the mobile from her hands, "Vasu, kaisi hai?"


"Bhai, kaise ho aap?"


"Main theek hoon..aur kya yeh rone dhone ka programme bana rakha hai tum dono ne?"


"Kuch nahi bhai woh to bus aise hi..."


"Ei moti tujhe pata hai na main tum dono ki aankhon mein aansu nahi dekh sakta."


She wiped her tears and said, "Haan bhai mujhe pata hai."


"To bus ab jaldi aa jaa jis se jaldi se tere liye koi ladka dekh kar apni bala doosre ke sar pe daal ke relax ho jaaon."


"Bhaaii.."


"Sahi to kaha na maine."


"Ab aa ke wahin rahoongi tabhi aap ko pata chalega bhai."


"Aa jaa kab se tera intezaar kar raha hoon main."


"Jaldi aaongi bhai, bye."


"Bye." And he turned to Tara. "Kya hai Tara aaj kal tum baat baat pe Nirupa Roy ho jati ho."


"Kya?"


"Aur kya, jab dekho tab rona start. Thoda apne handsome and romantic pati ka bhi dhyan rakha karo jo chahta hai tum hamesha romantic mood mein raho."


Tara smiled, "Kaun hai yahan handsome? Mujhe to nahi dikh raha koi." She teased.


"Accha to dikhaoon tum ko." And he started tickling her, "Aur dikhaoon?"


She started laughing hard and said, "Bus Mrityunjay, bus karo...bus bus..."


"Bus nahi abhi to start kiya hai." And in next moment he was loving her as usual.


After one month :-


"Can I talk to Mr. Mrityunjay Shekhawat?"


"Yes speaking."


"Sir aap ko ek news deni thi. Kalavati pakdi gayi hai."


Mrityunjay was surprised and happy as well but he didn't want to take chances this time. "Are you sure?"


"Haan sir maine check kiya hai, acche se verify kiya hai but phir bhi hum chahte hain ki aap ek baar police station aa kar verification kar de jis se hum aage ka kaam kar sake."


"Jee bilkul aata hoon main."


"Sir agar aap ko koi problem na ho to hum chahte hain ki aap Mrs. Tara Shekhawat ko bhi le aayein to accha hoga."


"Sure inspector I will make sure she would be there."


"Thank you sir."


That day evening:-


"Arre aaj aap jaldi aa gaye."


"Haan," he said silently. "Tara.."


"Haan kya hua? Sab theek to hai na Mrityunjay." She asked concerned.


"Go get ready, humein kahin jana hai."


"Kahan?" she asked curiously.


"Yeh tum ko raaste mein pata chal jayega."


"To Pari ko bhi saath le chalein?" she asked.


"Nahi..ghar me Joseph aur Dai Jaa hain na so no need to take her with us. Woh dekh lenge us ko."


"Mrityunjay tum mujhe dara rahe ho hum kahan jaa rahe hain?" she was confused as wherever they were going if Mrityunjay didn't want to take Pari along with them then it must be serious.


"Koi chinta ki baat nahi hai Tara, tum pareshaan mat ho." And he took her with him.


to be continued...


Links of all three parts:-


Part one

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Part Two


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Part Three



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Shaina_b thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tara is sad and lonely and the Shekhawat Villa is almost lifeless now!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

But she has Mrityunjay and Pari with her!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Somewhere she is also scared that Kalavati would come back but Mrityunjay assured her that he would not let anything happen to them!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

What an excuse Mrityunjay comes up with to get Golu!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

He hasn't forgotten his cricket team and now wants to bring the remaining eleven members of it!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Poor Mrityunjay!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Pari interrupted them just as he was going to kiss Tara!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Now Pari also wants a brother!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Mrityunjay kuch zyada hi naughty ho gaya hai and actually said to Pari that he was going to try to get her brother when she came!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Mrityunjay and Tara are soo cute and romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It is great that Vasu is coming back soon!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The convo between Mrityunjay and Vasu was adorable just like the good old days!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Mrityunjay can start his romance anytime and Tara teasing him was cute!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

I am sure that Golu would come soon!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It is good that Kalavati has been caught and I hope the verification goes well!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

This part is fantastic!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

After that abrupt and disappointing ending with tons of loopholes, it is soo good to see this extended version of EBI!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thank you so much for writing this on 3rd October, the anniversary of the ending of EBI!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—




Edited by Shaina_b - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW !!!! thank you for writing on the this day πŸ€—
We all disappointed with the ending πŸ˜”
But you write its extended version πŸ˜›

Good to see Mriara and Pari return their home.
Its obvious they feel lonely.
But MJ doesn't forget his cricket team πŸ˜‰
Pari also want a bhai πŸ˜ƒ
Ab to Tara ko Golu ko lana hi parega...
Its so our wish.
Vasu also coming πŸ˜›, show mai to uska kya hua kuch dekhaya bhi nehi πŸ˜•
Its good Kalawati is caught
What happened next, waiting for it.
Update soon πŸ˜ƒ

Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Happy to see some extended version of Ebi!!
As the ending was abrupt and disgusting with lots and lots of loopholes; it is very sweet and engrossing the way you writing this!!

Tara is sad, of course; but Pari and Mj are with her.

You retained Vasu, and I loved it!!
She was the most adorable.

Lagta hai Golu jaldi aa jayega!!
I loved the whole conversation scene of Pari and MriAra.

Mj kuch jyada hi naughty ho gaya hai...!!

Kally pakdi gayi...
I hope verification mei kuch gadbad na ho!!!

Nicely written!!
And Thank you for writing this!! :)
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb and Beautiful start DearπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ

Extremely happy to see extended version of EBI
At least our Mraira and Pari are together in Shekhawat VillaπŸ‘πŸ‘
Loved it the way Mj romanced with his Tara
You Described it very beautifully πŸ‘πŸ‘
Aub Golu bhi miljayega humein 😳😳
Finally Vasu is back and surely bunty will also come πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
It's good that Kalawati is caughtClap
do char mukke bhi lugwadena hum sabki taraf se🀣🀣
Thanks for writing this⭐️
Very happy sweet heartπŸ₯³
Update soon !!!
Edited by SamreenJ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely extended OS of EBI.πŸ‘ I was damn unhappy about the imperfect ending and the concept of leap as it irritated me.πŸ˜” Uper se the open ending where Kally was not caught. Vasu and Tara's brother Bunty was missing from the show as well.πŸ˜’ But good that you continued in your own way Vartika.😊 That was so cute and romantic when MJ romanced with Tara and he wanted the cricket team.πŸ˜‰ More to that Pari entered at perfect time demanding for a brother.πŸ‘πŸΌ Kally is caught and now they are going for verification parade.😎 I loved the sweet convo of MJ and Vasu.😊 Do continue soon dear.
Edited by arpita25 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful extended story πŸ‘
Thanks for writing this woh bhi 3rd Oct.πŸ‘πŸΌ

Mriara & pari back to sekhawat villa .πŸ₯³

Tara is sad as no one with her today except park & mj.πŸ˜’

Wow Tara didn't look back who hold her waist . how she don't know touch of her hubby. It was a romantic scene

Naughty mj ko cricket team chahiye aur kehta hai use Tara ke akelepan ki chinta haiπŸ˜‰

Park bhi saath hai mj ke BT she interrupt mj & he got irritated.πŸ˜†

Wah tumne vasu ko include kiya.
Story maker khud hi apne characters ko bhool gaye the.
Its nice how she talked to Tara

Mj & vasu convo Is too good purane din yaad aa gaye.πŸ‘

Chalo achcha hua kallo pakadi gai.πŸ‘πŸΌ


Next update jaldi karna plz...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb yaar..
Very good start. .
loved it..
Thanks for the pm..
Waiting for your next update. .
Please do continue. .
Loves n hugs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Tara is sad and lonely and the Shekhawat Villa is almost lifeless now!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Obviously there is almost no one there.

But she has Mrityunjay and Pari with her!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Yup soon her family will be complete.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Somewhere she is also scared that Kalavati would come back but Mrityunjay assured her that he would not let anything happen to them!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Obviously until she is punished or trapped how can they get relax? πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

What an excuse Mrityunjay comes up with to get Golu!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naughty boy with naughty thoughts. 😳 😳

He hasn't forgotten his cricket team and now wants to bring the remaining eleven members of it!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Pagal ho gaya hai. India ki increasing population k bare me nahi socha is ne. πŸ˜› πŸ˜›


Poor Mrityunjay!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Pari interrupted them just as he was going to kiss Tara!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Wrong entry and a perfect time πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Now Pari also wants a brother!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Mrityunjay kuch zyada hi naughty ho gaya hai and actually said to Pari that he was going to try to get her brother when she came!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Aur kya Tara needs a son and so as MJ.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ Pari ko in sab se jyada jaroorat hai. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Mrityunjay and Tara are soo cute and romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

😳 😳

It is great that Vasu is coming back soon!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

She has to after all it's her family. 😊 😊


The convo between Mrityunjay and Vasu was adorable just like the good old days!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yes brother and sister convo 😊 😊

Mrityunjay can start his romance anytime and Tara teasing him was cute!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Romance ka koi time hota hai kya? You can start it anytime. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

I am sure that Golu would come soon!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Oho you have many expectations πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

It is good that Kalavati has been caught and I hope the verification goes well!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

You will get to know that in second part. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

This part is fantastic!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thanks 😊 😊

After that abrupt and disappointing ending with tons of loopholes, it is soo good to see this extended version of EBI!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

To cover up all the loop holes of story πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Thank you so much for writing this on 3rd October, the anniversary of the ending of EBI!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—
I think the time was perfect na? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰





Thank u so much Shaina for comment πŸ€— πŸ€—
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khadeja

WOW !!!! thank you for writing on the this day πŸ€—
We all disappointed with the ending πŸ˜”
But you write its extended version πŸ˜›
thank u so much,
πŸ€— it's my pleasure to write on them.😊 😊 😊 The story didn't ended up well and I thought to give it a perfect wrap up. 😊 😊 😊

Good to see Mriara and Pari return their home.
Its obvious they feel lonely.

Yes specially when the whole house is almost vacant now. πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

But MJ doesn't forget his cricket team πŸ˜‰
Pari also want a bhai πŸ˜ƒ
Ab to Tara ko Golu ko lana hi parega...

Dono baap beti jab is ko support kar rahe hain to ab to hona hi hai.πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Its so our wish.
Vasu also coming πŸ˜›, show mai to uska kya hua kuch dekhaya bhi nehi πŸ˜•

Tabhi to mujhe Vasu ki yaad aayi bcz only she was safe after MJ, Tara and Pari.

Its good Kalawati is caught
What happened next, waiting for it.

You will get to know that soon.😊 😊 😊

Update soon πŸ˜ƒ



Thanks a lot for such lovely comment.πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago

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