ONCE UPON A TIME IN WONDERLAND (SS)||Complete

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: TINAMONI
Many thanks for the pm..loved to read all your ff or ss..they are so beautiful ..writen in such a lovely way..
While reading it..l go back to my teenage. .and my first love...
many thanks. .
Please update soon..will be waiting for your pm...

thanks for loving it sooo much 😳

updating soon😊

Quote

Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Previous update on page -22
------------------

It's Not Easy Being In Love

Next day, Tara unwillingly accompanied her mom to the palace. While going there, she stopped for a moment in front of the way which led to the forest.

"Leave this forest immediately and never return here."
Mrityunjay's voice echoed in her mind.

Aradhana patted her back and Tara left the place with her mom.

"Why look at the path on which you never have to tread?" Thinking this, she left for the palace.

At the palace, the Queen was waiting for Tara's arrival standing near the balcony watching the bloodline tree glowing.

"Your Majesty, Tara is here" said Aradhana bowing.

"Tara, come my child. Where were you from the past one week? Did you forget your Queen?" said the Queen coming near Tara. She caressed her face and took Tara with her.
" Aradhana I want to talk to Tara alone." Saying this, she signalled all the servants in the room to leave.

"Tara, what happened my child? I heard from Aradhana that you have become silent. Why so dear? Tell me what's the matter? I promise you it will be a secret between you and me."

"Queen..." she sobbed.
The Queen hugged Tara. "Don't cry my child. Tell me what happened to my Tara."

"Queen, I met a man in the woods. He saved me from life threatening attacks twice. He is very good and a noble man. He is a hunter. He doesn't have a family, just his mentor. I used to meet him secretly after mom left for the palace as she would never like me to go into the woods. We were good friends until ..." She stopped remembering her first meeting with him, his touch, their horse riding...

"Until...?" The Queen questioned seeing Tara lost in her thoughts.

"Until last week, when he rudely spoke to me and held me responsible for all the problems. He banished me from the forest." she sobbed.

The Queen hugged Tara.

"Tara fights happen between friends, but it doesn't mean you should sit back and wait for the other to start the conversion. You should initiate the talk once again Tara."

"But Queen, Mrityunjay is not like others..." Hearing his name, the Queen was amazed,

"Her friend is Mrityunjay! My son Mrityunjay!"

"Tara who is your friend?" she asked to confirm that she had heard correctly. The Queen moved to the balcony to see the tree which constantly reminds her of Mrityunjay being alive and healthy.

"Yes my Queen his name is Mrityunjay. He is a very good man. I don't know what made him so angry."

"Don't worry Tara. Tomorrow you will go back to the forest to meet him. He must be as sad as you are because he must be missing his friend." Saying this, the Queen smiled.

"You may go now Tara and don't be sad. Smile Tara, your smile is our life."

Tara left for home. After Tara left, the Queen was restless. Today, the urge to meet her son was greater than ever.

"Should I go now to meet him? But where will I find him?"

"I need to go. The King is out of town; I can leave in the noon and return to the palace before dusk. I will go to the same place where he met me last time. If I am lucky enough, I will meet him." Thinking this she called Aradhana.

"Aradhana no one should come in my room until I call for them."

As soon as Aradhana left, Nirmala changed her clothes to that of a normal civilian and left for the forest through a secret door which led out of the palace to a lonely area near the Enchanted Forest.

She quickly walked towards the place where she met Mrityunjay last time.
There was a man there who was searching for something on the ground. Seeing him, she called out, "Mrityunjay" in her eagerness to meet her son. The man turned to see who was calling for Mrityunjay.

The Queen was shocked to see that man. He was the missing prophet, who went missing after the birth of Tara. King Jayraj had sent many troops to search for him and Jayraj himself had gone to search for him but there was no trace of him. Everyone had assumed that he might have been killed.

"Prophet!" she exclaimed in shock. "You are alive!"

"My Queen" He bowed, "Yes my Queen."

"Where were you and why did you not come back home?"

"Queen do you remember the witch Kalavati?" he interrupted her.

"How could I forget her? She took my precious ..." She stopped in mid way remembering Kalavati's warning.

"Yes Queen she took the prince from you but before she could do anything to him, I took him with me and now he is with me safe."

"You mean you are Mrityunjay's mentor!" She asked in surprise.

"Yes my Queen but how do you know his name?" He was confused as the prince was kidnapped just after his birth and he was not named till then.

"Prophet, I met him here a few days back"

"So you were the woman who he met. He was sad after that meeting and was craving for his family"

"Then why don't you tell him about his identity and his family?" The Queen's eyes were filled with tears on hearing about her son's condition.

"It's not right time to tell him about all this. And from the past one week he has been disturbed with some issue."

"Prophet you know your daughter Tara, she has grown up into a beautiful young woman. She and Mrityunjay are friends but they have fought over some issue a week ago. Since then she is sad. He has banished her from meeting him. I have convinced her to talk to him and I am sure she will definitely come to meet him."

"I know Your Majesty that she has grown into a beautiful woman. Mrityunjay often talks about her. I think their fight is the reason for his disturbance. I will make Mrityunjay understand that he should talk to Tara."

"I wish I could meet him." The Queen's eyes were once again filled with tears.

"Oh! My Queen, don't be sad. The time for his return to the palace is coming. He will be with his family once again but for that auspicious moment there is still some time left. Queen you need to be strong till then."

The Queen wiped her tears.

"I should leave now." Saying this, the Queen left for the palace.

"Mrityunjay may I have a word with you?" said Guruji coming towards him.
"Guruji, you can talk to me whenever you want." He said coming forward while cleaning his hand.

"Mrityunjay, I think there is some problem with our method of searching for finding that vampire. I think we are searching for the wrong thing in the wrong place. I think the vampire flew away from here to some other place."

"No, it is not possible. A week ago I saw a vampire. She attacked Tara..." he blurted out.

"What! Tara was attacked!" Guruji was stunned. "So Kalavati has assigned the Vampire to hunt Tara."

"Yes Guruji, and for her safety I have banished her from the forest." he said taking a short deep breath.

"Do you think by banishing her you are protecting her from the vampire?"

"I felt that was the best for her." Mrityunjay muttered.

"But I think you have put her in great danger by banishing her. Now you would never come to know if the Vampire attacks her." Mrityunjay was quietly listening to the mistake he had committed.

"Instead of banishing her, you should have taught her how to fight with it. If she will know that she will always be protected. But now what is the use of saying this when you have banished her?" Saying this, Guruji went away from there.

"Yes ... Banishing her was not the only solution to protect her. I should have thought of teaching her the fighting techniques. Oh...How did I make this mistake?" Thinking this, he moved his hand through his hair, frustrated as now he was not going to get to meet Tara.

"Tara, I wish you would come here." He murmured looking at the scarf wrapped around his palm.

After reaching home, Tara was thinking about what the Queen had said and thought to give it a chance by visiting Mrityunjay the next day.

-----------------
Thanks for reading
Hit like button if you liked😉
Thanks Shaina_b for making it worth reading😊

Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Tara's heart wants to go to Mrityunjay but she can't as he had forbidden her to return to the forest!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Nirmala is very caring towards Tara and knew she had to speak to her alone!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara tells her about her friend Mrityunjay and the Queen is amazed to discover that Tara's friend is her son!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

She rightly advised Tara to go and talk to him again as he must be as sad as she is!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Nirmala cannot control herself and went to meet Mrityunjay but found the missing prophet instead!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

She is surprised to know that he is Mrityunjay's mentor and she tells him about the fight!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Poor Nirmala misses her son so much!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

Guruji made Mrityunjay realize his folly in banishing Tara from the forest!!!! 😳 😳 😳 😳

He wants to meet Tara now and thankfully Tara thinks of visiting him the next day!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

The chapter was very good!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Shaina_b - 10 years ago

Quote

Mukta

@Greys_Anatomy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#174

WOW ...maza aagaya ...amazing update 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Missing EBI so much !!!!!!!!!!!!

Fab work doll 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

Eagerly waiting for the next update 😃😃😃😃😃😃

Quote

Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Amazing 🤗

Now mj realising his mistake.

Tara will meet him .

Wating for their meeting.

Quote

Tina Moni

@TINAMONI

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Wow wow wow just wonderful..what a nice update. .

loved it...

the concept of the story is unique. .

u r a wonderful writer..

Please update. ..

Quote

Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Tara's heart wants to go to Mrityunjay but she can't as he had forbidden her to return to the forest!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔
Yes 😳

Nirmala is very caring towards Tara and knew she had to speak to her alone!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Our queen is smart 😊

Tara tells her about her friend Mrityunjay and the Queen is amazed to discover that Tara's friend is her son!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

😉

She rightly advised Tara to go and talk to him again as he must be as sad as she is!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
She knows her son very well 😊

Nirmala cannot control herself and went to meet Mrityunjay but found the missing prophet instead!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes, now its time to meet the missing members
😊

She is surprised to know that he is Mrityunjay's mentor and she tells him about the fight!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Poor Nirmala misses her son so much!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭
Her wait for MJ will finish soon 😊

Guruji made Mrityunjay realize his folly in banishing Tara from the forest!!!! 😳 😳 😳 😳
His mentor need to teach him everything thing
He wants to meet Tara now and thankfully Tara thinks of visiting him the next day!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes, 😃
The chapter was very good!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Thanks for your love 😃

Quote

Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: Greys_Anatomy
WOW ...maza aagaya ...amazing update 😊

Missing EBI so much !!!!!!!!!!!!

Fab work doll 😉

Eagerly waiting for the next update 😃

Thanks dear 😃

Please keep patience

Updating next part this weekend 😊

Quote

Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: kumari27
Amazing 🤗
Now mj realising his mistake.

Tara will meet him .

Wating for their meeting.

Thanks dear 😃

Yes, now they will meet soon 😊

Updating this weekend

Quote

Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: TINAMONI
Wow wow wow just wonderful..what a nice update. .
loved it...
the concept of the story is unique. .
u r a wonderful writer..
Please update. ..

Thanks dear for your love 😃

Updating this weekend

Quote

1 ... 16 17 18 19 20 ... 56

ONCE UPON A TIME IN WONDERLAND (SS)||Complete - Page 18

Related Topics

Explore Topics