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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow ...amazing ...was so eagerly waiting for the update πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Love is in the air 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

Great work Doll ...Eagerly waiting for next part πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just beautiful. ..have no words to express my emotions. .
loved to read all ur ff...
Please don't take so long to update. .
a very big thanks and hugs fir ur pms..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

It is great that Tara decided to follow Nirmala's advice and went to meet Mrityunjay!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
Future MIL ki baat too manani hogi naaπŸ˜‰

Now Mrityunjay is thinking how to meet Tara and talking to Maria about wanting to apologize to Tara!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
Maria ek loti friend hai MJ ki jis ke saath wo Tara ke bare mein baat kar sakta hai😊

Well he should have thought about this before being rude to her!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳
u know how dumb MJ is 😊

Good that Tara heard Mrityunjay talking to Maria and decided not to give in so easily!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
Tara ki Sautan se baat kar raha tha MJ too sunti hi naa πŸ˜‰ and after that how can she give so easily πŸ˜‰


Tara actually started shooting arrows at Mrityunjay to express her anger!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
hahahahaπŸ˜†


Now Mrityunjay called her a disaster and that was bound to make her more angry!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑
obviously...how anyone can call Tara that in front of her πŸ˜›

Finally Mrityunjay apologized and hearing his explanation Tara smiled and forgave him!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
she was waiting for his apology 😊

I loved their training session and indeed Tara is a fast learner!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
yes ...she is TaraπŸ˜ƒ

It was so good to see them ride Maria after so many days and both enjoyed it very much!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
yesπŸ˜ƒ

Nirmala knows Tara had met Mrityunjay just by hearing her voice!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
She is her MIL πŸ˜‰

She even knows when and how to save Tara from Aradhana's questions!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌWhat a perfect mother-in-law!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
yes 😊

Meethi is worried about Prince Aditya after the attack on him and Tara does her best to reassure her!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”




Nirmala was watching Tara with the two princesses and how well she got along with them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes 😊😊

She promised herself that Tara would become her daughter-in-law as soon as Mrityunjay returns!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

😳

Here Guruji noticed Mrityunjay smiling and was happy to see him happy though Mrityunjay tried to hide it!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

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The chapter was great!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Greys_Anatomy

Wow ...amazing ...was so eagerly waiting for the update πŸ˜ƒ

Love is in the air 😳

Great work Doll ...Eagerly waiting for next part πŸ‘


Thanks dear 😳

yes love is in airπŸ˜ƒ

aww ... I keep u waiting too much
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: TINAMONI

Just beautiful. ..have no words to express my emotions. .

loved to read all ur ff...
Please don't take so long to update. .
a very big thanks and hugs fir ur pms..

Thanks dear 😳

I know I don't update this FF frequently

I will try to update this FF at regular intervals 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Previous update on page 26

BEST LAID PLANS

Next day, Tara left home immediately after Aradhana left for the palace.


"Show me what you learnt yesterday." Mrityunjay stood at a distance from Tara folding his hands.


Tara grabbed her sword and swiftly moved it in the air. Then she remembered how Mrityunjay was practicing it the day she saw him bare-chested and followed the same act.

Mrityunjay clapped at her extraordinary learning speed.

He came near her and straightened her hand which was holding the sword.

"Hold it this way. It will add force in your attack."

Tara shivered at his touch. He was telling her many other things about the sword like how to hold it, how to move it but Tara was lost in watching him.


"Tara," he clicked his fingers.

"Y...yes..." she said, realizing she was doting him.

"Are you listening to what I am saying?"

"Yes I am listening."

"Really? Then show me what I said just now."

"Now what Tara? You said you heard him but you didn't. What will you show now?" She murmured.

"I am waiting Tara. Show me now." He said it loud and clear.

Tara started moving her sword left and right swiftly.

And then tried to take a quick round and ...

"Your sword should protect you, not hurt you." He said straightening her sword which was somewhat tilted towards her.

"Now attack."

As his sentence ended, Tara without any delay attacked.


"Good, but you need to put your full strength in your attack. Now see."

He attacked her. Tara was not able to manage herself and fell on the haystack kept there. Mrityunjay laughed seeing her on the ground. He laughed more because of the hay stuck in her hair.


Seeing her sad look, he stopped and made her stand. Then he helped her clean herself. There was a stalk of hay stuck near her left ear. He carefully picked it out and while removing it, his fingers touched her cheeks and she got goosebumps.

Seeing evening approach, he rode her out of the forest.

"Be careful. That vampire is still out."

Saying this, he galloped Maria back into the forest.

**********

Vampire Nandini was healed in the period of one week. And as Mrityunjay said, she was out for Tara and Prince Aditya.


In the palace, King Jayraj was worried after hearing news of the disappearance of two of its citizens.

"I don't know what is happening. How can people suddenly disappear?"


"You don't worry father." said the Prince coming into his chamber.

"Tomorrow I am leaving the palace to search for them." He added.


"But just now you were attacked and now again you want to leave the palace."

Nirmala was worried for the prince as any mother would be after a life threatening attack on her child.


"Mom I am not just your son, I am also the prince of this place and this place needs protection just like you think that I should be protected."


"He is right my Queen. Our people need protection and he is also the future king of this place. He should know how to protect his kingdom."

The King caressed her shoulder. Seeing no way to stop the prince, she agreed.

"Ok then go but be careful, because you are also answerable to Princess Meethi, your wife."

Princess Meethi heard all the conversation as she was standing outside the chamber.

"I need to stop him." She rushed to her room.

When the prince went to his chamber, he was surprised to see the princess covered with four blankets and the healer standing near her. He rushed to her.

"What happened to her?" He questioned the healer.

"Prince she is suffering from fever."

"She was all right today morning and suddenly fever?"

"Please come with me."

He took the prince some distance away from the princess.

"Prince she is ill because of insecurity, the attack on you and the disappearance of two citizens. Spend some time with her and she will be fine." He left saying this.

"I need to delay my search by two days."

He called Minister Fahim and ordered him to start the search and soon he would join them.



Here Tara's face was lit up with the same joy which was lost a week ago. Aradhana was happy to see her daughter's smile back.

"It must be the Queen's magic. I should thank her."

******


Next day Aradhana left early.

"My Queen." She bowed in front of her.

"Your words did magic on her. My daughter is back my Queen. Thank you."


"It's good news Aradhana. Your daughter is like a daughter to me too. I am glad to know she is back to her life." said Nirmala.

She was happy to know that Tara must have met Mrityunjay which had also made him cheerful but she was sad for Meethi and Aditya as again he was going on a search. One son's smile was coming back and the other's going.


Seeing the Queen sad, Aradhana asked, "What happened my Queen?"


"It's the prince. He is again going towards the forest and Princess Meethi is very worried about it."

After a while the Queen said,

"Aradhana tomorrow bring Tara here. She is the one who can make the princess understand."

She said in hope of Tara working her magic.

"Tomorrow she will be here."


Tara left home as soon as Aradhana was out. She walked fast to reach Mrityunjay's place because Mrityunjay had warned her about the vampire coming back. She didn't want to anger Mrityunjay whose anger had made her suffer for one week because of being away from him. Guruji was still there when Tara arrived. He was sitting in meditation. Upon seeing a man apart from Mrityunjay there, she understood it must be Guruji, his mentor. Govind opened his eyes upon hearing her footsteps.


"I am sorry I didn't mean to disturb you Guruji." she said.


But Guruji seemed speechless for a moment after seeing his grown up daughter after twenty years. She was beautiful just like her mother or one can say more beautiful than Aradhana.

"Her eyes are the same as Aradhana's. I missed her badly. I missed every single bit of her childhood. I wish I can tell her I am her father."

His eyes were filled with tears of joy. Tara was still saying something but her father was adoring his daughter, not paying attention to what she was saying.

"Time has arrived for her powers..."

Before he could complete his sentence, hearing Tara's voice Mrityunjay came out from inside with a knife in his hand as he was preparing breakfast.

"You are here!" He almost shouted.

"Yes I thought it would be good if we started early."


Mrityunjay sensed Guruji's eyes were on him asking what she was saying.

"Guruji she is Tara, who the vampire attacked that day. I am training her to protect herself."

"Good. You must start soon so that she leaves early for home."

Saying this, he caressed his daughter's head. For the first time Tara felt a father's love.


He invited her inside the house for breakfast. The breakfast table was filled with bread, salad, omelets and butter. She tasted the salad and it was very good. "Mrityunjay did you make this?"

"Yes Tara he is a good cook. Any day taste dinner prepared by him."

"Oh... This hunter seems to be more than just a Hunter." She smiled at her thought.

"I am leaving for the other part of the forest." Guruji said leaving the house.

Tara seemed confused and was about to ask Mrityunjay when he said,

"He is also searching for signs of the vampire."


After breakfast, Mrityunjay and Tara went back to the arena.

"Today I am going to blindfold you and then by using your other senses you need to attack."

"But Mrityunjay I am still not skilled in sword fighting, how would I be able to... "

"Do as I say." he ordered.


He wanted her to use her other senses as vampires move extremely fast and normal human eyes cannot catch them. Only careful attention to their movement can make one aware of their move. He blindfolded her with her scarf which was now his.


"Only your ears are your friends. Listen carefully. "

Tara stood quietly.

"Ouch..." She screamed when he beat her slowly with a stick.

"I said pay attention."

And he was about to swing the stick on her again when she held it. Seeing her so quick in learning, he was amazed.

"Okay." he said in a voice which didn't express he was impressed by her.

"Now pick up your sword, you need to practice."


Today Tara was better than yesterday. Something had boosted her capabilities. One can think it to be her father's blessings for her. But today she was fantastic.


They practiced till noon. After that, Mrityunjay left her outside the forest.

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Thanks for reading😊

Thanks Shaina_b for making it worth reading 😊

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Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally an update πŸ˜‰

Thanks alot ...i thought you forgot about the ff πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
Tara is too good and I loved the way she demonstrated her sword fighting skills to Mrityunjay!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

How can Tara pay attention when she has such a hot teacher??πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Mrityunjay laughed at poor Tara when she fell on the haystack!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

It was hot when he touched her cheeks while getting the hay out of her hair!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It reminded me of the scene in the show when Mrityunjay trailed the hay stalk on her cheek!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Prince Aditya is very responsible and wants to search for the vampire himself!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Meethi fell ill on just hearing about Aditya going on the search!!!

Doesn't she have any faith in his capabilities??😳 😳 😳 😳

Tara doesn't worry about Mrityunjay like that though she loves him a lot!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Nirmala is happy to know Tara and Mrityunjay have patched up and knows her son's happiness is back!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

She is already relying on her future daughter-in-law a lot!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Guruji and Tara's meeting was very nice and his feelings on seeing his daughter were expressed very well!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

How just like a father to want his daughter back home as early as possible!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Tara is very interested and happy to know that Mrityunjay is a good cook as well!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Mrityunjay teaches her to fight blindfolded and I loved it when Tara held his stick!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

She is indeed fantastic but Mrityunjay did not reveal how impressed he was with her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The chapter was very good!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Edited by Shaina_b - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Such a beautiful update. ..
loved reading it...
Please next update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Greys_Anatomy

Finally an update πŸ˜‰

Thanks alot ...i thought you forgot about the ff πŸ˜†


Yep , finally an update πŸ˜‰

I am not going to leave this SS in mid way😊

Just update will be in snail speedπŸ˜† so have patienceπŸ˜‰

Thanks for loving it πŸ˜ƒ

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