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Thanks 😊😊
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Been waiting for ur update. .Please please please update soon...
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Edited by Archi21 - 10 years ago
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Wow !! Archu awesome update πŸ‘
Loved it <3
Very well written πŸ‘πŸΌ
Sorry for the late feedback but enjoyed a lot reading your update :D
Keep writing & will be waiting for your next update ;)
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Archu dear.. When will be the next update? The story is so fantastic that can't wait...
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Originally posted by: BloomBelievix

Wow !! Archu awesome update πŸ‘
Loved it <3
Very well written πŸ‘πŸΌ
Sorry for the late feedback but enjoyed a lot reading your update :D
Keep writing & will be waiting for your next update ;)


No need to apologize dear 😊
Read when you get time

And thanks for your love πŸ˜ƒ 😳

Well, I am late in updating πŸ˜‰
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Originally posted by: Zehrin

Archu dear.. When will be the next update? The story is so fantastic that can't wait...

Thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ
Keep ur eyes n IF open, update is coming soon... πŸ˜‰
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DESPERATE SOULS


After meeting the Queen, there was only one thought in Tara's mind, "So what if he doesn't want to meet me? I am Tara who always follows what her heart says and for now it's saying that the Queen is correct and I should follow my heart. What more will happen? He will get angry. Ok, I am ready to face his anger. He might be rude from above but inside he is so gentle, kind and lonely. I am his only friend." And finally she made up her mind to do what she needed to do one week ago.



Next morning, as soon as Aradhana left for the palace, Tara got ready in no time with hopes of renewing her friendship. This was her perception of her relationship with Mrityunjay to convince herself. She was not sure about what to call her relationship with Mrityunjay, and so had named it friendship. She left for the forest.




Mrityunjay, at his place, was restless thinking of how to meet her, as he had banished her from the forest and as far as he knew Tara, according to that she was not going to come.

"Maria, do you know any way to bring her back here? I want to apologize to her for my rude behavior ...I have left her in grave danger... she needs to learn to protect herself. Although she knows archery but still she needs to know sword fighting to protect herself. I just want one single chance to apologize to her...she is my only friend...my... only..."


Meanwhile, Tara arrived when Mrityunjay was talking with Maria and heard half of the conversation between them.

"He wants to apologize...good." She smiled. "But I will not leave him so easily... I will... I will..."

She wanted to punish him in some way but hurting or punishing him was beyond her capability, whenever she thought about him she got all the more attracted to him.



When Mrityunjay turned to leave for his regular search of the vampire, he was surprised to see his wish granted so soon, he was in doubt whether he was dreaming or she was there in reality.


She grabbed his bow and released an arrow which made the pile of grass kept near Mrityunjay fall on the ground, confirming she was there.



"You!" he exclaimed."Can't you ever come without any disaster?"

She didn't reply to a single question. She turned her face away from Mrityunjay and folded her arms over her chest and made an angry face.

He sensed her anger," So she is angry. ...she has a right to be angry. The way I scolded her that day, anyone can get angry." Mrityunjay was thinking in his mind watching Tara's angry face.

"Is he going to say something or will he keep standing like a statue forever?" Tara slowly turned her head to see what he was doing when she saw him thinking something, "I will not talk to him until he apologizes." To get his attention, she shot another arrow at the barn's boundary.


"Tara will you stop this shooting?"

"Why should I? You said it that I am a disaster, so I am." She shot another arrow which narrowly missed Mrityunjay, grazing his arm, making a cut in his shirt's sleeve.


"Ok, I am sorry. I didn't mean that" he said trying to take the bow from her.

"I just wanted to protect you from the vampire, so I talked rudely. ..." he grumbled and finally was able to take the bow from her.


She loosened her tight grip on the bow when she heard his justification. "So he did it to protect me!" A smile came on her face indicating to Mrityunjay that his friend was no longer angry.

His heart felt some relief seeing her smile.


"If you want to protect me, teach me how to protect myself." said Tara making a face as if she was still not satisfied with his justification.

"I will teach you sword fighting." replied Mrityunjay in a hurry. He didn't want to lose his friend again.


"Ok. So when are we starting?" she asked enthusiastically.

"Today...right now"




He brought two swords and handed her one. Tara, who was busy cuddling Maria, was not able to manage herself when he gave her the sword and that resulted in her dropping the sword.


"Don't you know how to talk to a woman?" She shouted.

"Pick up that sword," he said without caring what she was saying.

"He will never change." She grumbled and then lifted the sword.



"First thing, the sword is to protect yourself, not to harm you. So use it carefully." He said, correcting her hold on her sword, which she was holding the opposite way which put the pointed end towards her.

"Hold it." He then moved the sword swiftly in air making a swishing sound and then signaled Tara to do the same.


Tara followed his instructions and did exactly what he said and copied him.

He was impressed to see her grasping power.

"You will learn soon." Saying this, he positioned himself to attack.

"Now protect yourself." He attacked her. She perfectly covered herself by moving her sword to resist Mrityunjay's attack. Although his attack was not light like what is expected during training time but Tara was able to handle it.

Till noon he showed her some of the basic moves and in this way her first day training session went.



"Okay now training time over. I have to go on my duty." Saying this, Mrityunjay kept his sword and brought Maria.


"Come I will drop you outside the forest." Saying this, he put his hand forward for Tara to hold it and get on Maria.

After one week, Tara once again enjoyed riding. Mrityunjay too, was happy to ride Maria with Tara. They soon reached outside the forest. He wanted this ride to last for a few more moments but it ended too soon.

"Tomorrow come on time." Saying this, Mrityunjay turned his mare and rode back inside the forest.


Tara was happy and thought to thank the Queen for her advice and marched towards the palace.




Nandini recovered from her injuries and was again on the move to find Tara and Prince Adi. This time, she was furious.

Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Tara reached the palace and went straight to the Queen.

"My Queen!" She bowed.

The Queen was standing near the windows watching the bloodline tree swinging happily. She turned after hearing the rejoiced voice of Tara. She understood Tara had met Mrityunjay.


"That's my Tara." Saying this, she moved towards Tara and hugged her.
"Finally my son met his friend."

"Your son!" Tara was confused. Queen Nirmala realized that she had just revealed the secret in front of Tara.

"Yes my son. I am sure he must be near Aditya's age." She covered it up.

"Oh...yes he is slightly older than the Prince."



The Queen diverted the topic to her meeting with Mrityunjay.


"Queen he is training me in sword fighting."

"That's good Tara. Now you will be skilled in one more fighting technique."



Aradhana came to the Queen's chamber after hearing from the guards that Tara was here.

"My Queen." She bowed.

"Aradhana see our Tara is back. Now no need to worry about her."

"Yes my Queen." Aradhana saw the spark of life once again in Tara's eyes.

"Tara I think you should meet Princess Meethi."

The Queen knew Tara might be questioned by Aradhana about the reason of her sadness and then of being happy, and so to save her, she sent Tara away from her room.





"My Princess." Tara bowed in front of Princess Meethi.

"Tara." The princess hugged Tara.


"Where were you? And why are you bowing in front of me? I am your friend and friends never bow, they hug."

"Thanks for your love Princess. I was quite busy somewhere."


Princess Meethi took Tara with her to the garden and sat there.

Like old friends, they started talking. Suddenly the Princess's face grew sad when Tara questioned about the Prince.


"What happened Princess? Is everything fine?"

"Tara after that attack on the Prince, my heart is never at rest when he is out."

"No worries my princess. The Prince knows how to protect himself." Tara knew her words were not enough to convince the worried heart of a wife who is deeply in love with her husband but then also she gave it a try.

"This time he is on a survey of the kingdom's border." said Meethi touching her ring which was a gift from the Prince.



"Tara!" Vasundhara hugged her from behind. "Where were you? I have so much to talk to you. Come ...come with me." Princess Vasundhara dragged Tara from her seat. Tara chuckled and followed her.


Queen Nirmala was watching all this from her chamber.
"As you have said my King, Tara will be our elder daughter-in-law as soon as Mrityunjay returns."




Today, when Guruji returned from his search of the vampire, he was happy to see Mrityunjay happy. "It's good to see you smiling." Mrityunjay made a very serious face on seeing he was caught. After a few moments, he asked, "Guruji is there any sign of the vampire?"


"Not yet. But soon there will be as the past week was enough for her to recover from the wound given by your arrow."

Vampires recover very fast but if wounded by a silver tipped arrow made of special wood, it takes time for them to heal.

"I need to train her as soon as possible." Mrityunjay thought.
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Thanks for reading.
Thanks Shaina_b for making it worth reading
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Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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It is great that Tara decided to follow Nirmala's advice and went to meet Mrityunjay!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Now Mrityunjay is thinking how to meet Tara and talking to Maria about wanting to apologize to Tara!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Well he should have thought about this before being rude to her!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Good that Tara heard Mrityunjay talking to Maria and decided not to give in so easily!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Tara actually started shooting arrows at Mrityunjay to express her anger!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Now Mrityunjay called her a disaster and that was bound to make her more angry!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑

Finally Mrityunjay apologized and hearing his explanation Tara smiled and forgave him!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved their training session and indeed Tara is a fast learner!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

It was so good to see them ride Maria after so many days and both enjoyed it very much!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Nirmala knows Tara had met Mrityunjay just by hearing her voice!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

She even knows when and how to save Tara from Aradhana's questions!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌWhat a perfect mother-in-law!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Meethi is worried about Prince Aditya after the attack on him and Tara does her best to reassure her!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Nirmala was watching Tara with the two princesses and how well she got along with them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

She promised herself that Tara would become her daughter-in-law as soon as Mrityunjay returns!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Here Guruji noticed Mrityunjay smiling and was happy to see him happy though Mrityunjay tried to hide it!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

The chapter was great!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Edited by Shaina_b - 10 years ago

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