Bas Ek Baar Keh Do...(SS)||Last Update on PG 68|| - Page 12

Originally posted by: BlueJasmine

Ek muskurahat jo mili hain barson baad...
Toh ankein bhar ayi meri..
Kise khabar thi k ... Uss masoom mulakat ne boonegi jaal ...
Aur chalegi chal itni gehri...

waah. .. waah 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: -lake-

such a beautiful chapter...
you portrayed everything so well...
thankxx for pm.

thanks for loving it 🤗

Originally posted by: TINAMONI

Just beautiful. .don't have words to describe. ..lovely just awesome. .

Please update soon..

aww. ...Thank you 😃 🤗
update ... coming soon 😊

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Its so lovely story Archu...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">beautifully described their emotions...pain...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">So awesome...loved it...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Update soon...</font>

thanks Nira 😃 🤗

Originally posted by: Ananya80

Beautiful Update Archu.waiting for next part.

thank you 😃
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Originally posted by: ShagufElina

First... Sorry... For Late reply...

Extremely... Dil se sorry Archu...

Now here my comment...

Introduction... Part...


Ahhh... Yeh hai Mumbai meri Jaan...

Do Bande Zindagi se haare... Aur jinhe Nainitaal pukaare...

Beautiful start... Mumbai ki zabaani...

Zabardast Archu... Waiting...

Excited... Aage kya hoga...

aww ... don't feel sorry 😊
thanks for loving it 🤗

Originally posted by: ShagufElina

Nainital Discovery...

Ohhh Archu... How beautifully u described the beauty and nature of Naintal...

Mumbai ka letter...

Koyal ka paigaam...

RP and Suraiiyya... How perfectly u fitted the role...

Zabardast...

Yah padh kar... I m now in Nainital and MriAra Land... Totally...

haha. . Ek saal pehle Nainital jane ka use kiya hai 😉

u r in MriAra land 😛
Thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: ShagufElina

Misunderstanding...

Ahhh... Archu... Main kya kahun... 😃

Bass ek baar sach mein tum bhi keh do... Itni achhi story... Concepts ... Lines...

Ek ek emotion... Ek ek act... 👏

Rp ka smirk...

MriAra ki nazrein... 👏

Rp ka jhoot... 👏

Mj ka Vasu ko do baar bachana... ❤️

Yug ka aana...

👏

itna acha laga 😲 ... ab mujhe bhi read karna phir se. ... aisa kya hai 😕

thanks for loving it so much 😃
🤗

Originally posted by: ShagufElina

Some clearance...

Ohhh God Archu... ❤️

Maar hi daalogi...

Apne lafzon se yunh humaara qatal karte raho... ...
Hum ishq ke maaron ko yeh dard bht bhaya hai...

I m loss of worda Archu...

Mj aur Tara ka clearance...

Rp ki chori pakdi gayi... 😆

Nandu paglu ne achcha hi kiya...

Nature of Nainital... Evry place...

Mountain... Jharna... So beautifully described...

Mj: lover point cum sucide point... Hahahaha... Bht sahi...

Grp photo...

Ek dusre ke aansun ka andaaza donon ko hai... 👏

haha ... mera tumhe marne ka koi irada nahi hai 😉
Nandu. .. pagal hi sahi par hai bade kaam ki 😃

thanks shagu
🤗

Originally posted by: ShagufElina

Last Day...

Waah kya describe kiya... Mount everest ki beauty ko...

Mj ka Tara ko dekh shock... Uski. Smile par tajjub... Kya baat yaar... Tum ek ek emotions aise describe karti ho...

Waise bhi... I m. Totally in MriAra land...

Mj ka tara ko bachana... 👏

Boating...uska Tara ko dekhna...

Wow... Its awsummm...

Mj ka imagination... Ohhh its so beautiful... Tulips ke beech khadi ek Apsara Tara...

Tara ne ref scarf kiske liye kahrida hai...

Mj ne sketch banaya... Wow

Wow wow wow...

Aise sitam hum dhaaya karo...
Tera yeh zulm bada meetha hai...

thik hai koshish karti rahugi aisa likhne ki 😊
thanks for loving it