Bas Ek Baar Keh Do...(SS)||Last Update on PG 68|| - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Its so lovely story Archu...
beautifully described their emotions...pain...
So awesome...loved it...
Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful Update Archu.waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
First... Sorry... For Late reply...

Extremely... Dil se sorry Archu...

Now here my comment...

Introduction... Part...


Ahhh... Yeh hai Mumbai meri Jaan...

Do Bande Zindagi se haare... Aur jinhe Nainitaal pukaare...

Beautiful start... Mumbai ki zabaani...

Zabardast Archu... Waiting...

Excited... Aage kya hoga...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nainital Discovery...

Ohhh Archu... How beautifully u described the beauty and nature of Naintal...

Mumbai ka letter...

Koyal ka paigaam...

RP and Suraiiyya... How perfectly u fitted the role...

Zabardast...

Yah padh kar... I m now in Nainital and MriAra Land... Totally...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Misunderstanding...

Ahhh... Archu... Main kya kahun... 😃

Bass ek baar sach mein tum bhi keh do... Itni achhi story... Concepts ... Lines...

Ek ek emotion... Ek ek act... 👏

Rp ka smirk...

MriAra ki nazrein... 👏

Rp ka jhoot... 👏

Mj ka Vasu ko do baar bachana... ❤️

Yug ka aana...

👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Some clearance...

Ohhh God Archu... ❤️

Maar hi daalogi...

Apne lafzon se yunh humaara qatal karte raho... ...
Hum ishq ke maaron ko yeh dard bht bhaya hai...

I m loss of worda Archu...

Mj aur Tara ka clearance...

Rp ki chori pakdi gayi... 😆

Nandu paglu ne achcha hi kiya...

Nature of Nainital... Evry place...

Mountain... Jharna... So beautifully described...

Mj: lover point cum sucide point... Hahahaha... Bht sahi...

Grp photo...

Ek dusre ke aansun ka andaaza donon ko hai... 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Last Day...

Waah kya describe kiya... Mount everest ki beauty ko...

Mj ka Tara ko dekh shock... Uski. Smile par tajjub... Kya baat yaar... Tum ek ek emotions aise describe karti ho...

Waise bhi... I m. Totally in MriAra land...

Mj ka tara ko bachana... 👏

Boating...uska Tara ko dekhna...

Wow... Its awsummm...

Mj ka imagination... Ohhh its so beautiful... Tulips ke beech khadi ek Apsara Tara...

Tara ne ref scarf kiske liye kahrida hai...

Mj ne sketch banaya... Wow

Wow wow wow...

Aise sitam hum dhaaya karo...
Tera yeh zulm bada meetha hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Last Day... Part B...

Ohhh its so beautiful...

Camp fire mein aakhir... Pata chal hi gaya...

Tara ka ganaa... Mj ka guitar bajana...

Ohhh woh scarf Mj ke liye...

Cigarette case... Tara ne le liya... Wow... 👏

Again he sketched...

Just beautiful... 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Koi mujhko yunh mila hai jaise banjaare ko ghar...

Ohhh god Archu... This song... Is just perfect for thm...

~dard mere wo bhula hi gaya kuch aisa
asar hua
jeena mujhe wo sikha raha~

He remembered their talk at lover's
point her view on life, her smile which
was hiding her pain which made him
realise his pain was negligible in front of
her pain.

So so perfect... 👏

Chot usse lagi hai usse phir kyun... Mehsoos mujhe ho raha...

Dil tu bata de kya hai iraada tera... 😳

Kuch palon ka saath tha humaara...
Par tum jeene ke bahane de gaye... .. ⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago
Innna Bada waala Thank u... Archu meri jaan...

Kya zabardast likha hai...

Main toh padh ke ab do din tak MriAra dreamland mein hun...

Mwaahhh... Mwaahhh...

Extremely Sorry... For late reply... I knw...

Late hai... Phir bhi...

Archu yeh bht zabardast hai... I can feel every emotion... Every pain...

Zyaada lafz nahi aate mujhe kehne ke liye.. ...

Its beyond the words limit...

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