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Archana

@Archi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: faizari
OMG ...Archu

its mean,true love can never be hidden

the way u express their feelings is so beautiful⭐️

fabulous lyrics👍🏼

Thanks for this amazing story🤗

thanks for loving it 😃

after reading wonderful comments i think i need to read my own write up to feel those beautiful feelings

Edited by Archi21 - 11 years ago

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Tasnim jui

@BlueJasmine

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

I'll be in love with u forever...deep inside my heart u were never...if u took my heart and tore it apart...i'll be still love u forever...

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Archi my love..my gundi... 🤗

Life has been very eventful for me...time passes like wind...there was a time when you had all the leisure to stand there and gaze- adore- get intrigued by things you used to love...

Then the same interest shifts to someone special...you would go and do anywhere and anything for that certain person- and that rush in your blood to see him/her would be at jet stream...

Today when one turns back to see all those moments..you call it nostalgia.

@The duppatta scene strikes a cord for me...recall the most famous song - 'Chudijo khanki haathon main' by Falguni Patahk
Love the silent love..the authority he feels he has on her...'my Tara'
aww adorable😳

@truth n dare reminds me of one of my SS..😉Sing aa songgg...pagal ladkaa...kuch aur bhi pucha hota toh woh deydetii..😉

The proposal thing..have no words to describe how gladdened I feel. (lolz ITNA likhney key baad bhi I say I dnt have words to describe😆 )

And that is what I felt reading this SIMPLE yet extra ordinary emotional journey of MriAra...their integrity -their want- that desire to have JUST one glimpse of the person they once had crush on..ahh superb!⭐️
This what it is like to relive the AGE OF INNOCENCE.

@PS: mind u this is the first and only stretched😆- from the heart comment I have given to any and I mean ANY write till now..nt cause ur my gundi or anything..but the shear feel of this heart warming write- that has pushed me to write my deeper feelings. The diary talk was superb idea..so innovative...TALENTED MS!!!👏👏👏

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: BlueJasmine
I'll be in love with u forever...deep inside my heart u were never...if u took my heart and tore it apart...i'll be still love u forever...

thank U for these wonderful lines 👏

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Pankhis...

ur wonderful comments here are making me 😭

Thanks for loving it so much
🤗

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Isa_de
good ending...

thanks dear 😃

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: sankalp_prapti
Archi my love..my gundi... 🤗

Life has been very eventful for me...time passes like wind...there was a time when you had all the leisure to stand there and gaze- adore- get intrigued by things you used to love...

Then the same interest shifts to someone special...you would go and do anywhere and anything for that certain person- and that rush in your blood to see him/her would be at jet stream...

Today when one turns back to see all those moments..you call it nostalgia.

@The duppatta scene strikes a cord for me...recall the most famous song - 'Chudijo khanki haathon main' by Falguni Patahk
Love the silent love..the authority he feels he has on her...'my Tara'
aww adorable😳

@truth n dare reminds me of one of my SS..😉Sing aa songgg...pagal ladkaa...kuch aur bhi pucha hota toh woh deydetii..😉

The proposal thing..have no words to describe how gladdened I feel. (lolz ITNA likhney key baad bhi I say I dnt have words to describe😆 )

And that is what I felt reading this SIMPLE yet extra ordinary emotional journey of MriAra...their integrity -their want- that desire to have JUST one glimpse of the person they once had crush on..ahh superb!⭐️
This what it is like to relive the AGE OF INNOCENCE.

@PS: mind u this is the first and only stretched😆- from the heart comment I have given to any and I mean ANY write till now..nt cause ur my gundi or anything..but the shear feel of this heart warming write- that has pushed me to write my deeper feelings. The diary talk was superb idea..so innovative...TALENTED MS!!!👏👏👏

SIA⭐️

I am feeling to be very person who received such a long and length comment 😃😃😃
You borrowed time from your busy schedule to write such lovely and detailed comment
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

@time yes its true time fly's
@rush 😳😉

@dupatta: you caught me their I was imagining MriAra meeting in parking lot and that song strike my mind 😉

@My Tara: while writing these words I never thought it had such a strong impact 😛

@Truth and dare : Boy is silly naa took 10 years to realize his love 😆

@proposal I am glad that scene made you speechless😃
@AGE OF INNOCENCE: Thanks Sia⭐️ you explained it well in one para what i tired to explain in this OS 😃

@Diary Talk :😆 thanks for liking it

@stretched comment : Sia I am feeling on top of the world after knowing its your first comment direct from heart 😃 😃😃😃
LOVE your feelings on my write up 😃

words are sort to explain my happiness after reading your comment 😃

Thank YOU
🤗🤗🤗
Ur Gundi😃

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: tina_28
waah-waah👏waise naam toh Mj n Tara diya hai per qualities vicha ki kyo de di hain😕😆

haha too good😆

@Ab Archi ko he pata hai 'ISS PYAAR KO KISKA NAAMEdiyaa hai😉'

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: sankalp_prapti

haha too good😆

@Ab Archi ko he pata hai 'ISS PYAAR KO KISKA NAAMEdiyaa hai😉'

it all depends upon ur imagination
😉
i imagined different MriAra from there character in EBI

sia
shhh...kuch naa kaho 😳

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BloomBelievix

@BloomBelievix

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

First of all sorry for the late reply archi.
I had read all os parts and I liked your song
Dedication specially raabta and meri ashiqqi
Song they both are mine favourite songs 😳
And I didn't knew that dairies have power of
Teleportation 😆 😆 archi.
The curiosity of mriara before party
Is wonderfully written up archi 👍🏼
The moments of mriara adoring each other
Is so lovely and touchy archi 😳
And the ending is perfect archi
Excellently written up dairies archi

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