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Tina Moni

@TINAMONI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Simply wonderful

Reminded me of my 1 love and all those ones in a life time fillings !!!!!!

Please update soon!!!!!!

Eagerly waiting! !!!

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fraser

@fraser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

need to stole this two diaries to cut the curiosity cat :)

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Archana

@Archi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: TINAMONI
Simply wonderful
Reminded me of my 1 love and all those ones in a life time fillings !!!!!!
Please update soon!!!!!!
Eagerly waiting! !!!

thank u dear 😃

My write up reminded u some one 😉

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Archana

@Archi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: fraser
need to stole this two diaries to cut the curiosity cat :)

plz don't steal them as today last part is coming 😊

Edited by Archi21 - 11 years ago

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sia

@Sia889

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Archi21
Today while watching sky at night I saw a bright Star, and suddenly a face surfaced in my mind . It was a girl's face ..it was her face ...It was Tara's face ... I am shocked today , how after so many years suddenly her face surfaced in my mind .Her eyes ...the way they use to smile...her eye lashes...their raising and falling while talking ...her voice...

ayee hayee,, fantasizing Tara..😉

Itna acha likhti ho ladkiii..ur too kind to like my bakwas😆no nt fishing for compliments..but this is very fine work!👏

its sucha good feeling to see someone u like...likes u in turn..love pay faith aur badh jata hai..thanks for this

I listen that voice closing my eyes it was so full of feelings and emotions that I got driven in that voices melody. After that voice finished its singing I opened my eyes and saw what was more of unexpected to me ...the student who sang just now was Tara...what!!! this Tara can sing so beautifully . I never dreamt that some one can sing so beautifully...her voice is so melodious ...I never heard her before .How can I hear her voice in class, she barely talks with any boy in class.

offooo...music say dil-wa pay war-wa kiya hai ladkiney😆MJ is like babe is sings beautiful and is even more beautiful😉

Tara was beautiful girl ...I noticed this On Teachers day. On teacher day we were wearing informal dress . Tara was wearing a salwar-kurta . It was a plain salwar -kurta but she was looking beautiful in that simple dress. There is a saying "Beauty lies in simplicity" she was proving it right .

aww..that is lovely!!

Such awesome stuff u write gal..dil khush karditta gundeyney👏

Mj is all smitten like a kitten to our tweety bird Tara😆sweet.

That was awesomeee

So loving this OS...sorry or the late..lekin I thoroughly enjoyed reading it🤗
Keep up the fine work⭐️⭐️⭐️

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Dear Pankhis ...

This is the last update of this extended OS.

I have tried my best to write it.

It's very long and so I divided it into two posts.

I mixed Tara's and Mrityunjay's diary here. So to understand it, you need to follow the color pattern.

PINK for Tara

and

BLUE for Mrityunjay.

I hope you are able to understand this.

Enjoy reading.

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Thanks for reading

Thanks ⭐️Shaina_b⭐️ for making it readable

Diary Talk

Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Part 5 - MriAra Diary

Wednesday, 9th Apr 2014

10 pm

Dear Diary,

"A single moment can change your life."

I knew this sentence but today I know its real meaning.

So many things happened in a single day. In one night so much to tell you but don't know from where to start. Let me take a breath first. Let's start from the morning.

Today morning was not the same as a regular morning because it's the most awaited day of my life. My work was pending but first I needed to select a dress for the evening. I chose a simple pink salwar kameez. Did all the regular chores and the most awaited evening approached. I got ready and reached Meethi's place. She took an hour to get ready. Makeup, then hair styling and don't know what else she did to herself. She offered to do all that stuff to me but I rejected that offer. I don't like makeup, it hides the originality of the person and by the way, who was coming there to see me?
The party time was from 7 pm and we reached the party at 8 pm. We were late and for this all credit goes to Meethi. I was so restless and in tension thinking whether he came or not. What if he came and left the party early ...I will not get another chance to see him again...This is my only chance to see him...for one last time. Seeing my restlessness, Meethi asked me, "What's the matter?? Why are you so restless to reach school?? Is there someone waiting for you??" I told her there is nothing like that, it's just that we are late so I am restless. But she was in no mood to stop teasing me. With all this teasing, we reached our destination - school.

At last...today came ...Today's sun was brighter than ever, wind was cooler than ever, flowers were more beautiful than ever ... Everything today was new and fresh as if God created each of them today specially for me. This place had not changed much in the last ten years. Same roads, same market, same garden, everything same as before, except that today their beauty was enhanced. In wait of the evening's party I tried all possible ways to keep myself busy but it seemed like only my hands were busy my heart and mind both were waiting for the evening.
Finally evening approached.
I reached school before 7 pm and then realized that I was before time. So to pass time, I visited my classrooms, labs, and all possible places in the school building but time did not seem to pass. My clock was on strike and was not ready to show me 7 pm. Slowly other friends and teachers started coming to the party. All were talking and enjoying the party. In the background, smooth music was playing. My friends were talking about their current and past life, remembering school days. But I was not able to pay attention to them. My eyes were on the entrance waiting for her entry in the party.
I got a tap on my back. When I turned, I found Radha standing there. She again started her old drama of love and all. I got irritated, left the party and went to the parking lot.

Here the air was cool. Music from the party could be heard here.

~Aasmaan ke hain sare tare, Hai Mera chand kahan
Ankhein hai num, Dil mein hai gum
Ho kuch to rehem khuda
OuouOO Oo
Mere Pyaar se Mila
OuouOO Oo

Sun Le meri dua
Hai char din zindagi, Gum hai Bepanaah
Yeh dil mera kho gaya, Dard-e-be-dawa
Berang hai Mera jahan, Kismat meri Saza zara

Aasmaan ke hain sare tare, Hai Mera chand kahan
Ankhein hai num, Dil mein hai gum
Ho kuch to rehem khuda
OuouOO Oo
Mere Pyaar se Mila
OuouOO Oo
Sun Le meri dua~

This song was played for me.
I was gazing at the sky with questions and my heart was losing all hope of seeing her. Then I heard a car parking noise in the parking lot. I walked in the direction from where the noise was coming.
I saw Meethi coming out of the car and with Meethi, it was HER ...

We reached the party at 8 pm. First Meethi got out of the car and she started walking to the party. Then I stepped out of the car and closed the car door and started to walk in the direction of the party. But I was dragged back. When I looked back, I found my dupatta stuck in the door of the car. Now what??? How to open the car door?? The key is with Meethi and she went inside. Now what Tara??

I saw her...Is she Tara??? But how can it be Tara??? I mean she had blunt hair cut and this girl has long hair. Is it possible that she is Tara?? She was looking like an angel in that pink salwar kameez. She was wearing simple clothes with minimum makeup but she was the most gorgeous girl of the evening. Her long hair was ready to hunt young hearts. Then I saw her expression. She was a little worried. I tell you worry doesn't suit her smiling face. I approached her and said, "May I help you??"

I was worried thinking now what to do?? Then I heard a voice asking, "May I help you??"
I turned and guess what?? HE WAS STANDING IN FRONT OF ME!!!
I was speechless for a moment. He, for whom I was waiting from yesterday, is standing in front of me. I completely lost my senses when I saw his killer smile ... Ohh... It still has the power to kill me ... I was lost in my thoughts adoring him when I again heard, "May I help you??...Tara."
After hearing my name from his mouth I was on cloud nine. I exclaimed in my mind, "He is here. He remembers me. He called my name." Then I controlled myself and told him that my dupatta got struck in the car door and the key is with Meethi and she is inside. He asked me for my hairpin. I gave him one from my hair.

When she turned to me and responded to my question, at that time I saw her up close. I must say this girl has magic in her eyes. They are so deep that I got lost in them when I saw my image in her eyes. She didn't reply. I think at first she hesitated to say her problem. Yes how can she tell me her problem in one go?
She is TARA ...my Tara who is shy. Then I again asked her about her problem. When she informed me about her dupatta, I asked for her hairpin. When she was removing a hairpin from her hair, the unseen beauty of her face became visible. When the loosened hair fell on her cheek, it seemed to me like the air was touching a silent flowing stream disturbing its silence. I was lost in adoring her beauty when she handed over her hairpin. I opened the car door and she removed her dupatta. Then we both moved towards the party.

When he was picking the lock of the car door, I got a chance to adore him ...and that too from so near ...He looks so smart and handsome ... He was unlocking the car with full concentration. He still had that same look he used to have in science lab while performing an experiment. He has now developed muscles...He was wearing a tight red shirt which was enough to show the physique he had made. OMG!!!! Control Tara! What are you doing??? Stop analyzing him...Thank God the car door opened, otherwise my other sense organs would have lost their senses. I was remembering my Biology class chapter Human Anatomy. Then we both moved towards the party.

We had just started to walk when Radha came and dragged Mrityunjay to the party. He went with Radha. While going, he turned back once. I gave him a smile. WELCOME back to reality Tara. He went inside the party and I too walked into the party. I went straight to my favorite teacher Kala ma'am.

This Radha is such a mess. We had just started to move towards the party and she came and grabbed my hand and took me inside the party. I was so helpless. I turned to see Tara. She gave me a smile and I moved with Radha into the party. I went to my friend circle and Tara went to her favorite teacher Kala. I was not interested in what my friends were saying. I was trying all possible ways to catch her view. She was talking to her friends. When she moved her long locks behind her ears, it was a spellbinding moment. Her beauty increased with each passing moment. Then I reminded myself that I need to express my feelings to her. But how to express?? She is always with one person or another. She is never alone. How to say???

I was talking to my friends and teachers but in between all these talks, I kept my eyes on Mrityunjay. I didn't want to miss a single moment of Mrityunjay.

With all these thoughts, the party ended.

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Continued in next post

Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

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With all these thoughts, the party ended and I was not able to say what I feel for her. Now what to do??? I immediately grabbed Adi and said that after such a long time we friends have gathered here, so let's play something like truth and dare. Adi first looked at me with surprise and then agreed to do this. He called his other friends which included Meethi, and without Meethi Tara cannot go. So here was my plan. We went to the stadium to play this game.

I made myself sit opposite Tara by making many adjustments. We started to play. One by one everyone was getting their task but I was waiting for Tara's chance and the bottle heard my wish and stopped in front of Tara. Now it was Tara's turn. She chose dare. Mrityunjay, before expressing your feelings to her, for the last time listen to her melodious voice because after she hears about your feelings, you don't know what will happen. So I gave Tara a song to sing. Radha, the spiteful girl, again jumped between us saying, "Yes she can only sing. That's the only job she knows better." I was so pissed off with Radha after hearing this but I controlled myself and told Tara to sing.

After the party ended, Meethi and I were moving to the car when Adi called us from behind saying let's play a game for the last time. Meethi got ready for the game and I had no way other than to follow her. So we went to the stadium to play a game. I again wanted to cash this opportunity by doting on Mrityunjay so I made adjustments and took the place in front of Mrityunjay. The game started. One by one all were getting a chance and so my turn also came. And I chose dare as I know Mrityunjay would not give me a hard task and he impressed me by giving me the task to sing a song. I was delighted to hear that he wants to hear a song and that too by me. I was happy but my happiness vanished the moment I saw Radha. She again gave me a reality check that Mrityunjay was or is her boyfriend. My heart wanted to cry after hearing her harsh words but I managed and started to sing.

~Band hoton se jo ek baat, Kahi thi maine
Tujhko ab tak meri us baat ka, Ehsaas nahi
Band hoton se jo ek baat, Kahi thi maine
Tujhko ab tak meri us bat ka, Ehsaas nahi
Band hoton se
Mere jazbat ka, Tu saz nahi sun sakta
Mere jazbat ka, Tu saz nahi sun sakta
Kyun mere pyaar ki, Awaaz nahi sun sakta
Kyun mere pyaar ki, Awaaz nahi sun sakta
Aisa lagta hai
Aisa lagta hai
Koi dil hi tere paas nahi
Tujhko ab tak meri us baat ka, Ehsaas nahi
Band hoton se jo ek baat, Kahi thi maine
Tujhko ab tak meri us baat ka, Ehsaas nahi
Band hoton se~

Her voice still had that melody. There was so much pain in her voice, why?? Her eyes were filled with tears, why?? Then I put my attention on the words of the song and I found the pain through which she was going. She was singing her status ...this means that she loved someone and he never knew about it. Who was that lucky boy who she loved? Or is it possible that I might be that boy? Because today in the party I found her doting on me many times. That means this song is for me and I didn't understand her feelings. Oh...Tara ...
After she finished the song, we all clapped for her lovely singing. But I was not able to control myself after sensing her feelings for me. I wanted to tell her what I felt but there were so many friends around us. If she rejected me then? ... Because this assumption is made by me that she has feelings for me but I am not sure about it.

After I finished the song, everyone clapped for me. I was about to leave after I finished the song but Meethi stopped me saying wait it's Mrityunjay's turn and he is last. After his turn we will go. So I again sat there.

I was the last person in the game, so Meethi grabbed this chance and told me to choose dare. She asked me the name of the girl who I love. I told her I will tell you her name but first let me explain about her.

~Kehte hain
Khuda ne iss jahan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaya
Har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishara
Mano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain
Khuda ne iss jahan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaya
Har kisi ke liye ~

I sung that whole song admiring Tara and only Tara. Because this song was just for her.

He was singing and watching me. I was feeling uncomfortable because of the way he was looking at me. He never looked at me in the way he was looking at me today. There was something in his eyes ...in his voice that he was trying to convey ...to me.

After I finished the song, Tara immediately got up and started to walk away. I called her name aloud, "TARA." Everyone turned first towards me and then towards her and started clapping. After hearing this, she ran from there. I followed her.

After the song completed, I got up and started to walk away because I didn't want to hear the name of the girl for whom Mrityunjay sang that lovely song. But to my surprise he took my name. After hearing my name I was stuck to that place for a moment and when I heard clapping I came to my senses and ran away from there towards the school gate.
I was happy from the bottom of my heart. My heartbeats were so fast that my heart can burst at any moment. Each and every part of my body was happy to hear that I am the girl who Mrityunjay loves. Tears were flowing from my eyes ...they were tears of happiness. The wait of 10 years ended this way. I was feeling emotional.
Mrityunjay came and stood behind me.

I came and stood behind her and tried to explain to her that I love her but if she loves someone else, she is free to walk away as she deserves a better guy then me, who will never keep her waiting for so many years like I did. But in my last attempt, I went down on my knees and sang:

~Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera
Tujhse juda agar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge juda

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho~

He is totally dumb. He doesn't understand a girl's heart. After hearing all those nonsense talks when I turned towards him ... he was on his knees and started singing making me feel more special and emotional. Ten years wait gave me such a lovely surprise that Mrityunjay was proposing to me.
Then he held my hand and said, "I LOVE YOU TARA. DO YOU LOVE ME??"

Tears were rolling out of her eyes and there was a big smile on her face showing her consent. When I proposed to her, she replied saying, "YES. I LOVE YOU TOO."

By this time all our friends came to us. Radha was fuming with anger. Meethi hugged Tara and congratulated her. We waited for a few more minutes there. It was 12 o'clock by now. Tara got a call from her mom about her whereabouts and she said that she is on her way with Meethi. After that we needed to leave. We didn't want to leave but it was not possible for her to stay so we went to our homes.

After accepting congratulations from friends, we were sitting on Mrityunjay's car watching the sky. There was complete silence. We wanted to talk but didn't know what to talk about ...there was too much to be said to each other but we were not able to say it. He held my hand and wanted to say something but my phone rang. Seeing that, we both laughed our hearts out. I saw it was mom's call. I told her I was on my way home. I didn't want to go but I had to. So I said bye to Mrityunjay and walked towards Meethi's car. She was waiting for me. My lovely friend Meethi. I am thankful to her ...she owes it. We drove towards my house. I was watching Mrityunjay in the car's rear-view mirror. He was standing there.

I don't know how to express my happiness today. I got Mrityunjay today on whom I had a crush and then love. I never dreamt this. Words are short today to express my feelings. That single moment was magical when he proposed to me.

She must have reached home. Should I call her? ...Hmmm...Let's call her.

Oh...It's his call...He called me ...Talk to you later.

Yours
Mrityunjay

Yours
Tara

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The End

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Thanks for reading

Thanks ⭐️Shaina_b⭐️ for making it readable

Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Sia ⭐️

Thank you for your wonderful words 😃

Tara's Diary
@ Teenage 😳 😉

@heartbreak

I am glad my post made you smile while reading 😃

Mrityunjay's Diary

Thanks dear for appreciating my work 😃

@music yes she unknowing used it as weapon 😉

Mrityunjay kitten and Tara Tweety 😆

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Shagufta

@ShagufElina

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Dear Archu...

Omg...

Maar hi daala...

Loss of words...dont knw what to.say...

Again killer smile...zulfein...Raabta...

Iqraar...omg...such a beautiful scene...

Woh baar baar dekhna... Woh dil hi dil khush hona ...

Tumhara jawaab nahi...
Kya kahun kuch samjh nahi aa raha...

Tere lafzon ki kashish mein woh gehraayi hai...
Jo pyaase sehraa ki bhi pyaas bujha de...

Dil se teri shaidaayi...
Ehsaas...

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