~Ehsaas~ek mulaaqat.........SS....updated last part on page 16 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: LoveAngel21

Wow shagufta!! What poetry! What emotions! It wz mindblowing!!
Emotions r ur forte...itni khubsurti se depict kaise karti ho saare emotions?!
It made me cry..nd smile thru the tears...so beautiful!
I hope u will be back wid another SS soon!
This last part reminded me of that sonu nigam song
''tera milna
pal do pal ka
meri dhadkane churaye!''

thank u so much dear...
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Mujhe bht bht khushi hui...tumhe pasand aaya...
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MriAra ke liye...
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Mohabbat ko lafzon ki zaroorat nahi...
Fasaane khud hi ban jaate hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
wow, nicely written...
u should do a lot of shayaris as ur writing is good...
👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Wow ...,superb . love it. waiting for another ss.
app accha likhte ho... aise hi likhte rahiye.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Sonal_MriAra

wow, nicely written...

u should do a lot of shayaris as ur writing is good...
👏👏👏

thank u so much Sonal...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: TasrinS

Wow ...,superb . love it. waiting for another ss.
app accha likhte ho... aise hi likhte rahiye.

thank u Samima...for ur appreciation...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Wow Shaggu, brilliant first part!!! Reading the second one now :0)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Worldpeace

😭...

REs till I control my self...

so finally I m in condition to say something. ...

Shagu aap kya indian television ke cvs ko competition de rahe ho.. itna acha scene .. wo dream sequence. ... yeh asal mein kyun nai ho sakta tha...

ANd ending. . Beautiful. . But main indian hun na and like most of the indian me too qould love it if it was a happieeess endingsss...

FOr the write up. ... Seriously shagu I have no words...
and as I said earlier it was perrrfeect...

MUdasar ki language mein...

CHIK chik boom.. fire...

thank u Jaani...
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This is so specail for me...and u ppl made it...more beautiful...
Tumhari appreciation...tumhara support...mere liye bht zyaada khaas hai...
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Thanks Jaani...for supporting me so much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Lovely! Absolutely marvelous Shaggu, what epic emotions...u truly are one fab writer
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Posted: 11 years ago
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<font size="3">Part 7
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Zindagi guzar rahi hai...
tere ek ehsaas ke sahaare...
Koi woh raah toh bata...
Chalu jisspe toh tu mile...

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Main aaj bhi iss ummeed mein hun ke woh mujhe milegi...
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uska ehsaas mujh mein aaj bhi zindaa hai...
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Kyun???
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Woh issliye ki mera dil janta hai...woh mujhe milegi...kahin na kahin...kabhi na kabhi...
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usse mile ek saal beet chuka...lekin aisa lagtaa hai...kal ki hi baat hai...
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Meethi kehti hai...bhool jao usse...
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Yug kehtaa hai main deewaana ho gaya hun...uski ek mulaaqaat ne mujhe pagal kar diya hai...
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par main bhi Mj hun...haar nahi maanta...
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Maine uske ehsaas ko aaj bhi apne ander zindaa rakha hai...
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Usski naazuki...uski sunehri awaaz ...uski muskuraahat...uski ghabrahat...uska sorry...uska thank u...
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ek ek pal yaad hai...na main bhoola hun ...Na main bhoolunga...
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Sirf meri baat hoti toh main sabr kar leta ...par uska yunh likh kar chale jaana...mere sabar ko tod diya...aur mere yaqeen ko badal diya...
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~Tere milne se hai yeh maine jaana~
~Koi apna lage hokar begaana~
~Tere pehlu mein tere baahon mein~
~Roshan ehsaas kya hai maine jaana~
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uska yeh likhna...mere ehsaas par mohar lagaata hai...
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sab mujhse kehte hai...ab woh nahi milegi...par mera dil ...woh unn sab ki baaton ko jhutlaata hai...
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Main din bhar apne aap ko busy rakhtaa hun...
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lekin raat ko uske khayaalon se guzre bina ...meri raat puri nahi hoti...
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usski woh pyaari si muskurahat ko yaad kiye bina mujhe neend nahi aati...
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Bas ab meri zindagi yunhi chal rahi hai...
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kisike intzaar mein...mile na mile...par intezaar toh hai...
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Yahi sohte sochte...so gaya...kal bht important meeting hai...
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Aaj nayi subah...naya savera...bht achcha lag raha hai...
kal raat un yaadon ko phirse choone ke baad aaj ek nayi khushi mehsoos ho rahi hai...
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aaj main full charge hun...
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Office jaana hai...9 to 5 ki job hai...par main har roz late office se nikalta hun...
Saara kaam sambhalna...meri zimmedari...
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Aaj office khatam ho gaya...ab ghar jaane ki baari aa gayi...
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jo kaam tha woh bhi pura ho chuka...ab kya...aaj toh jaldi jaana hi hoga...
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main aur mera dost Siddharth aur main ghar ke liye nikal pade...kitna bakwaas hai na...yeh sab sun kar sabhi bore ho jaate hai...mera schedule...itna boring hai...
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Mere friends bhi kitna bulaate hai...par main jaata nahi...
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ab kya car mein baitho...ghar jao...aur pak jao...
office se ghar...1 ghante ki doori par hai...
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ek ghantaa driving ufff...mujhe bht bore hota hai...
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Sidd ko jo gaane pasand hai...woh on kar deta hai...kabhi kabhi mera mood hua toh main khud on ho jaata hun...
Aur koi dhun gungunaa deta hun...
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sidd ka ghar mere raaste mein hai...toh usse drop kar deta hun...
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Aaj sidd ne radio on kiya...
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Radio par aaj Rj sabka bhavishya bata rahe the...apne hi andaaz mein...
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Rj...
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toh meherbaan aur qadardaan...
Na main baba hun aur na hi dukaan...
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Waise toh bada hi interest aata hai sabbb ko jannne mein ki unka raaashiphal...
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toh beta main batata hun suno...
Bhole aur gyaani baba ka kamaal...
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sab ke liye yahi kahunga...
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Jinka jeevan khaali hai...ussmein ek khoobsurat kanya aaye...
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jo kanyaon se pareshaan hai...woh dusri kanya ka bandobast kare...
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jo apne aap se pareshaan hai...woh chullu bahr paani mein doob mare...
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Aur jo mast maula hai...woh apni shaitaaniyon ko aur badhawa...
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Toh beta bolo...kaisan laga...humra shudhdh desi nuskha...
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dekha iss baba ka kamaal...
kyunki hum karte hai dhamaal...
Humari nahi hai koi misaal...
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abb do gaali...tamatar...main toh bhaag raha hun yeh romantic sa song aap ke liye chod kar...

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Dilko Tumse Pyaar Hua Pehli Baar Hua
Tumse Pyaar Hua Main Bhi Aashiq Yaar Hua

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Aah yeh sun ke mera dil khush ho gaya...main muskura diya...
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Sidd: arre mere bhai yeh muskaan kaisi ...bade hi dhinchak lag rahe ho...
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Ssshhh...
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Maine munh par ungli ka ishaara kiya...aur kaha mujhe yeh song sunne do...
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Dilko Tumse Pyaar Hua Pehli Baar Hua
Tumse Pyaar Hua Main Bhi Aashiq Yaar Hua
Pehli Baar Hua Tumse Pyaar Hua
Chaayi Hain Betaabi Meri Jaan Kahon Main Kya
Karoon
Chaayi Hain Betaabi Meri Jaan Kahon Main Kya
Karoon
Dilko Tumse Pyaar Hua Pehli Baar Hua
Tumse Pyaar Hua Main Bhi Aashiq Yaar Hua
Pehli Baar Hua Tumse Pyaar Hua

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Yeh song guitar par perfect hai...main college ke dinon gaaya karta tha...
..sab ladkiyan marti thi ...par main kissi par nahi...aur jab aaj jisske liye gaana chahta hun...jispar marna chahta...uska pata nahi...

Kho Gaya Main Khayalon Mein
Ab Neend Nahin Aankhon Mein
Karvate Bas Badalta Hoon
Ab Jaagta Hoon Main Raaton Mein
Ab Doori Na Sehni Har Lamha Kehta Hain
Na Jaane Haal Mera Aisa Kyon Rehta Hain
Main Deewana Tera Bangaya Jaane Jaana
Main Fasana Tera Bangaya Jaane Jaana
Haseena Gori Gori Churaye Chori Chori
Churaye Dil Chori Chori Chori Chori Chori
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Dilko Tumse Pyaar Hua Pehli Baar Hua
Tumse Pyaar Hua Main Bhi Aashiq Yaar Hua
Pehli Baar Hua Tumse Pyaar Hua
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Aarzoo Hain Mere Sapnon Ki
Baitha Rahoon Teri Baahon Mein
Sirf Tu Mujhe Chaahe Ab
Itna Asar Ho Meri Aahon Mein
Tu Keh De Haske To Tod Dooon Main Rasmon Ko
Marke Bhi Na Bhoolon Main Teri Kasmon Ko
Main To Aaya Hoon Yahan Pe Bas Tere Liye
Tera Tan Man Sab Hain Mere Liye
Kya Haseena Zara Sama Hai Pyaara Pyaara
Gale Lagale Yaara Yaara Yaara Yaara Yaara
Main Bhi Aashiq Yaar Hua
Pehli Baar Hua Tumse Pyaar Hua
Chaayi Hain Betaabi Meri Jaan Kahon Main Kya
Karoon
Chaayi Hain Betaabi Meri Jaan Kahon Main Kya
Karoon


Kaash yeh gaana ussdin suna deta...jab maine guitar bajaya tha...
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Ptttchhh...mera confession bhi ho jaata aur gaana bhi...
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Khair koi baat nahi...
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Sidd : "Bhai mere kuch toh batado...kyun itni baanchen khil rahi hi...
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Smile badhti hi jaa rahi hai kam nahi ho rahi...
Aakhir aisa bhi kya hai...
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koi mil gayi kya...arre main toh bhool gaya...woh mili kya...wohi wohi...
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jiski talaash ko arsaa beet gaya..."
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Main kuch nahi keh raha tha...bas muskura tha...
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Maine kaha..."nahi Mili"...
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Sidd: "Bhai mere ab chod bhi do zidd...
Pata nahi kahan woh...kahan aap...
kaise miloge itne bade shehar mein..."
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Usse main kuch kehtaa usse pehle maine dekha...
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Aage bht traffic hai...aur bht saari bheed jama hai...
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Maine socha main utar ke dekhun...
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par Sidd ne kaha...
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Sidd: wait main dekhta hun...
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Maine kaha "thik hai..."
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woh wahan gaya...dekhne...
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jaane kyun main pareshaan tha...mera dil bhi chaah raha tha main dekhun...
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Ek minute ho gaya...par sidd laut kar naa aaya...aage thodi hi cars thi...
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Mujhse raha na gaya...main Car se bahar aa gaya...aur uss tarf badhne laga...
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Sidd wapas aa raha tha...
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ussne kaha...
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Sidd:.Arre yaar kisi ladki ka accident ho gaya hai...
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Maine kaha...toh...usse le kar kyun nahi jaa rahe hospital...
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Sidd: pata nahi...yeh log bheed jama karna jaante hai...madad karna nahi...
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Mj: aur hum kya kar rahe hai...wahi...chalo mere saath...
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main tez tez kadmon se aage badha...bheed ko hataate hue jab dekha ...
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Toh meri jaan wahi nikal gayi...
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Mere haath pair thande ho gaye...main wahi freez ho gaya...main shock mein wahi ...thehar gaya...
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Wahi khada reh gaya...aage kadam badha na saka...
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aankhon mein aansun aa gaye...gala gham se bhar gaya...i was feeling chocked...sensation of lump in my throat...
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aankhen sirf ussko dekh rahi thi...aansun beh rahe the...dil rone laga...
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Sidd: Mj kya hua...hosh mein toh ho...
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Mere...hosh gum the...
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Sidd: Mj...
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Main soch raha tha...
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Kya??????
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Woh...
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Woh ladki...
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Woh ladki Tara thi...jo mere saamne behosh hone ki haalat mein padi thi...
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Sidd: Mj kya hua????tum ro kyun ro rahe ho...
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Ussne mujhe zor se shake kiya...
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Maine bas ek hi lafz kaha...
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~Tara~
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Maine hosh sambhala... ...main daud ke usski taraf bhaga...aur...usse dekhne laga...
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Sabke sab dekh rahe the...koi madad nahi kar raha tha...
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Maine uska sar pakad kar uthaya...uske gaal thap-thapaane laga...
Uska haath pakad kar apne haathon mein liya...usse jagaane laga...usse dekhne lagaa...
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"Tara...tara...main aa gaya hun...tum daro mat...main tumhe khuch hone nahi dunga...😭"
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"Pls tara tum himmat mat khona...main hun tumhare saath...😭"
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"Main aa gaya hun...😭"
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Usske chehre ko chu kar kehne laga...
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"Pls tara ek baar aankhen khol do..."
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Sidd: Mj sambhalo apne aap ko...jaldi se hospital le chalte hai...
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mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha...sidd ne kaha...
le challo...main usse god mein uthane laga...aur lekar khada ho gaya...
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Ek aadmi ne kaha...
Aree tum isse jaante ho kya...aise kaise le jaa rahe ho...
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Maine usse zor se chilla diya...
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"Tu kaun hota hai be puchne waala...itni der se padi thi ...le gaya kya ...nahi na...munh band rakh..."
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Sidd: Mj inke munh mat lag...jaldi le chal isse...
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Maine aage kuch nahi kaha...main usse bhag kar apni gaadi ki tarf lekar badha...aur Sidd traffic hatane mein...
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Ek minute mein traffic hat gaya...
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Main tara ko lekar peeche seat par baitha tha...uske sar par chot lagi thi...haathon par bht saari kharoch...
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Uski sar se khun beh raha tha...maine apna roomal nikala...aur uske sar par rakh diya...
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Bleeding itni nahi thi...phir bhi...maine usse rokne ki koshish ki...
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Bht sa khoon meri shirt par lag gaya tha...
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Woh meri baahon mein thi lekin iss tarah...khoon mein lahu-luhan...
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Behosh...hone ki haalat mein...dull drowsy...
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Aankhen band...
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Dard ...
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takleef...
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Main usse milna chahtaa tha par iss tarah nahi...
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Sidd ne car start ki...
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Maine kaha...jaldi kar...pls...jaldi poonchna hai...
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Hum hospital ke liye nikal gaye...
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Main tara ko dekhne laga...uska sar par haath pherne laga...
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"tara hum jaldi hospital pohonch jaayenge...tum tension mat lo...😭
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Main hun tumhaare saath...mujhse ek baar baat karlo...
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Woh apne hosh mein nahi thi...
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main bachchon ki tarah ro raha tha...aur usse baatein kar raha tha...
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Sidd: Mj sambhalon apne aap ko...tumhe usse bhi sambhalna hai...
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Maine apne aansun poche...
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Sidd: Dusron ki madad karne waala...khud ko sambhalne waala Mj aaj kamzor pad gaya...
Nahi mere dost...tujhe aur strong banna hoga...
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Ab toh yeh teri chahat ka sawaal hai...
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Maine khud ko sambhaala...
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Sidd car chalane mein busy tha...toh maine usse aur pareshaan nahi kiya...
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Tara ke chehre ko dekha...aur sochne laga...
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~Tara meri zindagi ka iste'aara~
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Bohot chahat ...bohot tamanna thi tumse milne ki...
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tumhe dekhne ki...
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tumhaari aankhen...
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tumhaari baatein...
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Tumhaari hassi...
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tumhaara gaana...
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tumhaari naazuki...
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tumhaara ehsaas...
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tumhare jazbaat...
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Inn sabka maine kitna intezaar kiya par iss tarah nahi...
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Aaj toh tum...khoon se latpat...dard takleef...yunh sadak par padi thi...
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Aaj jaane kya hota...agar main na pohonchtaa...
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pata nahi tumhe koi hospital le jaata ya nahi...
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tumhara kya haal karte pata nah...
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shukar hai mujhe tum mil gayi...
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Tumse milne ki...dekne ki tamanna toh puri hui lekin iss tarah...
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Aise haalat mein ...
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Bas usse dekhe jaa raha tha...
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Ek muddat se jiski aas thi...aaj mil gayi woh...
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Ek arsaa jiski talaash thi ...aaj mil gayi hai woh...
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Mil gayi kuch iss tarah ki behosh hai woh...
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Jisse dekh kar main hosh mein nahi ...aaj mil gayi hai woh...</font>



Thanks for ur so much love and support...
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Issiliye...i m continuing this ~Ehsaas~
Edited by ShagufElina - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Shagu pehle to..
Mwah mwah mwah mwah mwah. ...

😳

KYa likha hai apne...

Still mj is waiting for her.. awww shooo shweet...

MAin over the roof khush hun... yeh padh ke..

Thank you so much...
Edited by Worldpeace - 11 years ago

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