-Don't Judge a Book by Its Cover- Chap 5:No Tittle Pg. 11 Dec-29

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-Prologue-

"Get out of my room" He screamed throwing everything off of his side table. While she stood glued to the door frighten, scared. Though she has seen his worst side, but after knowing him, what he is in real, it didn't scared her like it used to, but in real it aggrieved her to see him like this. "I wa-n" she opened her mouth to say something but was instantly shut as he turned furiously facing her looking at her with piercing looks as he spoke "tumhe ek bar main baat samajh nahi aati" gritting his teeth. (Don't u, understand at once)

"aakhir kabtak, till when will you run away from the reality Mrityunjay" She spoke with same rage as him, but all he did was walked dangerously toward her and in a jerk pulls her to him piercing his nail on her bare arm as he said "maine tumhe pahle bhi kaha tha meri biwi bane ki kosish mat karna, kaha tha na" he shouted shacking her, but she just shoves his hand off of her pushing him back as she said "Main yehan tumhari biwi ki haysiyat se nahi balke tumhari dost Taara banke aai hoon Mrityunjay" (I have told u before dn't try to be my wife, didn't I told u...I have came here as ur wife but as ur friend Taara)

Mrityunjay turn facing his back to him shouting "I don't know u samjhi tum, I don't know u, just leave from here"

This time Taara gets super angry and she just walks to him making him to face her and den pulls him toward her holding his collar and questions him saying "you don't know me hun, you really don't know me" Mrityunjay just stood quite staring in her eyes.

"Tu kya wo sari batein wo sare pal jo hamare beech huwe kya wo sab jhot the" She asks pulling him more close. (Does that mean all those moments between us were a lie)

MJ- Haan, haan wo sab jhoot tha, tum meri koi nahi lagti, now just get out of here before I do something to you" saying that he removes her hold on him and turns facing his back to her once again. Defeated angrily Taara also left from there, and just as she got out of his room she felt a hand covering her mouth, she let out a scream before she felt her eyelids closing and she fainted. Hearing Taara screams Mrityunjay comes out of the dark room looking for Taara and sees the shadow of her being dragged but before he could go to save her, he felt a sharp pain on the back of his head and turns facing the person who had hit and he just falls down, with blood flowing out of his head. (Yes everything was a lie, u are nothing to me...)

A/N: Will start this Fan-Fiction once I see a gud review from u all...So hoping to get some gud review...

-Mariam


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intense start... i LIKE IT...
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really interesting
do continue 😊
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Originally posted by: devsum

Intense start... i LIKE IT...



Thank u der for liking it

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Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

really interesting

do continue 😊



Thanks der
will surly do
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Chapter 1:F.E.A.R
F-alse
E-xperiences
A-ppearing
R-eal

The key to change...is to let go of fear,
but will HE let HER, let go of her FEAR??


"Chal Taara bachu, ise pahle wo lohe ki dukan aur baalon ki factory tere room wapus aye, u go and lock the room so he doesn't have any chance or way to get in the room"
Tara says as she walked toward her room with a tray full of food.

"Taara Bahu" she heard someone call, but with the voice knew it has to be either her sasur ji, Fahim chacha or that bade sasur ji of her, that always gives hers a creepy feeling. well keeping aside her own assumptions Taara turns around just to step into Fahim Chacha. "careful Taara Bahu" Fahim said taking a step back giving her and the tray in her hand some space, while Taara took a deep breath.

"Kya hua fahim chacha aap ko kuch chiye tha" Taara asks.

Fahim- I was just wanting to know for whom ur taking this food Tara bahu.

Taara- Oh ye...wo-I-main-haan, I was taking this food for HIM

"U mean Mrityunjay" Fahim ask, to which Taara gives a weak smile nodding. "Jeeti raho, I have full faith on u, u will surly bring back the life in chote saheb beta" Fahim says and den leaves from der, while Taara goes to her room and quickly places the food and locks her room saying "us jangli ke life main, main tu kya meri jotti bhi na kabhi zindagi wapus laye Fahim Chacha, aise insaan ko tu is duniya main hi hona chiye"

Once she was in her room she quickly went into the change room and changed her dress into sleeping suit, and like a hungry lion came and attacked on the food, well why wouldn't she, she was starving to death, and all thanks to that Khadus pati-parmeshwar of hers and her one and only big sasur ji who left no stone turned to make her day miserable, making her run from this place to that just to get his pooja flower and the other always giving her dhamki's of staying away from him. "Chalo with the exhausting day of urs Taara, at least abhi tu kuch acha khane ko mila" Taara says and dips ai piece of roti into the dal-makhni, and just as she was abt to place it in her mouth-watering mouth, just then there was a knock on the door making her almost jump out of her chair in fear. "Kaa-kaaun" she says stammering once she regained herself from her fear shock, but there was no reply.

"koi jawab kyun nahi deta" she murmurs, but then her eyes pops out just thinking of it being Mrityunjay, and she once again in a shaky voice says "kau-kaaun hai"

"Taara, I am meethi" Hearing Meethi voice, Taara takes a deep breath and then says "Tu pahel bolna tha na, dara diya mujhe"

"Sry but can u open the door" Meethi says apologetic for scaring her.

"wait a sec Meethi, ok" She says and den run off to washroom and washes her hand.

"Taara, why are u not at dinner table, Baba is asking for u" Meethi asked as soon as the door opened.

Taara- Meethi I wasn't feeling good tu I bought my dinner in my room.

Meethi- kyun kya huwa tumhe, should I call the doc

Taara- nahi nahi- docotr is not needed, I wil be fine if I take some rest.

Meethi- oh ok den u rest I will tell baba ur not feeling gud so ur taking rest in ur room

Taara- thanks Meethi

Meethi- no prb, but yeah if u need anything just tell me or ask dai jaan for it

"theek hai" once Meethi left Taara instantly closed the door and came back to eating her yummy food.

"Taara tu bhi na forget all, u have already locked the door, he won't have any way to come in here, leave all this danda wanda, nahi nahi, Taara pagal mat ban, kya pata kuch kaam a jaye, Taara bachu forget all this now and just get inside the duvet" Taara said holding on the thick stick tightly. "But Taara he is stronger than this stick yaar, how will this tick protect u in front of that monster like human" she said and den in a swift turns off the light and jumps on the bed and went right inside the duvet hiding herself.

"aab chup chap Soja Taara bachu, maata rani rakasha karna apni is Taara ka" She says and hides her face in the duvet, and soon falls into deep slumber.

"hehe Nandu kya kar rahi hai, stop it ur tickling me" Taara said feeling a finger tracing down her bare arm. "Nandu, stop it, mujhe sone de" she says again shoving the hand off of her. "Nandu aakhri bar bol rahi, maan ja warna I will kick u off of the bed" She said holding on to the hand tightly but then in a swift she felt her own hand being twisted in the back as she heard him says "mujhe se bach rahi thi"

"tu--tu-tum yeha, mere room main kya kar rahe ho, and how did u came in" She asked scared.

"tumhara room, well, well well, mind putting a break here and telling me since wen did this room became urs, hun" Mrityunjay asks twisting her hand on the back nd a hiss left out of Taara lips. "chodo mujhe" she said trying to free her hand, but when she didn't she quickly tired to take the danda which she had hid beside her pillow but Mrityunjay was quick to see what she was doing so he grabs it before she does and looks at it as he said "u thought this would be enough to shield u from me, but u forgetting who I am"

"aaj tu maine kuch bhi nahi kiya then why are u here" Taara asks.

"Remember what I said last night, fear, fear is what I want to see in ur eyes, on ur face, till u don't understand ur lesson properly to never interfere in my life" He replied.

"But I haven't done anything trust me" Taara said.

"Really" Mrityunjay says pushing her on the bed back as he slowly hovered on her tracing his fingers on her hand. "Stop it Mrityunjay, main sach kah rahi hoon maine kuch nahi kiya" Taara says turning her face side way burying her face in the pillow.

"acha tu what were u doing in my dark room"
" I told u, i went accidentally, It was just a mistake

"oh really then why did u steal the chemical from der and and mixed it in ur water, hun what were u trying to do, accuse me for trying to kill u and frame me in ur own murder"

"ye sach nahi hai, I didn't do anything like this, mera bharosa karo"

"bharosa aur tumhara" Mrityunjay says as he buries his face in the nape of her neck fanning with his breath, while Taara closed her eye tightly as she tried to move away from him. But Mrityunjay gets holds of her hand and pins it above her head with one hand while his other hand went on her bare arm once again & started to crease her but then his touches became rough as he tighten his hold on her wrist making her to cry in pain. "Plz docho mujhe" She says struggling to get her hand out of his hold. Paying no heed to her plea, Mrityunjay moves his fingers tracing from her arm to her neck and grips her neck in his hand making her to cough badly due to the lack of oxygen. "Mrit-yun-jay, kya kar rahe ho, chodo" She says trashing her head back and forth. Mrityunjay lets go of her neck after wat seemed like 3-5 mins nd den he moves his face forward to her but she just buried her head back into the pillow still breathing heavy, to which Mrityunjay smirks seeing her like this and says "kyun aab kyun bura lag raha hai, u were trying to be my wife na, then why are u acting as if ur disgust by my touch"

"nahi main tumhare biwi bane ki kosish kra rahi thi, nahi hi khud ko marne ki kosish ki thi, samjhe tum" Taara says angrily and den with all the strength left in her she pushes him away from her making him to fall on the floor as she sat up instantly, only to hear the fall sound of the danda she had with her, and she quickly turns on the side light only to find herself all alone in the room. She pushes her hair back wiping away the sweat that formed on her forehead as she scanned the room and den looked at the door to see it was still lock. "Taara bachu, is baalon ke factory ne tu tera khawab main bhi peecha nahi chorna, aur tu aur teri neednd bhi haram kar rakhi hai is lohe ki dukan ne" Taara says as she lays back on the bed facing the ceiling.

Previous: Prologue

Next: Chapter 2: Crashing D.R.E.A.M

A/N: Finally Posted the first.
Do Leave ur long comment on the first Chapter and don't forget to like😳
-Mariam

Edited by CrazzyBusy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow
that was an intense start
wondering what the next chapter will be like... 😊
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Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

wow

that was an intense start
wondering what the next chapter will be like... 😊



Hehe I tired not to make it intense but well it did cme out to be
Next chap
even I am thinking, have any suggestion

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Originally posted by: CrazzyBusy



Hehe I tired not to make it intense but well it did cme out to be
Next chap
even I am thinking, have any suggestion


Maybe something that has to do with the past, like what led to their wedding or something like that... That would be interesting to read about 😊

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