-Don't Judge a Book by Its Cover- Chap 5:No Tittle Pg. 11 Dec-29 - Page 9

Originally posted by: S696_sehreen

Edited
Finally u updated soo happy
Comming to he part too good I loved
The way u wrote thr whole scene
And what a face of yaar loved those pics
Along with text suiting so much with the situation
Over all beautiful part and emotional
Even in ur FF can't see Crying MJ
Bring his smile atleast in ur FF
Waiting for next part update soonn :)))))

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

amazing update

loved it

thanks for the pm! 😊

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Awesome update!!!

Loved it!!!

Ur descriptive info u put in 4 each scene is unbelievable!!!

Superb FF!!! Ur a fab writer!!!

Loved the pics!!! Go so well with the scene!!!

Loved all the previous updates, sorry 4 nt commenting b4!!!!!

Can't wait 4 the next update!!!

Thanks 4 the pm!!

Originally posted by: Archi21

wow nice chap.

loved each and every line

loved Tara's outbrust

revaluation of anjabi dost as tara -his wife to mj

can feel mj's pain

waiting for next part

Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran

nice update
taara's dream ws indeed too scary
n i loved ur writing style
i dnt want MJ to go on a full on guilt trip
i m mre eager to knw taara's reactn towards al these things
thanx fr d pm dear

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

wow dear ur story make me to live the moments once again when i saw this in the show

Tujhe apne story ke moment main phir se live na kara ya tu kya kiya

lovely dear...each and every part is awesome specially that aradhana dream seen by tara for a sec even me alos think that omg when did aradhana had come ...and she die because of the bitter truth of her damad and tara...
Hehe it was the last minute change before I continued the whole part, uff that was the part that kept me still and blaked from thinking further and at the last I ended up making it yet into another dream

but when jairaj's words make tara come back to reality ...lol it make me to come out of the my dreamland

Haha tune Bed se jump kiya tha tab kya?????/

that doc jairaj aradhana mj and police part is really like...

sach mein yaha ho kya raha hai...but finally all crads are open now...the truth is front of the mj that the girl whom he was saving is non other than his lawful wife to whom he intentionally want to harm so that she can just run from his life and leave him to live alone in his more scary world than a nightmare...

Hehe tujhe aise na karay tu phir kya kiya😆

mj expression is fabulous ...love to read dear...once again to remind me that why i love your writing ...

simply awesome
So sweet but I still won't agree😉