-Don't Judge a Book by Its Cover- Chap 5:No Tittle Pg. 11 Dec-29

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: S696_sehreen

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Very intersting story when i read the first chapter i was like
what gonna happen next when i came forward so got to know it was only progolue 😆
as i said i have read some chapter so u know i actually had only missed the last one
I read this story since u started but never got change to comment 😔, sorry
but sachi saying story is very very good and u make me read more with ur writting 😳
u can be a writer yaar :))), one req can please analyse some scenes whenever u get time
would love to read 😃
will be waiting for next part

Thanks for liking the Story Sehru...

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Archi21
Nice yaar 😛 👏 waiting for next part

Thank u for liking the chap

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: capriya
Sorry for the late reply. Its nice part... Continue soon... Thanks for the PM.

Thanks for liking the update der

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

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sehreen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Edited
Finally u updated soo happy
Comming to he part too good I loved
The way u wrote thr whole scene
And what a face of yaar loved those pics
Along with text suiting so much with the situation
Over all beautiful part and emotional
Even in ur FF can't see Crying MJ
Bring his smile atleast in ur FF
Waiting for next part update soonn :)))))

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Kaay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

amazing update

loved it

thanks for the pm! 😊

Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago

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sania

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Awesome update!!!

Loved it!!!

Ur descriptive info u put in 4 each scene is unbelievable!!!

Superb FF!!! Ur a fab writer!!!

Loved the pics!!! Go so well with the scene!!!

Loved all the previous updates, sorry 4 nt commenting b4!!!!!

Can't wait 4 the next update!!!

Thanks 4 the pm!!

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Archana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

wow nice chap.

loved each and every line

loved Tara's outbrust

revaluation of anjabi dost as tara -his wife to mj

can feel mj's pain

waiting for next part

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Viji.Chandran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

nice update
taara's dream ws indeed too scary
n i loved ur writing style
i dnt want MJ to go on a full on guilt trip
i m mre eager to knw taara's reactn towards al these things
thanx fr d pm dear

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

wow dear ur story make me to live the moments once again when i saw this in the show

lovely dear...each and every part is awesome specially that aradhana dream seen by tara for a sec even me alos think that omg when did aradhana had come ...and she die because of the bitter truth of her damad and tara...

but when jairaj's words make tara come back to reality ...lol it make me to come out of the my dreamland

that doc jairaj aradhana mj and police part is really like...

sach mein yaha ho kya raha hai...but finally all crads are open now...the truth is front of the mj that the girl whom he was saving is non other than his lawful wife to whom he intentionally want to harm so that she can just run from his life and leave him to live alone in his more scary world than a nightmare...

mj expression is fabulous ...love to read dear...once again to remind me that why i love your writing ...

simply awesome