OS Unspoken Desire- Updated pg. 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautifullyyy written ☺️ cont soon :)
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Nisha, your writing is not new to me at all. Have read and liked all your AriYa FF's. And seems like you are an IPK fan as well? Seems like we have a penchant for the same kind of shows? :D
Loved it...and please do continue!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Amri-

Nisha, your writing is not new to me at all. Have read and liked all your AriYa FF's. And seems like you are an IPK fan as well? Seems like we have a penchant for the same kind of shows? :D

Loved it...and please do continue!


yes I did write for IPK. I suppose we do have similar tastes.
I really do enjoy writing just haven't had time in the past 2 years. I am surprised I ran into someone who has read my previous work. I thought I was going to be completely new to this forum.
I hope the writing is still pretty decent since its been quite a hiatus.
And dont worry I will finish this..thats why I made it an OS so that it wouldnt take me forever and I would be able to finish it.
I have already started writing the next part actually.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very good. I like the slow pace. Waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful OS Nisha😊
Love Ardhika 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A beautiful start. Loved the rain scene. Very Radihka type. The innocence and the joy in small things. What amazed me was, Arjun had his hand on her waist, she didn't object...so, does this mean she has feelings for him? Even if she calls him 'Sir'
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: JazzyM

A beautiful start. Loved the rain scene. Very Radihka type. The innocence and the joy in small things. What amazed me was, Arjun had his hand on her waist, she didn't object...so, does this mean she has feelings for him? Even if she calls him 'Sir'



Yes she does. I think they both have feelings for each other even right now but wont even admit it to themselves. My OS takes place some time in the future so just imagine Ardhika in like a month or 2...they keep denying their feelings but cant help themselves.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay Nisha...I know from experience that grad school is immensely frustrating- deadlines seem to be approaching by the hour, and the sheer volume of the workload makes you want to rip your head off...but yeh dil hai kii maanta nahin. I just have to ask you this, though I feel extremely bad about it.


Is it possible that you can update after having prepared for all your papers and assignments and whatnot? :D


And you turned out to be quite the prophet- you wrote about Radhika in a sari , and mesmerized Arjun, and two episodes later we did get to see it! :) I think you ought to sue the writers for plagiarism. Kasamh se :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The car ride to the party was a quite one. Radhika couldn't understand what was happening. Why was she feeling such things for this man. This strange man who was her best friend's fianc. She felt guilty. Especially since she was engaged too...something she would just rather forget or undo.

They arrived while she was lost in her thoughts. As Radhika was walking to the door she felt a hand at the small of her back. She shivered slightly...the hand felt quite familiar and warm. She turned around and looked into his eyes. She could not figure this man out...what did he want. If he really wanted to marry Sam then what was he doing with her? Playing with her for some sadistic pleasure...but it really did not feel that way. His eyes were like molten lava. Plus, she could not be that wrong about someone. She was quite good at figuring out what lay beneath the mask everyone in the world seemed to wear. Even if what she was thinking was true, what difference did it make? She had to get rid of whatever was going on between them for Sam. She loved Sam and she couldn't hurt her like that.

Half an hour later they were at the party. Radhika, ever the wallflower, was stuck in a corner watching Sam and Arjun dance together for the past 15 minutes. Something seared in her to life at the sight. A jealousy, a burn that consumed her whole. Her whole being was electric with fire. She wanted to burn the whole place down and cry at the same time. She had never felt like this. She was a very calm, collected, compassionate individual. So she could not understand this feeling. When she could not take the sight anymore, and she was about to turn away, a hand on her shoulder stopped her. She turned around to see none other than Saral.

Radhika had always been taught to be kind to everyone, and to think good things about everyone but if she could be forgiven one sin then she would murder this man. She hated when he touched her, when he commanded her, when he treated her like crap. She was only tolerating him because of her family.

"What are you doing here Saral? I thought you were in Rishikesh."

"I came here to surprise you Radho but you weren't home and then I found out about the party so I came here to see you." After a pause, he continued, "you don't seem to happy to see me. Kisi aur ko expect kar rahi thi kya. Koi aashiq?"

"No Saral. I just wasn't expecting you, that's all."

"Yeah whatever. Chalo dance kare," Saral said.

"No I don't feel like dancing."

But of course he did not listen. He dragged her to the dance floor and had the audacity to tell her to behave. A slow number started to play and Saral came closer to Radhika, something she did not like. She tried to get away but he grabbed her waist roughly and brought her closer. Her chest smashed into his and his hands started to wander. Radhika fought him for a good few minutes but to no avail. Finally she pushed him hard and gave him a tight slap on his ugly face. And, then another slap. Everyone stopped dancing around her. The music stopped and all she heard was silence. And then, Radhika saw a flash of a hand coming to her rapidly. She braced herself for the slap that never came. She looked up to see Arjun throw a punch at Saral. Radhika was not a violent girl but a joy flushed through her when Arjun punched the man. Not just because she hated Saral but because Arjun was the one to do it. He did care.

"How dare you bloody bas***d?" Arjun screamed. "Who the hell do you think you are to come here and treat Radhika this way."

"What is your problem man," Saral said trying to defend himself but Arjun was a little too strong and angry for Saral.

"My problem is that you are an asshole. If I ever see you touch Radhika or even look at her again then I will murder you."

"Kyu, woh meri fiance hai. Mein use touch karo ya kuch bhi karo tumhe kya?" Saral said.

Arjun didn't answer but kept throwing more punches to his face, his abdomen, his shoulder.

"Kya lagti hai woh tumhari?" Saral said.

Arjun still didn't respond.

"I knew it. Bachalan ladki ho tum. Meri peet ke peche tum dono ka chakar chal raha hai na."

"How dare you talk this way to Radhika," Arjun screamed.

"Kya lagti hai woh tumhari."

"Pyaar karta hoon mein usse."

And dead silence...

Radhika's heart leapt out of her chest as she heard that.

Arjun grabbed Radhika's wrist firmly. "If you every come close to Radhika again..." He let his eyes do the talking of the horrors he would inflict on Saral.

Radhika turned to look at Sam who looked like she was the one who had been punched. She wanted to go her but Arjun hauled her out of there.

He took her to her car. "Arjun stop. Kya kar rahe ho. Waha Sam rooh rahi hai."

"I don't care," Arjun said. Radhika tried to get out of his grasp, but he just turned around and lifted her up into his arms and then put her in the car.

He drove her somewhere far away as she tried to tell him to stop and turn around.

He stopped the car in a deserted place, got out, and screamed.

Radhika got out too as she heard another scream.

"Arjun..."

He grabbed her and said "kya chahati hoon tum."

"What the bloody hell do you want. Hamesha Sam, Sam, Sam."

"Arjun I," she tried to say but he cut her off.

"Woh admi tumhe choo raha tha. Tumhe kaisi gandi nazaron se dekh raha tha."

Arjun was boiling with anger. Radhika had to calm him down.

He placed his arms around her waist bringing her closer and murmured with such finality, "tum sirf meri hoon."

"Suna tumne, tum sirf aur sirf meri hoon. Tumhe koi aur dekhe, chue toh muhjse bardasht nahi hota."

Radhika just said shhh...She placed her palms on his cheeks and rested her forehead on his trying to calm him down. A few moments later his breathing returned to normal.

"Tell me that you belong to me."

"I belong to you Arjun."

So here is the last part. Is that red or pink? It's supposed to be red but looks pink. Ha ha..Btw can you tell how much I am loving Saral?? 😆

Anyways sorry about the long wait...was moving apartments and getting injured after hauling stuff up three stories and all. Thankfully I am a student PT and in clinic right now so another PT looked at me!! Isn't that sweet.

Let me know if you like it. Leave comments.

Edited by ---Nisha--- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Amri-

Okay Nisha...I know from experience that grad school is immensely frustrating- deadlines seem to be approaching by the hour, and the sheer volume of the workload makes you want to rip your head off...but yeh dil hai kii maanta nahin. I just have to ask you this, though I feel extremely bad about it.



Is it possible that you can update after having prepared for all your papers and assignments and whatnot? :D


And you turned out to be quite the prophet- you wrote about Radhika in a sari , and mesmerized Arjun, and two episodes later we did get to see it! :) I think you ought to sue the writers for plagiarism. Kasamh se :P


so sorry about the wait. I started writing it like 5 days ago but then my computed crashed and I had not saved it so it all got deleted. It didn't autosave for some strange reason, which it usually does.
So I just typed it up again.
Let me know if you like it. I was struggling while writing this because I didn't know what direction I wanted to take it. Finally decided something and settled on it...hopefully you like it and it was worth the wait.

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