OS Unspoken Desire- Updated pg. 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ---Nisha---


so sorry about the wait. I started writing it like 5 days ago but then my computed crashed and I had not saved it so it all got deleted. It didn't autosave for some strange reason, which it usually does.
So I just typed it up again.
Let me know if you like it. I was struggling while writing this because I didn't know what direction I wanted to take it. Finally decided something and settled on it...hopefully you like it and it was worth the wait.



Wow, that's quite a lot of hard work! And it absolutely sucks when your document fails to save all that you have painstakingly typed.


Reading- will review😳 RES.


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Edited- Yah. And that's how it's done😃


I absolutely loved how Arjun took charge in your story, because I was utterly dismayed by how passive he is in the show. He is shown to be flaring with anger seeing Saral's treatment of Radhika, but he does NOTHING. So this was just a joy to read.


I do hope that when he looks past the revenge that's clouding his sight , he'll take charge similarly and bust Saral's b****. But more than that I want Radhika to stand up for herself, both before Arjun and Saral. And Arjun really needs to clean up his act soon- he can't behave with her like that all the time.


I liked the jealousy bit in the party, and it was funny how sharp Saral is about ArDhika. But otherwise, these episodes were a complete drag. Let's see what happens next.


Brilliant😊 Not to mention poignant. Thanks for considering my request⭐️
Edited by -Amri- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Awesome update! 👏
I would love to see Radhika standing up to that moron like this in the serial too. And I wish Arjun would beat the daylights out of him for mistreating Radhika instead of just giving angry glares. 😡

Loved the update! ❤️

Pleae do continue soon dear. Will be waiting. And please pm me for future updates if possible. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
i loved the way wrote it...
but everything was a little fast.
hope u would write an ss!
Love the starting though! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: -Amri-



Wow, that's quite a lot of hard work! And it absolutely sucks when your document fails to save all that you have painstakingly typed.


Reading- will review😳 RES.


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Edited- Yah. And that's how it's done😃


I absolutely loved how Arjun took charge in your story, because I was utterly dismayed by how passive he is in the show. He is shown to be flaring with anger seeing Saral's treatment of Radhika, but he does NOTHING. So this was just a joy to read.


I do hope that when he looks past the revenge that's clouding his sight , he'll take charge similarly and bust Saral's b****. But more than that I want Radhika to stand up for herself, both before Arjun and Saral. And Arjun really needs to clean up his act soon- he can't behave with her like that all the time.


I liked the jealousy bit in the party, and it was funny how sharp Saral is about ArDhika. But otherwise, these episodes were a complete drag. Let's see what happens next.


Brilliant😊 Not to mention poignant. Thanks for considering my request⭐️

thank you!! Saral is such a jerk...I wish I could deck him. My god he makes me so angry.
And yes of course I wish Arjun would stop being a jerk too.
I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Awesome love the story ❤️
Great to read about Saral getting bashed, I so want to see someone kick him badly on the show, arrogant 🐷
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Nice Chapter Nisha😳
Edited by Nonie12345 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
I am loving the way you are writing.plz continue.waiting for further updates.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
I loved how he confessed his love.. his passion for her something ☺️ sizzling hot OS👏👏 the sad part is this was an OS.. want to read more... can you write another story.
On their married life or something but pls

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