Originally posted by: ---Nisha---
so sorry about the wait. I started writing it like 5 days ago but then my computed crashed and I had not saved it so it all got deleted. It didn't autosave for some strange reason, which it usually does.
So I just typed it up again.
Let me know if you like it. I was struggling while writing this because I didn't know what direction I wanted to take it. Finally decided something and settled on it...hopefully you like it and it was worth the wait.
Wow, that's quite a lot of hard work! And it absolutely sucks when your document fails to save all that you have painstakingly typed.
Reading- will reviewđł RES.
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Edited- Yah. And that's how it's doneđ
I absolutely loved how Arjun took charge in your story, because I was utterly dismayed by how passive he is in the show. He is shown to be flaring with anger seeing Saral's treatment of Radhika, but he does NOTHING. So this was just a joy to read.
I do hope that when he looks past the revenge that's clouding his sight , he'll take charge similarly and bust Saral's b****. But more than that I want Radhika to stand up for herself, both before Arjun and Saral. And Arjun really needs to clean up his act soon- he can't behave with her like that all the time.
I liked the jealousy bit in the party, and it was funny how sharp Saral is about ArDhika. But otherwise, these episodes were a complete drag. Let's see what happens next.
Brilliantđ Not to mention poignant. Thanks for considering my requestâď¸
Edited by -Amri- - 10 years ago