Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(3rd thread)(last chapter @pg66) - Page 8

Originally posted by: ankusanu

oh god what a crap plan jst like dm...
i hate herr 😡 ... hw mean is dat...

i know that yaar... crap DM ki crap planning...🤢
she sent abtu to a brothel 😡...

n raghu is framed fr murdering shettu n madan..

yeah i know... it was so hard to read and even write😭

seriously what a plan !!!! bt i jst loved raghu n dms convo..
❤️ yeass nobody cn take away antu frm raghu..
dey r meant to together 😊...

thats true... our rantara are do dil ek jaan😳
on dms face ...😃 fab update...
ab aayega maza..interesting to see gw
raghu traces antara ... Nice work 👏...
hugsss take care

Originally posted by: AnjaliRantara

Ria🤗
Fantastic update👏👏👏
I loved it very much
DM sold Antu to a brothel keeper😲 😡
Raghu angry young man,cheetah going to fight against DM
Eagerly waiting fr next update😃
Again u called d update a crap😕 😡
Luv u😳

Originally posted by: pampz

Ria u just don know how much talented u r ...wonderful choking suspensewala thrilling update ...waaah ...

nothing compared to u vampire ji... ye too aap ka ashirwad hain ki hum bhi aap ke vampire fang ke dar seee thora bahut likh lete hain..😆

loved how antu was still daring at that worst situation also ...i was expecting that DM wd definitely do this crime with antara ...and she did ...bloody bitch😡

Yup i know.. You don't know pampu how much depressed i was while i was penning down that moment... deep down in my heart i was feeling how much heartless, cruel and awful minded those demons aree who do such things😡.. but i have to do this just to make DM cross all her limits and raghu to turn against her finally😉. but really that part was so so depresing!!

ohh u just don know how much i felt Raghu's worry and how much i cherished Raghu's GRAND escape from the whole battellian of police and DM ...and thank God he understood DM clearly...Bravo Ria Bravo ...what an update ...it was like a breathtaking thriller movie i was watching ...

I know pampi... main raghu ko kaise uss kharmuz DM ke chaal mein fasne deti...😆

loved it cherished it njoyed it to the fullest... i know Raghu wd reach Antara just at the right time ...but still am so scared and worried for her ... so many girls in the whole world r trapped in this ugly human trafficking...hate this oldest business of this world ...

Come Raghu come ...save ur Antara soon ...

lets wait and watch😆

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Ye DM to puri kamini nikali yaar...jo na socha ho wohi karegi ye...

Iss ka kya kare...ye itni problems hai yaar...or sab issi ki vajah se...I m very scared for antara...I hope raghu aa k use bacha le...itni pyaari love story me itna bada patthar...riaaa superb updet...Please raghu ko uski antara dila do...or jaldi update karo...

Kuch apno se bhi kabhi dard aisa milta hai yaaro,

Aasu to paas hote hai per roya nahi jata...!!!!!

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

ye DM kitni badi wali k***** hai yr...DM maar ja jake kahin..

itni giri hui lady hai ye...isko kuch akal waqkl hai ki nhi..!!!!!!!!!!...😡

i know yaar suchi... kamini kahiki😡

Raghu pagalon ki tarh use dhund rha hai.😭...antara is going mad fr him...😭aur usne itni cheap harkat ki...😡.she will pay for this!!!!!!!...aur upr se police ka aana aur upr se maa hone ka drama...????...its a height!!😡

Sachmein yaar... ab sab ko samajh mein ayya ki woo kitna gir sakti hain🤢

raghu got it that she is the culprit...waiting fr next update..now the game has become twists and turns to come.bt ...DM is such a devil she won't loose so easily!!!😡...

tfpm dear..update soon😊

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

ahhh...😭😭😭...itne saare tension ek saath...😔😔😔..main nahi seh sakti...😭😭😭...

...ahhh...Daayan...😡😡😡...i hate her, i hate her, i hate her...🤬🤬🤬...

me 2 hate dayan... arghhh😡😡😡😡😡

Raghu thinkin of gettin his sweet revenge...😔...wen he dint find her..."his Ms.Kaul"...😔😭...

Raghu...u hav to go thru lot...pls..apne aapko sambhalna...

...agr tum kamzhor pad gaye toh Antara ko kaise bachaoge...

true yaar...😭

...tumhe Daayan ke khilaf ladna hai...us Daayan ke 😡...uski toh 🤬🤬🤬

...plz b strong Raghu...Plz b strong...😭...

Aley don't wolly bacha... oul raghu is so stlong...😆

Daayan toh Antu ko maar dal sakti thi...lekin woh toh heroine hai na...isliye yeh hal nikala aapne...Antu ko bechne ka...😔😔😔...un **** ke haathon...

...Antu ...keep calm...Raghu will come to u...(first i hav to calm down...am gettin restless n depressd...)..

seriously... but i can understand.. it happens when you get involved so much😆

The Rise of the Sleeping Lion... (aptly said...)...

haan apna sota huya ser jaag gaya... DM ab tum ddekhti jaon..😆

Dayaan's plan...😡...its like a chakravyuh she's woven so dat none can escape...

ahhh...😡😡😡..Daayan holdin Raghu's face...how dare she touch him...our Raghu...such a pious soul...ahhh😡😡😡...u witch take your dirty filthy hands off him...🤬...

Ab karo saamna... Antara ke Raghu Ka... Daayan...😡🤬...

bilkul sahi kahan yaar... itne din to bas raghu ki wafadaari dekhi hain, abb dekho raghu asalmein hain kya cheez😡

i kno evrythin wil b fine..in d end...but kya karoon updates ke emotions mein beh gayi...

...aap likhthi hi ho aise...

Hats off Ria ji...👍🏼...u r Beyond Words...

chalo yaar ab itni tareef mat karo😆

Aisi koi deewar hi nahi bani jo Raghu ko rok sake...toh yeh police kya cheez hai...😉

sahi kahan boss👏

Yaar aap logone mujhe intense mode mein dala hai...

kya kar sakte hai...aakhir hamaare RaNtara hain bhi toh itne intense...

Koi baat nahi...mera mood toh hamesha updates ke mood pe hota hai...

i think ur goin to end dis 1 soon...its ok...will miss it..but waitin for ur other stories...

...n more n more on ❤️RaNtara❤️......

Kuch zyaada ho gaya...i need to cool down now...

nope yaar it's absolutely f9.. i am overwhelmed by such response🤗

Aakhri mauka tu kya degi Daayan...apne din ginna shuru karde...

...Har ek chot ka gin-gin kar hisaab hoga...Daayan...😡😡😡...

lagta hai maine apni saari frustration nikal di...lekin phir bhi m findin hard to calm down...😔😔😔...Raghu💔...Antara💔🥺...😭😭😭...

Raghu escaped...😊now none can stop him from reachin his Antara...😛...

...Raghu...reach soon...Antu is in a vry vry bad place...

Bullet firin ki...Raghu ko choo bhi na paayi...😛...Go Raghu Go...👍🏼...

Now d downfall of DM starts...🤢...😈...

Banner awesome as usual...👍🏼...

thx a lottt😳

Originally posted by: Afy10

Awesome update 👏
so sad yaar antu kidnapped 😭
raghu was so happy remembering beautiful moments but thn he realized antu is nowhere
dm 😡 hate her most
hw dare she sell antu 😡
poor antu d lady said crapy thing nd antu slapped her
she is really brave nd stuborn.jus like raghu 😃
dm nd their stupid plans her drama
so raghu knws tht dm could do all this..
Great tht he doesnt trust her blindly
police came to arrest raghu
but no1 can evn touch our hero 😉
i hope rantara reunite soon nd raghu teaches dm good lesson 😡
continue soon can't wait to knw wht vil happen 😆
thnx for pm

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Res 😃

Originally posted by: ifians

aa gayi meri nikki no 1🤗

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Yes as always 😆 res bhi pehle ab unres bhi pehle hi karogy 😆