Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(3rd thread)(last chapter @pg66) - Page 7

Ria u just don know how much talented u r ...wonderful choking suspensewala thrilling update ...waaah ...

loved how antu was still daring at that worst situation also ...i was expecting that DM wd definitely do this crime with antara ...and she did ...bloody bitch😡

Ye DM to puri kamini nikali yaar...jo na socha ho wohi karegi ye...

ye DM kitni badi wali k***** hai yr...DM maar ja jake kahin..

ahhh...😭😭😭...itne saare tension ek saath...😔😔😔..main nahi seh sakti...😭😭😭...

aww..us kamini aurat DM ko zinda jala dlo... 😡
awww poor raghu 😭
love antu confident 👏
kya mast update kia hai tumne

Awesome update 👏
so sad yaar antu kidnapped 😭
raghu was so happy remembering beautiful moments but thn he realized antu is nowhere
dm 😡 hate her most
hw dare she sell antu 😡
poor antu d lady said crapy thing nd antu slapped her
she is really brave nd stuborn.jus like raghu 😃
dm nd their stupid plans her drama
so raghu knws tht dm could do all this..
Great tht he doesnt trust her blindly
police came to arrest raghu
but no1 can evn touch our hero 😉
i hope rantara reunite soon nd raghu teaches dm good lesson 😡
continue soon can't wait to knw wht vil happen 😆
thnx for pm

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Riyu yeh kya yar
Aisa update parh key halaat tight hogaye 😆

too maine iss baar hawa tight performance diya kyun?😆
DM aise nikleygi yeh to meine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha 😡
Kamini kahi ki I just hate her 😡 😡

Me 2 yaar even i don't know howw i managed to write that seq🤢
Poor Antara but I myst say uska confidence I love it 😉

issi confidence aur zid pe too apna raghu latto ho gaya😉😆
DM such a 😡
Pata nahi ab Raghu kya kareyga

woo jaan ne ke liye aap ko update parna parega😉
Uski zindagi ko usse doorkarnewala bhagwan ko pyare hojayegy 😆

sachi mein🤣
Bus Antara ko kuch nah hoon warna Raghu to aag laga deyga duniya ko 😭

nikki no 1.. tension nahin lene ka😉... bas tu dekhti jaa😆
Do continuee soon this time
I cant wait to read next update 😉

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

MOST THRILLING UPDATE EVER! 👏

Ria...Kya dhamakedaar tha yeh...omg...I cant still feel goosebumps on my body...😲

Haylaa purple... jaldise lambi saans le le aur apne heartbeat normal kar le..🤣

I think this was best...perfect in every sense...👏👏

thank u ji😳

Loved it! the way Raghu remembered about his passionate night with Antara😳

hmmm that's true

It never clicked into my mind that Raghu would be framed in charges regarding murder of shetty and madan.

really? i thought everyone will get that... but actually no one undeerstood😆 but it was so painful for me to pain down.. you know😭

Nice move baby!👏

thank you😳

So, finally Raghu got to know that DM (🤬) is the mastermind of this atrocious crime.

yup yaar... and he is enough sesible and intelligent to catch that... in this story i neever portrayed raghu as DM's blind supporter, he just works for her just to return his favor for raising him and giving shelter, and when DM reached there all of a sudden just after antara's kidnap and shetty's murder he understood that it was DM's plan, as he knew DM really welll, so i thought he shoukd get that and that's i conveeyed here😊..

my worst fears came true when Dm sold Antara to Kalavati 😡

I don't know how I felt when I read it ...but certainly it would be the worst feeling if someone has to go through these situations especially being a girl.

trust me it really sting inside me like hell... it was so disgusting for me to write that part..🤢.. but what to do?.. i have to follow the storyline na.. and also make DM do thaat nasty works that she cross her all limits and her downfall starts😉

Now I'm curious to know about what will happen next 😉

Please be gentle to me and try n update as soon as you can..😆😆😆

love ya..mwah 🤗

Originally posted by: rima4ever

extraordinary update

i am scared for antara