Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(3rd thread)(last chapter @pg66) - Page 38

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

Awww...that was beautiful!...I think it couldn't have been any better than this.😊Well this was first thought that crossed my mind when I read your latest update.Riyu for me this update was breathtaking.To be very honest it was very soulful.I loved it when Antara was cherishing the moments...feeling contented...feeling loved.Well I guess that how every girl feels when they experience the same with their beloved partners.Again one of the beautiful childhood memories she remembered regarding her mother being pregnant with Ishan.Pregnancy happens to be a very beautiful as well as emotional phase where you need to have support from your loved ones especially your mother and you represented it in a beautiful way.It ached my heart when I saw her missing her dad and looking towards the sky.It felt like she was sharing this beautiful moment with her dad in silence.seriously You made a brilliant connection between Raghu and Dr.Kaul.

Thanks purple... glad to know that u liked it. 😳 I have not much idea about the pregnancy phase.. but one thing i know that a woman should havee utmost care during the pregnancy from each and everyone from her family. from her partner from her mother and father. i think from everyone... so i think antara must be missing all those things as she was all allobe when she get the news of her pregnancy. Nancy was there to support her but at that phase a girl desperately needed her loved once, her family... so i thought to add that moment where she was missing her mother... and then comes the idea in my mind that antara must have saw her mother during the phase when geeta was pregnant with her brother ishan. sp just added some moment of her childhood memory.. and obviously she must be missing her dad... she was the closest to her dad all the time... before raghu he was teh only one who could understand her the way she was... but she was not depressed or sad at the moment when she remembered her father that time... it was serene happy moment when a daughter was sharing the happiness of her life's fullfillment with her dad who was always in her heart.. as her strength,.. just tried to explain those things and i hope i passed my exam anyhow..😆

connection between raghu and Dr Kaul.. weell said..😆😳

"iss sharam se naa mera woo bachpan se locha hain"

"Caller Tune"

...are you serious??? 😆OMG it was the most hilarious part of the update.Tears rolled outta my eyes by laughing on reading that name.

No actually i was thinking that what should raghu call their unborn baby. and u know his unusual namekaran style😆.. so something related to misscall it came out as caller tune in my mind..😆

When cab took the U-turn...omg..omg..omg it was amazing to see how securely Raghu embraced Antara.The way he held his hand in front of her tummy was overwhelming.😳I loved his protective gesture towards their unborn child.

I know yaar... And now he know that he had huge responsibility to his life antara and the symbol of life growing inside her everyday.. the concern should be doubled...😉

Wow! A beautiful cottage to stay ...for the night of their re-union...awww...very romantic 😳

Unbelievable Riyu! 😆😆😆

now what have i done yaar which looked unbelivble?!!😆

S*xual intimacy during pregnancy phase is something very important to know.Like till which trimester you can get intimate with your partner.I'm happy to know that you are using all valuable points in your story.It really creates a difference and awareness among the masses...😊

Haha,,, i know u will be commenting in the thing. u are medical student and u must be knowing the facts well than all of us. 😆.. well thank you. u won't believe that for this whole time i was googling about pregnancy, it's side effect... 😆... and how should a girl and her partner intaract while tehy were getting intimate in that phase.. i mean how much intimacy can't be harmful for baby.. etc etc... few...😆.,... kya kya nahin jaan naa par raha hain iss story ke liye...🤣

OMG!...black net saree...😆that was freaking awesome Riyu...!

He he i know...😆

loved the way You ended the chapter following their intense re-union.😉

My readers will follow me with their danda if i don't show any romance in GAG's single update..🤣

it was fantastic...beyond any perfection👏

I loved your banner too 😆

Thx again😳

pls do update soon

sending loads of love and wishes...mwah 🤗

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

Chptr 63 (contd):😆...😃...

yeh lo...... Antu phir girne waali thi...😲...Thank god Raghu ne phir bacha liya...(...hush...phewww...)...as always...😊...😃...👍🏼...

He is always there to catch her... no matter what😆

...Antu drooling......😳...n Raghu being in full naughty mode...😉...

...Antu nervousiya rahi hai...☺️...aur Raghu enjoying...😉...😃...

Yup... he loves teasing her and he was totally aware about the effect he had for her😉

...Antu ne saree pehen hi li...😳...

Yup... Yedi antu ne saree pahen li...😆

n d convo...was tooo...i don't kno hw shud i explain it...speechlesss...👏...👍🏼...

...d deep intense feelings...d pain n suffering dey went thru...i just relived it...

...n den dey drowned in each other...feeling each n evry nerve of d other...

...just left me in awe...n dazed...😳...

Aww thanks re...😳

Wonderful portrayal Ria...👏...just stunning n marvelous...👏...👏...👏...

..Keep it up yaara...👍🏼...

thx..

only 2 updates more...😲...😔...hope it wud b long...if not den atleast i need 4 more chapters frm u...😊...😃...

i really really want to see RaNtara living wid deir baby...may b until d baby is 2-3 yrs or 5-6 yrs...n d way dey go thru dis journey... living deir parenthood...😳...

...no pressures though...i know whatever u pen down...u'll do justice to it fully......😎...👍🏼...

will try my best... thanks yaar🤗

Waiting eagerly for ur updates...😃......Forum ki Star ⭐️ cum RaNtara Specialist 😳 ...😃...😊...

Arey nahin re... forum ki ⭐️ too hum sab yediyan hain...😉

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Update karo nah paro 😆

Originally posted by: ifians

ruko chandramukhi ji pahel khatam too karne doo..😆

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Hehehe ok 😃

Originally posted by: ifians

actually i was a bit confused about a scene.. i can't decide that i should include that or not😆

btw yaar.,.. pg 39 mein pmpz ki reply kar.. larki ne mujhe sachmein crack kr diyaa uski reply se..🤪