Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(3rd thread)(last chapter @pg66) - Page 37

Originally posted by: ankusanu

what an update !!!!! 👍🏼
jst loved it botu rokantic n hilarious 😉
🤣...
oh god raghu went back to katherine to...
ask her if he cld make love to antara even in
her pregnancy... seriously i ws like 😲...
antara se zyada yoh i ws shocked..raghu
bh na 😉...
n what ws d name of baby ... caller tune 🤣 🤣
like seriously modern n so high tech name na 😆...
RIA kahan se aateh tujhe yeh sab ideas dear...
koi special diet 😛...
mast update as usual romantic part ws so good..
make readers blush tooo...fr me ur d
romantic queen ...
love fr dis fab stry...
though sad to read it gonna end soon too...
anyways part of life...
grt update ...
👏 👏...

tkcrrr hugsss love yaa

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

Chptr 63:

Raghu waapas gaya Dr se milne...errr...i mean sawaal poochne aur apne doubts clear karne...😉...😳...☺️...

lol... i know... that part looks stupid... i thought to scrap that, but couldn't at last moment..🤣

Antu rmmbrng her childhood days n also missing all of them...😊...

(...wow ria...😊...hw beautifully u portay all these subtle moments...👏...e1 if i tell this countless times it wont suffice...😃...)...

thank you 😳

...connecting her paapa's ishaara...👍🏼...👏...

...her thoughts wen she got to know d news d previous day...😊...n den wen all went well as Raghu arrived...😃...

...everything just beautifully woven in d narration...😊...bowing down...👍🏼...n hats off to you...😃...)...

thx again...😃

RaNtara in each others arms...😳...

haan.. i know how it feels..

...sharam se Raghu ka bachpan se locha hai...😆...haan pata chal raha hai hamein...😉...😳...

Raghu toh car mein hi shuru...😲...thoda toh control kar yaar...😉...😆...

LImit ka gunda ab limitless ho gaya hain.. no control...😆

...back to ajji's village...yay......main soch hi rahi thi k wer will dey go...🤔...but ria ji hai toh kaheki fikar...😃...she needs lots of care...aaji's experienced care...😊...👍🏼...

true...😳

...i guess Raghu bana police ka khabri...😉...hats off to ur creative ideas...👏...

so u caught that haann😆... no one noticed tht rather than you... u really have sharp eyes i would say😎

haaye...😳...Besharam Raghu...😳...Antu toh sharm se paani-pani ho gayi...😳...Raghu ke Dr se sawaal ke...☺️...

Aisey sawal pucchenga yeda too yedi kya karein?!! waisey hi humaari yedi blush queen hain.😆

(but she shud b knowing dis na...🤔...Dr. ki beti jo hai...😉...😆...

Haan par Dr Kaul apni beti se aise topic par disscussion karengey??😲 yaar apna raghu besharam hain.. par Dr Kaul too nahin naa... kuch too khayal karo unke repo kaa🤣)...

...lagta hai Raghu ko hamesha Antu ki maar khani paregi...😆...

...(...kyunki...woh toh sudhrega nahi...😉...😆...)...😳...

Bil kul sahi kahan...😆

oh god ria...wer do u get ideas from...misscall ka caller tune...😆...🤣...Raghu ekdum yeda...aur hum bhi...😆...

Woo yeda aur hum sab yedi...😆

...ok...toh yeh cottage ka intezaam Shivani k zariye hai...😉...😊...

Who else rather than our gr8 shivani...😉

ria...dil khush kar ditaa...❤️...🤗...Waiting 4 d coming parts......😊...

(P.S: Have u visitd Nilgiri's...???...

Nope😆... just saw the pics of the place, sab google baba kaa ashirwad hain😆)...

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

loved it.loved it..loved it...!!!!! ❤️literally yaar..such a beautiful update dear.👏...kya nazaara tha..kya scene tha..u described whole scenerio so nicely..main to usi mein kho gayi.....antara is so happy..jitni gumsum thi ab utni hi sumsum ho gayi😳..raghu ne to kamaal kr diya..dhoti faad ke rumaaal kr diya!!!..kathrine se sab enquiry kr dali..waah mere hero..tussi great ho!!!.😆...caller tune is nice name yr..mujhe achcha laga😆...so .lovely romantic moment...lovely rantara...they will go to ajji's place!!😃

aww last two chaps r left.. 😔

thanks fr updating..huggee update😃

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Outstanding update riaaa...

Pehle raghu ki miss call...

Or ab raghu ka caller tune...😆

Antu ka uss k baby s ka cobvo was superb...

Ye raghu naughty to tha hi ab besharam bhi ho gaya hai...

Very nice and long update...I love it...

Ye mera ishq tha ki dewangi ki inteha,

Tere hi kareeb se gujar gaya tere hi khayal main...!!!!

Originally posted by: pampz

first of all today am gonna talk abt ur banners which i always miss in my reviews ...ok they r simply awesome ... it tickles the heart with lots of passion tenderness and love ...cant explaing thoroughly what i does each time before going thru ur updates ...😉😆😳

kya??😲... hatho se tickle karna suna tha yee photo se kaise tickle karte hain??🤣

coming to ur review dear ... let me tell u this time ur update really quenched my thirst Vampu's thirst u know ...it was a long soulful deep emotional update. i think u r planning to make this vampire go dumb one day ...yeh kya phirse tune mujhe wohi speechless wala feeling dediya ...i hv gone thru ur update long ago but cdnt write a review as it filled my heart with tremendous bliss and contentment ...there was no space left for anything else. 😃

Nahin yar... tu dumb mat hoo naa... 😆... tu dumb nahin ho sakti... i love my hungry pampy the vampy.. not chup chao gum sum si vampy... so keep drinking ur juice...🤣

Riyu what to say ...starting from there whn Raghu said he had locha in getting sharmofying to where he called his baby callertune ...truely and henestly speaking isse achha name to Rantara baby ke aur kuch ho hi nahi sakta ...i appreciate Raghu's Naamkaran of his baby ...waah waah kya dimag paya hai Raghu ne ...lollzzz

Raghu aur uske naam karan... to iss sey achaa naam too woo soch hi nahin sakta unke baby ke liyee😆

and yes the typical Raghuish Language and the intensity in them can be drawn by u only Riyu ...mindblowing and wonderful ...i loved the babytalikng of Antu and Raghu both ...

Aww thank you😳

i loved how they started their all alone new life in that awesome heavenly place ...i loved how u potrayed the devine feeling of Rantara for becoming a wd be parent...the baby came with lots of bliss and blessings in Rantara's life .

True😃

hv cherished it nurtured it in my mind the whole update atleast a hundred times ...Riyu what u hv done u know Kamenee??????

maine kya kiya??😲

u hv serged a dangerous crave n urge in me to feel the pregnancy ...😡😲😳

KYAA????... KYA???.... KYYYAAA???????!!!!!!!!!

...i mean how it feels how it looks and ofcourse how it is enjoyable with the ultimate man of ur life ...

oye oye.. yedi thumba thumba... ye sab kya soch rahi hain tu??😆... apni yedi dimag koo control kar... itna bhi acha likha nahin hain maine... u don;t know i am so much clueless about this linds of things... that how does it feel...the feeling of a would be mother and love of her partneers.. i seriously doeesn;t have slightest idea that what emotion an woman go through in this phase... iss liye itne dino se main iss pee google kar rahi thi.. god... rantara aur unki stories ke liye kya kya karna parta hain... par google mein bhi kitn pata cchalta hain yaar... usme too bas symptoms and terms hota hain... feeling kahan pe definee kiya jata hain?... iss liye joo mere man mein ayya maine likh diya... aur iska aisa effect???🤪

lol... mujhe aise scenes dubara nahin likhne hahiye i guess.. mujeh aise khatarnaak results ki hope nahin thiii🤓sorry just kidding🤣

but alas ...uparse giri aur hosh mein ayi ...i don hv any Raghu with me 😲how can i fulfill such a dream ...???? Hawww you kamenee yedi kya kya apne readers ko dream karneme majboor kar deti ho????

Sorry yaar... main bas yahun duya kar sakti hoon ki tumhe bhi ekdi tumhara raghu mil jayeim... jooo tumhe duniya kisari khusiyan de...😳

LOLLZZZ luv u yedi Riyu ...i hv never thot abt or dreamt abt this before ...u made me do so ///hatts off to ur awesome wonderly heavenly writting ...

keep on writng and writing and writing ...

Tere bheje gayi writer bhoot aur purrple ki jiuce ke badaulat wohi karti jaa rahi hoon...🤣

luv YOU dear ... be blessed with love and happy health always 😃

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

Chptr 63 (contd):😆...😃...

yeh lo...... Antu phir girne waali thi...😲...Thank god Raghu ne phir bacha liya...(...hush...phewww...)...as always...😊...😃...👍🏼...

...Antu drooling......😳...n Raghu being in full naughty mode...😉...

...Antu nervousiya rahi hai...☺️...aur Raghu enjoying...😉...😃...

...Antu ne saree pehen hi li...😳...

n d convo...was tooo...i don't kno hw shud i explain it...speechlesss...👏...👍🏼...

...d deep intense feelings...d pain n suffering dey went thru...i just relived it...

...n den dey drowned in each other...feeling each n evry nerve of d other...

...just left me in awe...n dazed...😳...

Wonderful portrayal Ria...👏...just stunning n marvelous...👏...👏...👏...

..Keep it up yaara...👍🏼...

only 2 updates more...😲...😔...hope it wud b long...if not den atleast i need 4 more chapters frm u...😊...😃...

i really really want to see RaNtara living wid deir baby...may b until d baby is 2-3 yrs or 5-6 yrs...n d way dey go thru dis journey... living deir parenthood...😳...

...no pressures though...i know whatever u pen down...u'll do justice to it fully......😎...👍🏼...

Waiting eagerly for ur updates...😃......Forum ki Star ⭐️ cum RaNtara Specialist 😳 ...😃...😊...

Originally posted by: ifians

thank you andy for ur maginifying glass review..😆.. everything U saw clearly😉...

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

thanks for replying...🤗...