Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(3rd thread)(last chapter @pg66) - Page 36

first of all today am gonna talk abt ur banners which i always miss in my reviews ...ok they r simply awesome ... it tickles the heart with lots of passion tenderness and love ...cant explaing thoroughly what i does each time before going thru ur updates ...😉😆😳

Originally posted by: pampz

first of all today am gonna talk abt ur banners which i always miss in my reviews ...ok they r simply awesome ... it tickles the heart with lots of passion tenderness and love ...cant explaing thoroughly what i does each time before going thru ur updates ...😉😆😳

coming to ur review dear ... let me tell u this time ur update really quenched my thirst Vampu's thirst u know ...it was a long soulful deep emotional update. i think u r planning to make this vampire go dumb one day ...yeh kya phirse tune mujhe wohi speechless wala feeling dediya ...i hv gone thru ur update long ago but cdnt write a review as it filled my heart with tremendous bliss and contentment ...there was no space left for anything else. 😃

Riyu what to say ...starting from there whn Raghu said he had locha in getting sharmofying to where he called his baby callertune ...truely and henestly speaking isse achha name to Rantara baby ke aur kuch ho hi nahi sakta ...i appreciate Raghu's Naamkaran of his baby ...waah waah kya dimag paya hai Raghu ne ...lollzzz

and yes the typical Raghuish Language and the intensity in them can be drawn by u only Riyu ...mindblowing and wonderful ...i loved the babytalikng of Antu and Raghu both ...

i loved how they started their all alone new life in that awesome heavenly place ...i loved how u potrayed the devine feeling of Rantara for becoming a wd be parent...the baby came with lots of bliss and blessings in Rantara's life .

hv cherished it nurtured it in my mind the whole update atleast a hundred times ...Riyu what u hv done u know Kamenee??????

u hv serged a dangerous crave n urge in me to feel the pregnancy ...😡😲😳...i mean how it feels how it looks and ofcourse how it is enjoyable with the ultimate man of ur life ...

but alas ...uparse giri aur hosh mein ayi ...i don hv any Raghu with me 😲how can i fulfill such a dream ...???? Hawww you kamenee yedi kya kya apne readers ko dream karneme majboor kar deti ho????

LOLLZZZ luv u yedi Riyu ...i hv never thot abt or dreamt abt this before ...u made me do so ///hatts off to ur awesome wonderly heavenly writting ...

keep on writng and writing and writing ...

luv YOU dear ... be blessed with love and happy health always 😃

loved it.loved it..loved it...!!!!! ❤️literally yaar..such a beautiful update dear.👏...kya nazaara tha..kya scene tha..u described whole scenerio so nicely..main to usi mein kho gayi.....antara is so happy..jitni gumsum thi ab utni hi sumsum ho gayi😳..raghu ne to kamaal kr diya..dhoti faad ke rumaaal kr diya!!!..kathrine se sab enquiry kr dali..waah mere hero..tussi great ho!!!.😆...caller tune is nice name yr..mujhe achcha laga😆...so .lovely romantic moment...lovely rantara...they will go to ajji's place!!😃

aww last two chaps r left.. 😔

thanks fr updating..huggee update😃

Originally posted by: honeybees22

amazing update ri i loved it

ending soon??😭 aww anyways next one is always there na?

pls cont asap

Originally posted by: liana2304

Wow .

That update is really nice .

Loved it .

Thank you .

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Phewww riyu sach mein it was a long update but I enjoyed it alot 😳

aww...🤗
Hayeee mere Rantara ek bar phir saath saath hai

haan ree humari rantara sath sath hii sab se ache hain
Antu's convo with the baby was too cute 😳 and bachpaan mein kaise sawal pochty thy yedi 😆

Ab samajh mein ayya kii woo bachpan se hi full too yedi hain...🤣
Sach mein Antu ki life ki yeh sabse bari khushi hai jo usse Raghu ne di 😃
She is very lucky actually they both are lucky 😆

true..😳
Arey wah Rantara in cottage woh bhi Antu in that same black saree 😳
Riyu tune mast plan banaya hamare bhooke se Raghu ko phasane ka han, Antu ko sari mein dekha or Raghu to lattoo hogaya 😆 😆

Raghu jab bhi antu koo dekhta hain tab hi latto ho jata hain... chahein jo bhi hoo😆
After all one month key baad mile thora romance to banta hai

haan woo too hain.😉 aur agar maine itne sad chapters ke baad romance nahin dikhaya too mere readers mucjhe nahin chorengey😆... unme se ek too danda le ke mere pihe ayegi.. u know who..🤣
The most funniest was Raghu doctor se poochne gaya tha OMG 🤣
Yeda kahi ka 😆 😆

Yede ka kuch nahin ho sakta...🤣
Love you riyu for such a wonderful update 🤗
Aghr mujhe pehle pata hota key juice peene key baad tu aise update deygi to mein roz tujhe juice deyty or next update key liye juices bhej rehe hoon 😆 😆

well main ab kya kahoo... pilati jaa,,,🤣

Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary

I recently read this ff of urs n i want say that u r an amazing writer n storyteller...u exactly know wat ur reader want to read...
i hv bcum fan of ur writing n story..
U r just fab...
and the chapter was just amazing...
I luved this besharm raghu..
i luved the part where raghu called their baby caller tune n they started fighting ohh god !! Raghu n his weird ideas i m still laughing at their cute fight..
In short it was mindblowing update
Will be waiting for next update