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Anjali

@AnjaliAnand

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Awesome update Ria 😃
Raghu got clue about Antara frm d kids
Antara in so much pain coz of her Mamaji
DM 😡
Hope Raghu finds Antu soon
Continue soon 😊

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pampz

@pampz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#142

first of all Ria tere kaan ke niche na mein zorose bajaungi agar tune firse tere updates ko crap kaha toh ...😡😡😡

second of all am enjoying this track wih my evry bit of passion and restlessness ...ohh its wonderful seeing this seperation ...(don take it otherwise) mee to dukhi for Rantara but the story is so gripping and thrilling i just cant breath for once until i finish reading the update fully ...

wonderful Ria wonderful ...the most Captivating Story of this Forum👏👏👏👏👏

u hv just made me a MAD VAMPU for ur story ...

again the ball is now in DM's court ...kamini ko Raghu ka number pata chal gaya ...jane aage kya hoga aabh...

and the bbestpart is Raghu ne andaza laga liya ki uski Antara kahan hai n mama ke hathon bandi hai ...oye hoye Ria ...am fascinated how u penned down the total emotional stuffs so excruciatingly ...lovely lovely ...

waiting for the next part being a Mad Crazy Vampu ...jaldi update kar warna ...pata hai na apun kya kya kar sakti hai ????😆😉😉😉

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

this update made me feel good that atlast he got some clue regarding antara...so many days passed away still he was clueless about antara..that where she is?..how she is?...😔bt still he had faith that she is still alive...that anklet scene is very touching...antara ko to mamaji ne hi kaid krke rakh liya🤢..atleast she is safe...DM's new strategy she will again grow obstructions in his path😡...this lady is such a big ...@#$@#$+-*/@#+-$#*-+..😡...now raghu will be on way to Ahemdabad...hmm..interesting!update soon😊

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angelofdreams

@angelofdreams

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Kya faddu super hit update tha loved it
Ek toh uss dayan pein ghussa aa raha hai sabse phele ussko maaro 😡 😡
But at last raghu ko antu ka pata lag gaya
Hope so woh jaldi reach kare antu ke paas
Bechari ka bahut bura hal hai
Once again superb
Update next chapter asap

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priyanka

@ankusanu

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

wowww so happy raghu finally got a hint bout antara 😃...
yeahhh hope he sooon reaches her 😊...n yes
both r missing eachother soo much 😭...
n dat dm phr use raghu ka naya no mil gy 😡...
hmmm hope in nxt update we get rantara back sooon
grt update ria..loved it...keep writting...
all d best takecare

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Hina Kamran

@honeybees22

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

wowowowowo

fantastic update RI

loved it

pls cont asap

mama to gaya lol

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Andrea D'Souza (Andy)

@RaNtara4vr

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

part 57:

Phewww...wat an update...👍🏼👏

Raghu so much tensed...😔

Antu escapd wid d kids help...👍🏼

wohow...Antu reachd to saroj in ahmedabad...

arey yeh kya maamaji toh gusse mein hai...😲...he slappd Antu...😲😔...

can undrstnd maamaji's reaction but she's already goin thru so much...😔😭😔...

for maama ❤️Raghu❤️ is just a gunda...😭...

Antu defendin Raghu n deir relationship...👍🏼...She wont tolerate anything against her Raghu...😊...She'll alwaz support n b der for him no matter wat...😃😳...(n vice-versa from Raghu's side too...😳😊...)...

Maamaji lockin up Antara...😲...he thinkin Geetaji forcefully agreed......

waitin for Raghu to come soon...😊...n also for d whole family to whole-heartedly accept dem...😃...

update n banner awesome as alwayz...👍🏼❤️🤗...

my eyes got moist n i was about to cry...but controlld...coz Raghu will reach to Antara...😊...n thinkin dat thru dese kids Raghu wil get clue of Antu...(baaki toh writer saahiba ki marzi...)...😃😆...

Part 58:

Ok...hide n seek goin on...😛😆😉...

Raghu hidin around Ahmedabad area...😉...

though Antu is locked by maamaji...but atleast she's safe...

haan...Raghu ke bina Antara kaise thik ho sakti hai...????...

Both are yearning for one another...😔...😔...

oye-hoye guddu gave d good news...😆...

Raghu ka tez dimag chalne laga...nahi daudne laga...aur...

Oh no...😲.. guddu pakda gaya.....aur daayan ke haath laga Raghu ka numbr......jo ab police ke haath lagegi...(*bangin head*)...(Guddu vry bad, not good at all...👎🏼...u had to b alert guddu...😒...)...(...lagta hai mujhe guddu naam kuch zyada hi pasand aa gaya...😆...)...

yay......Raghu pahunch gaya ahmedabad ki taraf...👍🏼..aur maama-maami ka connection bhi jhod liya......hamara ❤️Raghu❤️ toh superrr-se-bhi-uparrr intelligent hai...😎......😳...

...Waitin for more...👍🏼...

update n banner awesome as alwayz...👍🏼❤️🤗...

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Bichad k tujse ab muje marna hai

Ye tajurba isi zindagi main karna hai...

Dono updates mene saath me padhe riaaa...and I must say it was fabulous...too good...thank god antara jaise taise bhaag gayi but raghu was ao tense...poor love birds...kitni bandishe...dm, shetty, or ab mama ji...now raghu know where is antara...wo jaldi hi usse lene jayega ahemdabad...mann chala mann chala teri or...Please update soon...

And this one is my fav...mene nahi likha hai but I love it... (Credit: son of sardar )

Khuda kare zindagi main ye Mukaam aaye,

Tuje bhool ne ki dua karu or Dua main Tera naam aaye...!!!!!

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Purple

@PurpleSunset

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

separation is something which draws you more closer to the person you are in love with.

I know its heart wrenching to see them separated but to be very honest I'm loving this phase of their life.
Please don't be offended but that's how I feel.Now as they are separated for days, you can see the untamed passion growing between them.
Their lives are turned upside down but they both are not giving a damn to the surroundings...all they are yearning for one glimpse of each other.

I can surely now understand DM's evil intentions and to what extent she's gonna go.The way she framed Raghu in murder charges and is helping police in catching him is making me puke at her.🤢 I mean why so much desperation is hovering on her????

'Insomnia' is the first symptom of separation and surely it makes a person's life hell!

Wow! Ria..its something different this time, the way story is turning is making me curious at each n every step.

Idiot DM, doesn't she understand that Raghu ko pakadna mushkil hi nahi namumkin hai...😆

I loved these lines from the update...

"Tu fikar mat kar misscall! Apun tere ko dhoond lega.. Uss dayan ne tujhe jahan bhi chupaya hain naa, apun wohi pauch jayega... Bas thira sa wait kar le antara!! apun aa re la hain."

"Tu apna khayal rakh rahi hain naa misscall?!! Dekh agar tune apna khayal nahin rakha naa... tab apun zoro ka dante gaa tujhe?!! samjhi?!! Tujhe apna khayal rakhna higa misscall... apun ke liye... tuu kaise bhool jati hain ki apun ko takleef hoti hain jab tu takleef mein hota hain..."

"joo katna tha mere koo karna tha.,.. ussey kyun takleef di... mere kali zindagi ka saya uspe kyun parne diya?!! Apun ne humesha koshis ki misscall ko inn sab se door rakhne ke liye... uski kya galti hain?!! joo bhi galti ki apun nee ki... apun ki galti ki saza antara ko kyun mil raha hain?!!"

These lines were so beautifully written that you can feel the pain inside your heart.
Could you believe that,a lump formed in my throat while reading these lines.😔

The way she called Raghu and he snapped open his eyes only depicted deep connection of their hearts with their souls.He fought with his Bappa too just for her.

What I don't understand is that Why Mamaji has Antara under House arrest when he knows she is already married to him and he surely will come to take her.
when he knows he is no match to Raghu's strengh then why he's becoming so admant?...In a way its good because Antara is safe there but still her mamaji is getting on my nerves.😆

So at last Raghu came to know that DM sold Antara to Kalavati for mere Rs.2 lac Rupees and antara escaped from their clutches on highway with the help of Raju and chutki (Hope their names are inspired from Indian cartoon series 'Chota Bheem'} 🤣

Again twist in the tail...'guddu' got caught😡...ab aayega mazaa..oh babe its fully thrilling...

Finally he understood where she might be...The only hope 😳

I loved it baby!...I told you before also that you are gonna rock it!

It was mind boggling...it was mind blowing...it was Outstanding.

do continue soon this time.

love ya...mwah 🤗

P.s:- I got to read this word "hahmedabad
" quiet a number of times in your update today..Is it your favorite place??😳

Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago